tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post7848208891448561731..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #178Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88645160262939146672010-01-18T20:19:43.637-05:002010-01-18T20:19:43.637-05:00LOL @ James' comment!
Okay, this one made me l...LOL @ James' comment!<br />Okay, this one made me laugh. Nice one!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23559271568846911772010-01-18T07:41:34.314-05:002010-01-18T07:41:34.314-05:00Janey V, I deal with predators on a daily basis. I...Janey V, I deal with predators on a daily basis. In fact, I knew a convict locked up for stealing a mannequin. He paroled, committed the same crime, and returned to prison. I thought outloud, "Why doesn't someone just buy him a mannequin, it would save the taxpayers money." Another convict said to me, "Oh no, that won't work. It can't be just any mannequin. He has to fall in love with it first."<br /><br />So, in short, I disagree with your statement. Predators pick their victims for all types of reasons.James R. Tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23294728004244933352010-01-17T17:37:42.105-05:002010-01-17T17:37:42.105-05:00my caveat
Something I Would Keep
"Lurch"...<br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">my caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />"Lurch" in the beginning definitely evokes a different image than a bird on wing - if I hadn't seen the image prompt, I would have been more suprised by the ending<br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />I might not use the ellipse at the end of the second paragraph.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59248456577347975472010-01-16T19:07:57.104-05:002010-01-16T19:07:57.104-05:00Excellent. Kept me enthralled to the end. Then I l...Excellent. Kept me enthralled to the end. Then I laughed!Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72244762951526689532010-01-16T12:54:57.730-05:002010-01-16T12:54:57.730-05:00A predator is a predator is a predator. Whether ...A predator is a predator is a predator. Whether looking for its next meal or a sexual conquest the driving instinct is the same. The lust for the prey.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19766318665620485972010-01-16T12:44:52.157-05:002010-01-16T12:44:52.157-05:00Since there were other victims, I wanted to know m...Since there were other victims, I wanted to know more about why this one was so special, so different from the rest.James R. Tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17753627345834405902010-01-15T14:41:52.032-05:002010-01-15T14:41:52.032-05:00Well done, the ambiguity that Laurel talks of defi...Well done, the ambiguity that Laurel talks of definitely made it engrossing :)Kartikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01067636999700672077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68681614822696013342010-01-15T02:25:24.118-05:002010-01-15T02:25:24.118-05:00A very clever take.A very clever take.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18373352936703116072010-01-13T15:31:55.412-05:002010-01-13T15:31:55.412-05:00I thought he was going to be zombie at first. I th...I thought he was going to be zombie at first. I think it was the word "lurch" in the first sentence. Nice job.Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91957561838645938732010-01-13T15:12:11.871-05:002010-01-13T15:12:11.871-05:00I enjoyed reading this one. Very visual.I enjoyed reading this one. Very visual.lenahttp://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59894188878313985962010-01-13T15:04:36.621-05:002010-01-13T15:04:36.621-05:00gotta watch those minnie mice! ;) lolgotta watch those minnie mice! ;) lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18847662167837769542010-01-13T14:56:46.843-05:002010-01-13T14:56:46.843-05:00Hahaha... loved the build-up.
who would have imagi...Hahaha... loved the build-up.<br />who would have imagined that this was the story of a bird stalking/hunting down a prey...???<br /><br />beautifully done. very original. loved it. thoroughly.Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49582988129890328222010-01-13T06:39:33.450-05:002010-01-13T06:39:33.450-05:00I really enjoyed this entry. It made me giggle at...I really enjoyed this entry. It made me giggle at the end. Even though I do feel badly for the rabbit. :-) A small point here, your first paragraph has an extra word 'come'. You can ask Jason to edit it out.catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56007313537440606302010-01-13T04:00:57.055-05:002010-01-13T04:00:57.055-05:00Well done grasping the voice of a matured predator...Well done grasping the voice of a matured predator!Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80827795341789862612010-01-12T21:15:38.214-05:002010-01-12T21:15:38.214-05:00Positively predatory. Fantastic ambiguity here, an...Positively predatory. Fantastic ambiguity here, and I love the play between sexual pursuit and stalking.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.com