tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8594916019375717694..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Before the BreathJason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20441207372617826182011-02-15T22:59:38.123-05:002011-02-15T22:59:38.123-05:00Nevine, the layers are stacked with the clouds. L...Nevine, the layers are stacked with the clouds. Like everything--clear enough on the surface, but nevertheless difficult to fathom. Thank you!<br /><br />PixieDust, many thanks. :) I love that about haiku. So few syllables to work with, yet really enough to expose much.<br /><br />Karen, :D<br /><br />Walking Man, the secret weapon to the cold.<br /><br />Terri, great to see you! I hope your writing is going well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34307947039752001102011-02-15T19:53:42.632-05:002011-02-15T19:53:42.632-05:00Cool :)
I see you haven't lost your touch - b...Cool :)<br /><br />I see you haven't lost your touch - both words and photo are lovely, as always. I've been scarce; thought I'd pop in for a quick hello. I hope you're well, Jason.Terrihttp://misterri.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43063774367077306542011-02-15T06:38:01.103-05:002011-02-15T06:38:01.103-05:00Get that cold snow close to warm lips and it has t...Get that cold snow close to warm lips and it has to melt.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-14395606980369865352011-02-15T05:52:05.620-05:002011-02-15T05:52:05.620-05:00Nice!!Nice!!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54503223845782219132011-02-14T21:39:19.144-05:002011-02-14T21:39:19.144-05:00The complexity of love laid bare in three verses.....The complexity of love laid bare in three verses... quite a feat... and beautifully accomplished...<br /><br />:-)<br /><br />love,<br />mePixieDusthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255641743057365106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33241765949498131232011-02-14T14:18:43.525-05:002011-02-14T14:18:43.525-05:00How simple the words... how complex the emotion. A...How simple the words... how complex the emotion. And the frost from the image both freezes and melts upon lips seeking love.<br /><br />A beautiful piece!<br /><br />NevineNevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.com