tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8427540884020944943..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #35Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54424450740139291592009-07-24T18:26:09.972-04:002009-07-24T18:26:09.972-04:00Yes, that's some serious patience. That was a...Yes, that's some serious patience. That was a might nasty surprise for her.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30907826767269486442009-07-20T17:00:02.172-04:002009-07-20T17:00:02.172-04:00Yikes! Quick to the point (no pun intended)!Yikes! Quick to the point (no pun intended)!Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57106946626289959032009-07-19T18:45:34.541-04:002009-07-19T18:45:34.541-04:00I know the title is patience but I'm thinking ...I know the title is patience but I'm thinking "psycho"!! It's a difficult thing to get one's head around - cultivating over 5 years the trust of somebody that you despise so much. I hope he enjoys his cold dish of revenge.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84025225619250992212009-07-17T14:49:18.429-04:002009-07-17T14:49:18.429-04:00Wow. Powerful twist at the end and I liked the bac...Wow. Powerful twist at the end and I liked the back and forth between them. The conversation starts off casual, but then...! Great job.Meghanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03375626649089998707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-24856939188067312322009-07-16T13:56:46.024-04:002009-07-16T13:56:46.024-04:00What a ride... an just 250 words... cool... thank ...What a ride... an just 250 words... cool... thank you<br /><br />Blog GoreAs the Mind Meandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05289502626334651157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12662048109123868142009-07-16T08:56:32.028-04:002009-07-16T08:56:32.028-04:00Ooh, suitably dark - revenge is a dish best served...Ooh, suitably dark - revenge is a dish best served cold, eh? Good stuff!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8542651742906094472009-07-14T16:01:24.122-04:002009-07-14T16:01:24.122-04:00Edmond Dantes held on to his thirst for vengeance ...Edmond Dantes held on to his thirst for vengeance longer than that. <br /><br />Good StoryB. Nagelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07620736939701035617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84851109931515564762009-07-14T10:52:22.173-04:002009-07-14T10:52:22.173-04:00Echo catvibe.
That's a long time to hold on t...Echo catvibe.<br /><br />That's a long time to hold on to such a grim plan, infiltrate another person's life, and not warm up to them at all. Has he no sympathy whatsoever? She has nightmares, which means she has remorse. I hope the rest of the story involves Monica, the busty and beautiful young detective, discovering the clues to Jen's murder and foiling Mike's attempt on her life with the help of hunky young EMT Bif Cooper.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10295797904055541552009-07-12T05:05:09.026-04:002009-07-12T05:05:09.026-04:00Wow! This is class. Well enjoyed it.
Four Dinners...Wow! This is class. Well enjoyed it.<br /><br />Four DinnersThe Preachermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10224135811862587701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58858313865369260662009-07-11T13:20:16.282-04:002009-07-11T13:20:16.282-04:00very well written:)love the twist:)very well written:)love the twist:)Kunjalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15346731417236906278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57202076892547265472009-07-11T08:23:05.586-04:002009-07-11T08:23:05.586-04:00So much in so few words---sounds like this is part...So much in so few words---sounds like this is part of a novel? It could be, if not. This would be quite a story to tell!!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55496526126054311232009-07-11T06:59:20.427-04:002009-07-11T06:59:20.427-04:00That is a long time to hold onto such a morbid sec...That is a long time to hold onto such a morbid secret. It makes me wonder how he could be intimate for so long holding onto that vengeance. And how she could be so romantically inclined so as not to notice that things weren't so rosy after all. Nice writing, and thought provoking.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76326410957591603492009-07-11T04:57:15.606-04:002009-07-11T04:57:15.606-04:00Loved this plot too much to even try and assess th...Loved this plot too much to even try and assess the writing.<br /><br />Makes me wanna go back read The Count of Monte Cristo all over again.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13392852168493266602009-07-11T04:03:24.473-04:002009-07-11T04:03:24.473-04:00@Laurel
And that is worth more than any prize in ...@Laurel<br /><br />And that is worth more than any prize in the contest. Knowing that it sticks with someone.Wavemancalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13271232599101899281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45901058992733371572009-07-11T01:12:13.467-04:002009-07-11T01:12:13.467-04:00Already left a comment but I thought you might lik...Already left a comment but I thought you might like to know that this is sticking with me. I thought about it in the car while I was driving and wondered about someone who could still hate another person that much after so long and getting to know them at that level...<br /><br />Good work.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7160026717978720572009-07-10T22:28:03.617-04:002009-07-10T22:28:03.617-04:00Great atmosphere. Great unfolding of the event. W...Great atmosphere. Great unfolding of the event. Well done!Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11296136002340304122009-07-10T22:08:23.316-04:002009-07-10T22:08:23.316-04:00Nice setup. You managed to take the typical "...Nice setup. You managed to take the typical "When we first met" conversation and flipped it into something else. I'm still wondering whether someone could actually go to those extremes in order to get their revenge. I guess you never know.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71366974355354572842009-07-10T21:14:22.003-04:002009-07-10T21:14:22.003-04:00I took that right between the eyes. I knew somethi...I took that right between the eyes. I knew something was coming with the fireplace poker but had no idea what.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43554310752091577422009-07-10T21:03:49.331-04:002009-07-10T21:03:49.331-04:00One of the best I've read so far. Great job.One of the best I've read so far. Great job.JRVogthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501549592361240370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63875218147693788432009-07-10T20:15:34.593-04:002009-07-10T20:15:34.593-04:00uh-huh... gotta watch those bearded ones ;) loluh-huh... gotta watch those bearded ones ;) lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22230858194891503432009-07-10T19:22:27.189-04:002009-07-10T19:22:27.189-04:00Now we're talkin'!Now we're talkin'!Eric Beetnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12504563937840205835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73716100685360724272009-07-10T19:08:05.977-04:002009-07-10T19:08:05.977-04:00Whoa. Pay back is a #&^%*@.Whoa. Pay back is a #&^%*@.Aimee Lainehttp://www.aimeelaine.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82147313242847786002009-07-10T18:50:08.708-04:002009-07-10T18:50:08.708-04:00Enjoyed this one very much.
alexEnjoyed this one very much.<br /><br />alexwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65526974605590887962009-07-10T17:57:20.109-04:002009-07-10T17:57:20.109-04:00Yikes! What a twist at the end! It's amazing h...Yikes! What a twist at the end! It's amazing how many ways a glass of wine and truth can be portrayed.Sandra Cormierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00231342310371529022noreply@blogger.com