tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8562994491086445338..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #55Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5918303053463009532011-07-31T11:07:22.686-04:002011-07-31T11:07:22.686-04:00Love how the flip of the palindrome is the flip of...Love how the flip of the palindrome is the flip of POV. I've never attempted such a thing, but it must be very hard. Damn fine job!<br /><br />Congratulations on the Honorable Mention!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33370192496902889852011-07-30T23:25:02.118-04:002011-07-30T23:25:02.118-04:00This is SO COOL, Cindy! What an accomplishment! Un...This is SO COOL, Cindy! What an accomplishment! Unreal!Carol J. Amatohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13771517580900218771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88726920154168541322011-07-30T19:57:06.451-04:002011-07-30T19:57:06.451-04:00Dude, you rock, you dude!(Sorry, I couldn't re...Dude, you rock, you dude!(Sorry, I couldn't resist. Think I'd better stick to haiku.)<br />But seriously,this is wonderful. I second what everyone else has so eloquently said.Hobo Anniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03893596375445785212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20623030975465795682011-07-30T17:02:08.796-04:002011-07-30T17:02:08.796-04:00Absoluely amazing, Cindy! :-)Absoluely amazing, Cindy! :-)Maria Cisneros Toth Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04529384490317475998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37762113768810742002011-07-30T16:32:36.441-04:002011-07-30T16:32:36.441-04:00Not only clever but meaningful. Excellent!Not only clever but meaningful. Excellent!Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06678829908377178028noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88487640117463807262011-07-28T10:11:08.594-04:002011-07-28T10:11:08.594-04:00When talent is there, it is there. And you have it...When talent is there, it is there. And you have it.L.A Speedwinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07734240100355616049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62220211864230372692011-07-26T13:39:53.541-04:002011-07-26T13:39:53.541-04:00Aniket, I can't tell you how flattered I am to...Aniket, I can't tell you how flattered I am to read such a wonderful review. Thank you very much. It is such an honor to be in the midst of such amazing talent. When I read that authors appreciate my work I am speechless and humbled. <br /><br /><br />Janey V, It doesn't get better than "brilliant". Thank you very much for the kudos. It really means a lot to receive positive feedback from other writers.C. Sonberg Larsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09925003570881003478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48062795167496394422011-07-25T16:32:28.412-04:002011-07-25T16:32:28.412-04:00There's a lot of awe being expressed here and ...There's a lot of awe being expressed here and with good reason. I love the idea of birth and rebirth and using the device of a palindrome was both effective and really quite brilliant. Kudos.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-24530786186642311652011-07-25T13:34:11.270-04:002011-07-25T13:34:11.270-04:00Am I allowed to curse? I so want to use the curse ...Am I allowed to curse? I so want to use the curse words right now. In a good way of course. This is so effin' awesome! How did you ever manage to pull it off? <br /><br />I feel proud if everything just fits into a structure. If it follows any sort of rhythm, I sing and dance at my happy song. But you, you do all that and put it in a palindrome. I used to hate overachievers in school, but here, I'm just awed by your prowess. Hailing frequencies open!Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17735263793204348652011-07-24T23:49:58.559-04:002011-07-24T23:49:58.559-04:00Bruce, thank you for the kind words.
