tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8502929705647822318..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #125Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25906664755001667632009-07-27T09:44:08.276-04:002009-07-27T09:44:08.276-04:00Wow. Now that's a party conversation! No wom...Wow. Now that's a party conversation! No womanizying. That sounds like pretty good advice.<br /><br />Very high scoring.<br /><br />Welcome to The Forties Club!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70380963007356344762009-07-23T11:51:54.753-04:002009-07-23T11:51:54.753-04:00LOL - I laughed through the whole thing. I actuall...LOL - I laughed through the whole thing. I actually thought at the end, her last would turn around and kill her. This was really good. Funny.<br />Katherine: - your comment LOL too.<br /><br />Very nicely written, Rusty. <br />Very humerous. Loved it.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79724732344291606242009-07-20T13:45:34.695-04:002009-07-20T13:45:34.695-04:00Womanizers have a disastrously short lifespan. Lo...Womanizers have a disastrously short lifespan. Love the repetition. Funny and clever.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83440597387242284412009-07-19T01:45:42.747-04:002009-07-19T01:45:42.747-04:00Oh I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
I could pra...Oh I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.<br /><br />I could practically hear Catherine Zeta Jones singing 'He had it coming...' from the movie Chicago.<br /><br />Two thumbs up for sheer entertainment.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19749120663165721282009-07-17T13:08:20.407-04:002009-07-17T13:08:20.407-04:00"For a minute I thought the narrator might be..."For a minute I thought the narrator might be telling us this from the convenience of her own cell."<br /><br />....erm, yes, her own <i>padded</i> cell.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90786868313987781252009-07-17T11:22:48.056-04:002009-07-17T11:22:48.056-04:00Very entertaining. :)Very entertaining. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65333184585089023832009-07-17T11:00:43.593-04:002009-07-17T11:00:43.593-04:00Here's why I'll never leave my wife: Her ...Here's why I'll never leave my wife: Her ex-boyfriends turned out to be (a) gay, (b) a priest, and (c) on Love Connection. Who knows what would be in store for me? (OK, there is the one ex of hers that turned out to retire from Microsoft at 35 and is rolling in cash to this day.)<br /><br />LOL @ Katherine Napier.<br /><br />I really like the way you've done this. My one quibble is I would prefer it without the nickname Black Widow appearing. I like the potential sinister aspect of the character to remain subtle, implied. But it can obviously go either way since this works well.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-50557135970853280322009-07-16T13:25:52.431-04:002009-07-16T13:25:52.431-04:00LOL!LOL!Deb Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90750431022848985292009-07-16T09:23:14.610-04:002009-07-16T09:23:14.610-04:00Heh-heh - smart man that last husband... Good and ...Heh-heh - smart man that last husband... Good and entertaining read - loved the rhythm that ran through the piece. Good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83675922566000083332009-07-15T22:49:48.475-04:002009-07-15T22:49:48.475-04:00Very true to life. I liked the sweet ending. I hop...Very true to life. I liked the sweet ending. I hope that her marriage is built to last, finally. :)Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02479420775438541054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48835443123720078242009-07-15T19:46:17.540-04:002009-07-15T19:46:17.540-04:00LOL! she developed quite a reputation. Well, the l...LOL! she developed quite a reputation. Well, the last one seems to be true marriage as far as the definition of marriage is concerned!Monahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08615034229525061880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21698505346471253882009-07-15T15:41:18.933-04:002009-07-15T15:41:18.933-04:00Any story that can make me laugh gets my vote. :-)...Any story that can make me laugh gets my vote. :-) Nice one.AM-C https://www.blogger.com/profile/06652884591759867938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18390763741609031142009-07-15T13:18:19.218-04:002009-07-15T13:18:19.218-04:00i like the story & the twist - i was just surp...i like the story & the twist - i was just surprised to hear her boast about it so blatantly. seems a gal like this would be a bit more coy. but the humor is delightfully dark and you tell an enjoyable tale.joaquin carvelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6938511346785844572009-07-15T12:19:00.731-04:002009-07-15T12:19:00.731-04:00I second JR's comment.
Liked the beat to it....I second JR's comment. <br /><br />Liked the beat to it. Nice pace, with the repetition. "Then he died." Hee!Theresehttp://shoeism.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-14294793157132694572009-07-15T12:12:13.722-04:002009-07-15T12:12:13.722-04:00A good man is so hard to find! ;)
Nicely told.A good man is so hard to find! ;)<br /><br />Nicely told.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62167886277724613792009-07-15T08:52:14.294-04:002009-07-15T08:52:14.294-04:00why'd any guy want to marry her? sounds REALLY...why'd any guy want to marry her? sounds REALLY old now! ;) lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16014631741624390112009-07-15T08:10:29.747-04:002009-07-15T08:10:29.747-04:00Thank you for bringing such delightful humor into ...Thank you for bringing such delightful humor into this contest. I giggled the entire way through this. <br /><br />WV=punchem and you did.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6681623645909377972009-07-15T00:04:56.717-04:002009-07-15T00:04:56.717-04:00Wow, you captured my ex-mother-in-law PERFECTLY, e...Wow, you captured my ex-mother-in-law PERFECTLY, except for Norm (her 4th husband)was also a flagrant womanizer. She divorced him.<br /><br />Then he died.<br /><br />I love the flow of this piece and how easily it made me laugh.Katherine Napiernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31596387692511122392009-07-14T23:29:10.961-04:002009-07-14T23:29:10.961-04:00That last paragraph was a great twist. And it soun...That last paragraph was a great twist. And it sounds like she finally married someone with some sense. <br /><br />Not a particularly likable protagonist but definitely not boring!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42153569278447444792009-07-14T23:13:12.401-04:002009-07-14T23:13:12.401-04:00For a minute I thought the narrator might be telli...For a minute I thought the narrator might be telling us this from the convenience of her own cell.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.com