tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post7471902796452559276..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: The Stairs, Part 6 (suspense/horror)Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90884511570998956062007-11-01T13:03:00.000-04:002007-11-01T13:03:00.000-04:00incredible... gripping dude! its like i'm right th...incredible... gripping dude! its like i'm right there with him!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67904922786712089002007-10-31T23:02:00.000-04:002007-10-31T23:02:00.000-04:00Ivan, thanks for the visit and the insights! I ha...Ivan, thanks for the visit and the insights! I have a feeling you've stopped over from Bernita's blog. :)<BR/><BR/>Szelsofa, well, pretty creepy.<BR/><BR/>Jaye, I do like twists. =) Not sure if funny is going to be end result, though.<BR/><BR/>Church Lady, ooh, now that's a great idea! I'll tuck that away for next time.<BR/><BR/>Ello, I wanted this one more fragmented. I thought it would better get across how perception is splintered during an intense moment.<BR/><BR/>Vesper, you picked out my favorite line! See you over at #7.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62121255617188057052007-10-31T06:51:00.000-04:002007-10-31T06:51:00.000-04:00"birds beating againsta hurricane eye wallthen lau..."birds beating against<BR/>a hurricane eye wall<BR/>then laughing"<BR/><BR/>Excellent, Jason! Luckily I can go straight to part 7! :-)Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-24027032715094166212007-10-30T22:20:00.000-04:002007-10-30T22:20:00.000-04:00Oh no he didn't! Oh yes he did! I am horrified and...Oh no he didn't! Oh yes he did! I am horrified and spellbound and must keep reading.Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9687730514756354962007-10-30T21:51:00.000-04:002007-10-30T21:51:00.000-04:00There better not be a trapdoor with even more step...There better not be a trapdoor with even more steps down.<BR/>"-)Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74826991098656025472007-10-30T09:04:00.000-04:002007-10-30T09:04:00.000-04:00Please tell me you're going to twist this at the l...Please tell me you're going to twist this at the last second and it's going to be funny. I'm not sure my heart can take it otherwise.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46847204874840639952007-10-30T06:21:00.000-04:002007-10-30T06:21:00.000-04:00how creepy can it get...*shivers*how creepy can it get...*shivers*SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19162687534448443872007-10-30T04:05:00.000-04:002007-10-30T04:05:00.000-04:00Brings to mind some of the darker paintings of Mex...Brings to mind some of the darker paintings of Mexican muralist Orosco.<BR/>Where there are things around life that we barely perceive, but can't see.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com