Aiden, than...Bruce, thank you for the kind words.<br /><br /><br />Aiden, thanks for the compliment! "Secret"---cool!C. Sonberg Larsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09925003570881003478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31296372064728000422011-07-23T19:44:40.166-04:002011-07-23T19:44:40.166-04:00Cleverly constructed. I like the sense of reincarn...Cleverly constructed. I like the sense of reincarnation embedded in this poem.<br /><br />P.S. My word verification "secret".Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68796489461721807562011-07-22T08:57:48.315-04:002011-07-22T08:57:48.315-04:00Terrific poem. Blown away by the creativity that m...Terrific poem. Blown away by the creativity that made it a palindrome.Bruce Roushnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66332690193325940842011-07-22T01:26:36.861-04:002011-07-22T01:26:36.861-04:00Yes, Mikki, I can see why that song would come to ...Yes, Mikki, I can see why that song would come to mind. Thanks very much!<br /><br />Thanks Jade, I appreciate the kind words.<br /><br />Richard, The flow and rhythm were important to me. Thanks for the compliment.C. Sonberg Larsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09925003570881003478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17595997227731572592011-07-22T00:08:36.858-04:002011-07-22T00:08:36.858-04:00I just enjoyed the flow and rhythm. It's lovel...I just enjoyed the flow and rhythm. It's lovely.Richard Levangiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16596356126446766607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22788937264425368132011-07-21T14:45:51.691-04:002011-07-21T14:45:51.691-04:00What I like most about this piece is the heartbeat...What I like most about this piece is the heartbeat quality of the lines!Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90412438975728941342011-07-21T03:14:33.961-04:002011-07-21T03:14:33.961-04:00Very, very nice. This reminds me of the song &quo...Very, very nice. This reminds me of the song "Lightning Crashes" by Live. The perfect subject for a palindrome, and masterfully executed.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing!Michele Zugnonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12394802719932859470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82871950076392735392011-07-21T02:56:14.054-04:002011-07-21T02:56:14.054-04:00Thanks, Peter. I love wordplay as well. Your compl...Thanks, Peter. I love wordplay as well. Your compliments are much appreciated and very humbling. <br /><br />Old Kitty, Thanks so much. It means a lot to read a review like this from another writer.C. Sonberg Larsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09925003570881003478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19307090477434173132011-07-20T18:07:55.251-04:002011-07-20T18:07:55.251-04:00Oh wow. I'm in awe - it's got such soul an...Oh wow. I'm in awe - it's got such soul and emotion and is also really clever!! Thanks for sharing, take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18464614078986193182011-07-20T02:40:25.482-04:002011-07-20T02:40:25.482-04:00Being a lover of wordplay, I saw the palindrome ri...Being a lover of wordplay, I saw the palindrome right at the midpoint, where the mirror sits. And I love how it unwinds in a sort of reverse-forward, not undoing what was made but making a new thing in its motion. Very, very clever indeed.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85343711122731828402011-07-20T02:29:00.114-04:002011-07-20T02:29:00.114-04:00Thanks everyone for the words of support. I am tru...Thanks everyone for the words of support. I am truly humbled by your comments.<br /><br />Michael Morse, you cracked me up! Thanks for the compliment.<br /><br />Phil W, Thank you. To answer your question, nope, I didn't follow a meter of any kind.<br /><br />Katherine Tomlinson, Compliments don't get much better than that. Thanks very much. I am very humbled. <br /><br />Fairyhedgehog (love your name). Thank you for the kudos!<br /><br />Dottie, Thanks. I'm honored to be the first palindrome entry.<br /><br />Bluesugarpoet (Jana). Thanks very much. I really appreciate your kind words. <br /><br />Wrath999, Thank you very much!C. Sonberg Larsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09925003570881003478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48626032817310896512011-07-19T20:23:21.653-04:002011-07-19T20:23:21.653-04:00great job !!!great job !!!wrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9988654570887999992011-07-19T18:00:15.976-04:002011-07-19T18:00:15.976-04:00Amazing! And here I was just thinking it was the &...Amazing! And here I was just thinking it was the "circle of life". :) Jana A.bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13834259863862063722011-07-19T13:52:05.990-04:002011-07-19T13:52:05.990-04:00Nicely done, haven't seen a palindrome in the ...Nicely done, haven't seen a palindrome in the comps before! Rebirth or retribution, excellent.<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58522375040189150972011-07-19T04:18:46.018-04:002011-07-19T04:18:46.018-04:00That's amazing, a palindrome that length! Kudo...That's amazing, a palindrome that length! Kudos!fairyhedgehoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60951269019626322192011-07-19T00:06:51.115-04:002011-07-19T00:06:51.115-04:00I add my awe at your awesomeness. Talk about your...I add my awe at your awesomeness. Talk about your fearful symmetry.Katherine Tomlinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696623795926663895noreply@blogger.com