tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post6164876455527508974..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #46Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77328022185030177872008-07-24T16:57:00.000-04:002008-07-24T16:57:00.000-04:00Dang. One last rest stop did kill him. I liked t...Dang. One last rest stop did kill him. I liked the brute at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10413096603000426322008-07-20T16:42:00.000-04:002008-07-20T16:42:00.000-04:00Woah!Now who would have thought of that? :)Very cr...Woah!Now who would have thought of that? :)<BR/><BR/>Very creative!Poor li'l buggy though.Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59614817442445817412008-07-19T20:18:00.000-04:002008-07-19T20:18:00.000-04:00ooooooo nice twist, thank youooooooo nice twist, thank youlaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77817121226717590792008-07-19T13:30:00.000-04:002008-07-19T13:30:00.000-04:00Just once I'd like to see a bug survive the plight...Just once I'd like to see a bug survive the plight of the grill, or windshield, or flyswatter, or... Still, Lenny's demise did not come without merit. Nice read.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45257688207962342812008-07-19T13:27:00.000-04:002008-07-19T13:27:00.000-04:00Aerin's right. I loved all the subtle hints with ...Aerin's right. I loved all the subtle hints with your word-play.Missyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16638784910676212171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13377878137433990572008-07-18T18:23:00.000-04:002008-07-18T18:23:00.000-04:00What I like about this piece is that it's very tig...What I like about this piece is that it's very tight. You use every word well, doubling and tripling meanings to lead the reader astray (call of nature - bwahahahahaha in retrospect I think that is SO funny!!!), and yet when the end happens, there's no question as to what just took place. If the writing had been less sure, more wobbly, the end could have a had a "what the hell was that about" sort of feeling. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8947876395620309972008-07-18T09:31:00.000-04:002008-07-18T09:31:00.000-04:00Thanks everyone for your comments. They are inspi...Thanks everyone for your comments. They are inspiring. Can't wait till the next contest.Mr. Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16881870850519509380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-41894240146829955762008-07-18T02:54:00.000-04:002008-07-18T02:54:00.000-04:00fargin awesome!fargin awesome!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5097372158836275872008-07-17T17:54:00.000-04:002008-07-17T17:54:00.000-04:00What a surprise, Lenny was a bug! Didn't see that ...What a surprise, Lenny was a bug! Didn't see that comic... ;o)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82461175773204540012008-07-16T18:26:00.000-04:002008-07-16T18:26:00.000-04:00You squished him! Great fun - I was totally with ...You squished him! Great fun - I was totally with you for the ride!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27105700262222737702008-07-16T16:22:00.000-04:002008-07-16T16:22:00.000-04:00Yo! The famous Mr. T is back in print. Love that...Yo! The famous Mr. T is back in print. Love that trick you played at the end. Good to see you around again.<BR/><BR/>By the way, I caught that Smoky and the Bandit reference...Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51069043110148063622008-07-16T14:48:00.000-04:002008-07-16T14:48:00.000-04:00It's so cute (I mean aside from poor Lenny the bug...It's so cute (I mean aside from poor Lenny the bug dying at the end)! I love the perspective.24crayonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07171296576635888502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71127456306370347992008-07-16T13:57:00.000-04:002008-07-16T13:57:00.000-04:00So great! The tragic epic of bug v. grill. :) I lo...So great! The tragic epic of bug v. grill. :) <BR/><BR/>I love that the story was genuinely exciting and compelling. And that the last paragraph released the tension in such a novel, funny way. Very enjoyable.<BR/><BR/>Great writing, too.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37596846948483093992008-07-16T13:09:00.000-04:002008-07-16T13:09:00.000-04:00It's a Bug's Life. :)It's a Bug's Life. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17408493083215105292008-07-16T11:07:00.000-04:002008-07-16T11:07:00.000-04:00oh my gosh...Lenny was the bug. Poor Lenny. Nicely...oh my gosh...Lenny was the bug. Poor Lenny. Nicely done. I liked this.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-575483936848104812008-07-16T10:25:00.000-04:002008-07-16T10:25:00.000-04:00I was going to say what Sheri said... -RitaI was going to say what Sheri said... -RitaMy crazy lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05631522969768435267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85919782106942614482008-07-16T10:22:00.000-04:002008-07-16T10:22:00.000-04:00'one last rest stop won't kill me' Ah, the foresha...'one last rest stop won't kill me' Ah, the foreshadowing famous last words...Sheri Perl-Oshinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08025716805041579831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28093210302767638462008-07-16T10:10:00.000-04:002008-07-16T10:10:00.000-04:00Karlan, it's so awesome seeing you do one of these...Karlan, it's so awesome seeing you do one of these contests. Cute take on the picture like a futuristic Bug's Life!Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.com