tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post807913414996415338..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #48Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33836092819720648732008-07-24T17:01:00.000-04:002008-07-24T17:01:00.000-04:00A little extra shove to get the new chapter in lif...A little extra shove to get the new chapter in life underway. that rings true.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54645688643569737092008-07-20T16:36:00.000-04:002008-07-20T16:36:00.000-04:00Bravo!Love's labor is never lost :)Bravo!<BR/><BR/>Love's labor is never lost :)Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62143144819315361732008-07-19T20:37:00.000-04:002008-07-19T20:37:00.000-04:00awwww so sweet!awwww so sweet!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5361976163670715242008-07-19T13:19:00.000-04:002008-07-19T13:19:00.000-04:00I love the breakthrough moment with the picture. ...I love the breakthrough moment with the picture. Very sweet.Missyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16638784910676212171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-14033029722287333032008-07-18T18:37:00.000-04:002008-07-18T18:37:00.000-04:00I liked the voice in this tale.I wasn't sure of th...I liked the voice in this tale.<BR/><BR/>I wasn't sure of the biker's gender. Makes a big difference in the interpretation of this tale.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10363330143040008232008-07-17T16:54:00.000-04:002008-07-17T16:54:00.000-04:00Thank you all for you comments. It is my first tim...Thank you all for you comments. It is my first time joining a contest, so your comments means a lot.<BR/><BR/>Hopefully it does not shine through that English is not my first language (I am from Denmark).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23960175188634311592008-07-16T18:18:00.000-04:002008-07-16T18:18:00.000-04:00Out of my mind but true to my heartGreat sentiment...<I>Out of my mind but true to my heart</I><BR/><BR/>Great sentiment, well written. I liked the balance of this very much. Nice story!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-50598014041190926622008-07-16T16:16:00.000-04:002008-07-16T16:16:00.000-04:00And here I thought she was running away from a rel...And here I thought she was running away from a relationship when all along she was running towards one. Nice!Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52446444814580604142008-07-16T13:49:00.000-04:002008-07-16T13:49:00.000-04:00I like how her indecision resolves itself once she...I like how her indecision resolves itself once she sees his picture. Love is a powerful motivator. <BR/><BR/>A very sweet, hopeful take on the picture. We needed one of those! :)<BR/><BR/>Nicely done.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19752547918252361872008-07-16T13:03:00.000-04:002008-07-16T13:03:00.000-04:00Well done upbeat take on the picture.Well done upbeat take on the picture.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42727124432455725332008-07-16T10:59:00.000-04:002008-07-16T10:59:00.000-04:00Have to follow the heart. Very sweet. I wish I had...Have to follow the heart. Very sweet. I wish I had that courage, leave it all and follow my heart. Someday. Thank you for this.<BR/><BR/>Leaving at sunset - so symbolic and adds to the beauty of it too.<BR/><BR/>And I like it that this can mean different things too. At first I thought the person she was joining might be deceased. And she was joining him for all eternity. But when she smiled at the picture and talked about following her heart, and I see them both alive...with a happy ever after to follow.<BR/><BR/>Very nice.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84279510550571876422008-07-16T10:16:00.000-04:002008-07-16T10:16:00.000-04:00Very nice touch with the picture falling out of th...Very nice touch with the picture falling out of the wallet - tells us what we need to know without being expository. And I love the last line. Nicely done!Sheri Perl-Oshinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08025716805041579831noreply@blogger.com