tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post7569700878148863286..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #75Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2634700802199768642007-08-07T22:26:00.000-04:002007-08-07T22:26:00.000-04:00No way, she's a keeper! Nicely done. Great dialo...No way, she's a keeper! Nicely done. Great dialog, pacing, everything.<BR/><BR/>High marks! A contender.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39818519895619497842007-08-05T11:30:00.000-04:002007-08-05T11:30:00.000-04:00Funny piece, had she been taking secret readings o...Funny piece, had she been taking secret readings on the compass? I hope so.<BR/><BR/>If not then maybe she was a liitle to blame. I'm also interested in the bear bell. Wish it worked for midgies, lol!apprenticehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13784785172285984036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10711923656720034412007-08-05T10:15:00.000-04:002007-08-05T10:15:00.000-04:00Made me laugh.Thank you.Made me laugh.<BR/>Thank you.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76768604878915162762007-08-03T13:22:00.000-04:002007-08-03T13:22:00.000-04:00what a lively conversation - I like how the length...what a lively conversation - I like how the length of time they have been married shows. Bitch? Yes, from his point of wiev. Bitch, because she outsmarted him.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62069989885022079772007-08-03T08:23:00.000-04:002007-08-03T08:23:00.000-04:00Woman saves the day? I, for one, love it!Good dial...Woman saves the day? I, for one, love it!<BR/>Good dialogue, btw.Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26138530750401625782007-08-02T20:31:00.000-04:002007-08-02T20:31:00.000-04:00I think instead of viewing Helen from my point of ...I think instead of viewing Helen from my point of view (bitch vs. right) I'm trying to picture her from Mark's point of view. And I can see why he would view her as a bitch. It probably made him feel better.<BR/><BR/>Great pacing and funny too.<BR/><BR/>Good work, T!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23570036735512279892007-08-02T16:08:00.000-04:002007-08-02T16:08:00.000-04:00It's the best shitty story I ever read.It's the best shitty story I ever read.Minoahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913317488511634414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68892997554050326592007-08-02T15:57:00.000-04:002007-08-02T15:57:00.000-04:00I'm not going to venture into that discussion, exc...I'm not going to venture into that discussion, except to say it's a bitchin' storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-361887507318230552007-08-02T14:42:00.000-04:002007-08-02T14:42:00.000-04:00Loved everything until the last line -- I think he...Loved everything until the last line -- I think he married one helluva woman.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46428024193155791242007-08-02T12:28:00.000-04:002007-08-02T12:28:00.000-04:00Agreed, Dottie. We need to reclaim the term!Agreed, Dottie. We need to reclaim the term!jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07670837457340175399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18751142398007135352007-08-02T10:48:00.000-04:002007-08-02T10:48:00.000-04:00The sound of bear bells warn a bear that there are...The sound of bear bells warn a bear that there are humans nearby; they tend to avoid us if possible and noise is a deterrent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30862919460722634802007-08-02T10:47:00.000-04:002007-08-02T10:47:00.000-04:00It's not so much that she's right that makes her a...It's not so much that she's right that makes her a bitch; it's the fact that she expects him to screw up, waits until he does it, and is nasty about it.<BR/><BR/>But thanks! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26496894266014943682007-08-02T10:12:00.000-04:002007-08-02T10:12:00.000-04:00Amusing piece, but I have to agree that Helen's ge...Amusing piece, but I have to agree that Helen's getting a bad rap.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72797851915000520572007-08-02T09:39:00.000-04:002007-08-02T09:39:00.000-04:00Nicely done.Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7762714538303795652007-08-02T04:33:00.000-04:002007-08-02T04:33:00.000-04:00Brilliant bit of writing, with good tension and pa...Brilliant bit of writing, with good tension and pace - but I'd agree with Hoodie, she's not a bitch - she's one smart woman! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71972778142410936362007-08-02T03:20:00.000-04:002007-08-02T03:20:00.000-04:00very entertaining! does a bear bell attract them o...very entertaining! does a bear bell attract them or chase them?AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36232058387857923002007-08-02T01:30:00.000-04:002007-08-02T01:30:00.000-04:00Bitch had it going on, though...Bitch had it going on, though...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62031819475059957442007-08-02T00:25:00.000-04:002007-08-02T00:25:00.000-04:00I loved it until the last line. IMO she's not a b...I loved it until the last line. IMO she's not a bitch if she's totally right. :)<BR/><BR/>Still, a very entertaining read. I liked it very much.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.com