tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post7311875927966991814..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #57Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56879305393017152012011-07-31T11:09:32.343-04:002011-07-31T11:09:32.343-04:00That was seriously sweet. I imagine he was waitin...That was seriously sweet. I imagine he was waiting for a long time. I especially liked the pacing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48247235563980395972011-07-25T16:40:29.035-04:002011-07-25T16:40:29.035-04:00Bruce - this is beautiful. I love that his patien...Bruce - this is beautiful. I love that his patient vigil was rewarded with the reunion. The romantic in me is very grateful to you for that.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91099870228917460602011-07-25T10:29:48.155-04:002011-07-25T10:29:48.155-04:00What a beautiful story. I am a sucker for a happy ...What a beautiful story. I am a sucker for a happy ending. It was very poignant.MG Ainsworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12440473651655740044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80385657314731973922011-07-24T09:22:19.794-04:002011-07-24T09:22:19.794-04:00My most sincere thanks to all who took the time to...My most sincere thanks to all who took the time to read my first entry in a Clarity of Night contest. I very much appreciate your comments. Bruce.Bruce Roushnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71870265189746117582011-07-22T08:28:10.800-04:002011-07-22T08:28:10.800-04:00Bittersweet and poignant.
I might tighten a few ...Bittersweet and poignant. <br /><br />I might tighten a few phrases to make them more direct, but this is a lovely take on the prompt.Richard Levangiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16596356126446766607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75407166261471176322011-07-21T20:36:38.856-04:002011-07-21T20:36:38.856-04:00Beautifully written! Thank you for sharing.Beautifully written! Thank you for sharing.Michele Zugnonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12394802719932859470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17657027238103093372011-07-21T14:47:46.656-04:002011-07-21T14:47:46.656-04:00tasty slice of romance!tasty slice of romance!Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1693015691462052572011-07-21T14:43:47.899-04:002011-07-21T14:43:47.899-04:00I love that they flew off together into the light....I love that they flew off together into the light. :) ~Janabluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65728609598621332852011-07-20T18:28:34.891-04:002011-07-20T18:28:34.891-04:00Awww - beautiful love story! Very romantic! Take c...Awww - beautiful love story! Very romantic! Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59067115058182080232011-07-19T13:56:31.769-04:002011-07-19T13:56:31.769-04:00Together again after years of separation. Sweet ta...Together again after years of separation. Sweet tale.<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20737024613204848272011-07-19T04:22:42.704-04:002011-07-19T04:22:42.704-04:00That was sad and touching and delightful all at on...That was sad and touching and delightful all at once!fairyhedgehoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72554083385856096002011-07-18T21:44:00.623-04:002011-07-18T21:44:00.623-04:00This is a great story. After so long, together at ...This is a great story. After so long, together at last. Good storytelling.C. Sonberg Larsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09925003570881003478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68191630727090900842011-07-18T13:42:44.020-04:002011-07-18T13:42:44.020-04:00Together they merged into the golden light.
My fav...<i>Together they merged into the golden light.</i><br />My favorite line. :)Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45061017581085295042011-07-18T11:56:33.518-04:002011-07-18T11:56:33.518-04:00This is so heartbreaking and lovely. Thanks for th...This is so heartbreaking and lovely. Thanks for the wonderful read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58068659748821987872011-07-18T11:19:50.655-04:002011-07-18T11:19:50.655-04:00Ditto to everything Aniket said. I can see this be...Ditto to everything Aniket said. I can see this being perfect for past contests, too.<br /><br />But we're talking about Elemental here - and it works beautiful for this prompt. I didn't have the photo before me while reading but it kept flashing before my eyes the more I read. You've come up with a wonderful, touching, sentimental story, Bruce. Hats off to you for this one! <br /><br />p.s. I loved the image of the doves opening the celestial curtain with their beaks.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17286909482780350161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87848545759298535392011-07-18T10:01:15.031-04:002011-07-18T10:01:15.031-04:00Hi Bruce,
Great to see you here.
You've used ...Hi Bruce,<br /><br />Great to see you here.<br />You've used everything the prompt had to offer and translated it into a very good read.<br /><br />I also wonder at the fact that this same piece would have worked as an entry to Silhouette and Ascension(past contests here) as well.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53168996088432294362011-07-18T03:49:12.358-04:002011-07-18T03:49:12.358-04:00This has a transparent clarity.This has a transparent clarity.Cath Bartonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81031031751376058262011-07-17T23:08:29.410-04:002011-07-17T23:08:29.410-04:00This is lovely and sweet.This is lovely and sweet.Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.com