tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8585339948257721843..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: RebellionJason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78673198131594333782010-09-27T05:51:51.608-04:002010-09-27T05:51:51.608-04:00Love the rhythmic flow of this one, Jason. That la...Love the rhythmic flow of this one, Jason. That last line really punches - great conclusion.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70970364449783063552010-09-26T23:12:23.361-04:002010-09-26T23:12:23.361-04:00Terri, I've had a good number of bad days. An...Terri, I've had a good number of bad days. And I like to stomp on them. But I can't deny the number of good ones too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67849664966053440012010-09-25T00:16:41.745-04:002010-09-25T00:16:41.745-04:00Bad day at the office?
I like the bah-humbug senti...Bad day at the office?<br />I like the bah-humbug sentiment :)Terrihttp://misterri.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75886877211377244052010-09-24T22:57:13.001-04:002010-09-24T22:57:13.001-04:00Erratic Thoughts, provoking thought and sharing id...Erratic Thoughts, provoking thought and sharing ideas between us is the greatest gift of our words. :)<br /><br />Petty, I just really love it. It's such a wonderful thing to have this outlet!<br /><br />Walking Man, I love that spirit! Heap o' livin' indeed.<br /><br />Tabitha, I think it was wrapped in the notion of rebellion. The refusal to let the fighting spirit be tamed.<br /><br />Laurel, I'd never take away someone's version of contentment. But I also know what mine cannot be.<br /><br />Sere, ha! No offense to Buddha, I swear. But I believe in creation and action. I can't convince myself that everything is fine when I know it is falling short.<br /><br />Kaye, I'm quite sure you don't need to envy any lines. :) You're one of the most talented poets I know.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79978224026518348762010-09-24T20:25:30.903-04:002010-09-24T20:25:30.903-04:00Rebellion is the ideal title for this!
"th...Rebellion is the ideal title for this! <br /><br />"they found a prophesy<br />written in lichen<br />on an under-sided stone..."<br /><br />I am envious of these lines!!!K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66157229704948724002010-09-24T17:14:00.501-04:002010-09-24T17:14:00.501-04:00Gorgeous photo, and love the imagery of the poem. ...Gorgeous photo, and love the imagery of the poem. But I've gotta ask, Who moved *your* Buddha? ;)Seré Prince Halversonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09246026185756770382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32394177517406356312010-09-24T08:51:26.602-04:002010-09-24T08:51:26.602-04:00I like the notion of choosing your path to content...I like the notion of choosing your path to contentment. If you can be happy where you are, super. But maybe someone else's path to fulfillment, even carved in stone, isn't for you. <br /><br />Youthful spirit in this one. Rebellion is a perfect title.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55355012050323528512010-09-24T08:40:50.742-04:002010-09-24T08:40:50.742-04:00Very good as always Jason.
But... why throw the s...Very good as always Jason.<br /><br />But... why throw the stone? I kinda liked its words :)Tabitha Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08196816108272065974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60821256134303370812010-09-24T07:46:02.949-04:002010-09-24T07:46:02.949-04:00Yes sir that's kicking old Buddhist philosophy...Yes sir that's kicking old Buddhist philosophy four square in the ass. I'm with you you got to fight and live a "heap o' livin' t' make yer house a home"the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58548394848901517972010-09-24T05:46:04.550-04:002010-09-24T05:46:04.550-04:00How do you do it? Not only such wonderful verses b...How do you do it? Not only such wonderful verses but you always manage an ideal picture to go with it.Felicity Grace Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17852843882007267665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27713907285416059662010-09-24T05:44:32.446-04:002010-09-24T05:44:32.446-04:00This has a lot of depth and I liked the pic very m...This has a lot of depth and I liked the pic very much.<br />A thought-provoking post!It made me stop and think about contenment and where/when do I get it the most!Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.com