tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8263887241329804399..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #169Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70323965888982170422010-01-23T00:25:33.577-05:002010-01-23T00:25:33.577-05:00Great POV, laughed at the end!
Congrats on the H/...Great POV, laughed at the end!<br /><br />Congrats on the H/M!<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86645366087996211202010-01-19T07:28:18.825-05:002010-01-19T07:28:18.825-05:00Ah, the Stephanie Plum of the animal kingdom - I l...Ah, the Stephanie Plum of the animal kingdom - I like it!Terrihttp://misterri.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64772895729346035272010-01-18T20:34:03.212-05:002010-01-18T20:34:03.212-05:00Funky was the first word to pop to mind. I like it...Funky was the first word to pop to mind. I like it!TLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01613912638668399684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20537176994417020832010-01-18T19:28:11.362-05:002010-01-18T19:28:11.362-05:00AHAHAHAHAHAH! This is so fresh! So funny! Really...AHAHAHAHAHAH! This is so fresh! So funny! Really very creative!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85921891269567706172010-01-17T18:25:34.964-05:002010-01-17T18:25:34.964-05:00my caveat
Something I Would Keep
The playfulness i...<br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">my caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />The playfulness is obvious not only in the theme and plot, but also the word choices - punchng, hissing, slithered - <br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />How sexist to suggest women only like to shop! (I'm KIDDING, Scott, really. I'm guilty as charged - get it, charged? As in, credit card!? Oh, nevermind). IF you wanted to tweak it, you might want to figure out a transition other than just a space/line, but that's a personal preference.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9524292356819281212010-01-17T14:24:41.385-05:002010-01-17T14:24:41.385-05:00Too funny! :)Too funny! :)Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59222155355922532322010-01-17T04:22:24.371-05:002010-01-17T04:22:24.371-05:00heh heh heh ...i loved this for its sheer uniquene...heh heh heh ...i loved this for its sheer uniqueness. the idea is marvelous. the narration is even better.Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56655316180704105092010-01-16T19:22:53.789-05:002010-01-16T19:22:53.789-05:00Ha, funny. Though I'd love to know exactly how...Ha, funny. Though I'd love to know exactly how she got the crow to vomit them up. You've got me hooked. Great character.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60981410862207900232010-01-16T15:22:53.928-05:002010-01-16T15:22:53.928-05:00Is it just me, did you mean "resist" ins...Is it just me, did you mean "resist" instead of "resit"? <br /><br />Reminds me of my days working in the meatrooom of a grocery store. I used to scrape the rotten meat off the floor. The owners sold it to company that used it to produce make-up and other cosmetics.James R. Tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62750833126810160502010-01-16T11:43:56.314-05:002010-01-16T11:43:56.314-05:00Scott - this is priceless! I too espouse to the h...Scott - this is priceless! I too espouse to the have-fun-with-it theory and what a lot of fun this is. Most excellent!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72423231157875884112010-01-15T13:56:21.380-05:002010-01-15T13:56:21.380-05:00Loved the cast of characters. Very twisted, very w...Loved the cast of characters. Very twisted, very weird, very GOOD!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00823616282284779390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40186653779918479062010-01-15T13:01:43.628-05:002010-01-15T13:01:43.628-05:00Weirdly awesome!! Thank you for this piece :)Weirdly awesome!! Thank you for this piece :)Kartikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01067636999700672077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54427814464782560162010-01-15T08:22:59.893-05:002010-01-15T08:22:59.893-05:00Excellent work!! Loved it for its sheer cheekiness...Excellent work!! Loved it for its sheer cheekiness!!Sourabh Biswashttp://bakwaasbybiswas.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71671404876583288082010-01-14T21:25:13.080-05:002010-01-14T21:25:13.080-05:00I tried to think of some helpful critisism but I g...I tried to think of some helpful critisism but I got nothing. My only complaint is I want more story, dialog & description... but there isn't anything u can cut so that you can add more without hitting the word count. So as is the story really does a nice job of working within the bounderies of the contest.Harleynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63447134917126950602010-01-14T18:13:39.681-05:002010-01-14T18:13:39.681-05:00Ha ha! Love it.Ha ha! Love it.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35917072792419137462010-01-14T12:02:52.681-05:002010-01-14T12:02:52.681-05:00Ha!Ha!Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6684457252198942052010-01-14T03:27:30.122-05:002010-01-14T03:27:30.122-05:00A fun read.A fun read.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67331775274987229232010-01-13T15:32:03.194-05:002010-01-13T15:32:03.194-05:00That was indeed fun to read. Enjoyed it to the cor...That was indeed fun to read. Enjoyed it to the core!lenahttp://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77186466380713175132010-01-13T08:16:26.968-05:002010-01-13T08:16:26.968-05:00Oh this was whimsically fun to read. Delightful. ...Oh this was whimsically fun to read. Delightful. I'd love to see the vehicle they were in. What do wyrms drive anyway?catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69665105840072593012010-01-13T06:58:09.756-05:002010-01-13T06:58:09.756-05:00That one left me chuckling, great piece.That one left me chuckling, great piece.Lee Hugheshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10625970674709103188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27655446670469694732010-01-13T06:36:31.438-05:002010-01-13T06:36:31.438-05:00Thanks guys! I'm not a very "literary&quo...Thanks guys! I'm not a very "literary" person so I simply tried to have some fun. I'm glad people are enjoying it.Scott Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677469126061570215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56529204252350285452010-01-13T03:01:41.289-05:002010-01-13T03:01:41.289-05:00This is so very cool! Love it to the core.
Agree ...This is so very cool! Love it to the core.<br /><br />Agree with Laurel (for the first and final time, grr) on the Artemis Fowl feel. Would do anything to get her mark, indeed. Goes to my box of favourites. ;)Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83700493033671566732010-01-12T22:09:54.300-05:002010-01-12T22:09:54.300-05:00lol ...y're a riot, scott :)lol ...y're a riot, scott :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53648881770601095542010-01-12T22:06:13.135-05:002010-01-12T22:06:13.135-05:00A wacky, contemporary fable... don't mess with...A wacky, contemporary fable... don't mess with a shopaholic.kashersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10906655824858659582010-01-12T20:30:59.880-05:002010-01-12T20:30:59.880-05:00I wish it was longer. I want to know who the frog ...I wish it was longer. I want to know who the frog is and why she was hunting him. I want to know how she buit the ship. I want more!Steph R.noreply@blogger.com