tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post6516882060846272371..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #59Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15166202023665331652007-08-07T22:05:00.000-04:002007-08-07T22:05:00.000-04:00The voice is strong and distinct. I also liked th...The voice is strong and distinct. I also liked the choice of description. Tight, great writing.<BR/><BR/>High marks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-50138803211907484472007-08-04T10:28:00.000-04:002007-08-04T10:28:00.000-04:00Blown away like smoke.Very nice imagery.Well done....Blown away like smoke.<BR/>Very nice imagery.<BR/>Well done.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53642992106777786912007-08-03T04:30:00.000-04:002007-08-03T04:30:00.000-04:00quite imaginative, although a bit disturbing. I li...quite imaginative, although a bit disturbing. I liked the way the elements, cigarette, tree(s), sky around were woven into the story.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16234645690670856742007-08-02T11:42:00.000-04:002007-08-02T11:42:00.000-04:00I really like "the sky twisting and disappearing" ...I really like "<I>the sky twisting and disappearing</I>" - most excellent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75477186759212558592007-08-02T10:37:00.000-04:002007-08-02T10:37:00.000-04:00Great story.Great story.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29436827370350442022007-08-02T03:41:00.000-04:002007-08-02T03:41:00.000-04:00Great imagery, good voice. Well done!Great imagery, good voice. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48084945809550948822007-08-01T19:48:00.000-04:002007-08-01T19:48:00.000-04:00There's a lot in this short piece - jaded modern m...There's a lot in this short piece - jaded modern man getting lost in nature and confronting himself. Good work.Khon Laohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13875982601155520479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64994700248397422522007-08-01T14:41:00.000-04:002007-08-01T14:41:00.000-04:00Very vivid and poetic.Very vivid and poetic.Enchanted by Bookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05939494712100587128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63259260660190085962007-08-01T11:46:00.000-04:002007-08-01T11:46:00.000-04:00Nice visualsNice visualsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19481829444003389232007-08-01T11:38:00.000-04:002007-08-01T11:38:00.000-04:00Wonderful visuals here. Loved the ciggy being exti...Wonderful visuals here. Loved the ciggy being extinguished, and the sky twisting, the leaves lifting. Beautifully written, and elegiac, too. I hope for death to be like this!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.com