tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8197669852141253236..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #42Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73430280833226648362007-11-21T16:34:00.000-05:002007-11-21T16:34:00.000-05:00The moment crept up on me, and I thought he was a ...The moment crept up on me, and I thought he was a goner too. Hard hitting ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44462645957712034682007-11-14T23:49:00.000-05:002007-11-14T23:49:00.000-05:00Interesting characters, and the ending took me by ...Interesting characters, and the ending took me by surprise.Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19444408526139288172007-11-14T10:45:00.000-05:002007-11-14T10:45:00.000-05:00Very nice twist at the end. Nicely conceived.Very nice twist at the end. Nicely conceived.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1455893257973866482007-11-14T10:28:00.000-05:002007-11-14T10:28:00.000-05:00I would have run when I saw the gun...I would have run when I saw the gun...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20067435758265553872007-11-14T07:39:00.000-05:002007-11-14T07:39:00.000-05:00Another story that is well done. I wonder why Eri...Another story that is well done. I wonder why Erik and the narrator hated each other so much? Perhaps the narrator was more obsessed with Erik and Erik was just stuck on his own failures.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88992354334878665682007-11-14T06:09:00.000-05:002007-11-14T06:09:00.000-05:00While the first paragraph was not easy to read, th...While the first paragraph was not easy to read, the rest flew nicely.<BR/>I love the ambiguity of the last line.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.com