tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8641202082950866542..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #156Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-24656533919092703062010-01-18T15:41:50.107-05:002010-01-18T15:41:50.107-05:00I wanted to know about their sin. Still, very nice...I wanted to know about their sin. Still, very nicely drawn!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17767112349192239612010-01-18T15:41:30.049-05:002010-01-18T15:41:30.049-05:00I wanted to know about their sin. Still, very nice...I wanted to know about their sin. Still, very nicely drawn!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71894784950003805342010-01-17T19:59:21.250-05:002010-01-17T19:59:21.250-05:00my caveat
Something I Would Keep
the glossy wings ...<br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">my caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />the glossy wings bit is just a really striking image, it shines purposefully out of the rest of the dark, meandering conversation<br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />I couldn't tell if they were intoxicated or not?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26264992056426316462010-01-17T14:43:01.871-05:002010-01-17T14:43:01.871-05:00Whoops! That's what happens when you assume! ;...Whoops! That's what happens when you assume! ;)Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43875365834969287552010-01-17T05:45:30.513-05:002010-01-17T05:45:30.513-05:00Nice. The end was unexpected. But beautiful.
Very...Nice. The end was unexpected. But beautiful. <br />Very very nice...Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74309893224246457322010-01-16T19:45:37.704-05:002010-01-16T19:45:37.704-05:00Ha. Excellent.Ha. Excellent.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21409195845888460552010-01-16T09:01:08.956-05:002010-01-16T09:01:08.956-05:00And Hell's Angels come to tale them to damnati...And Hell's Angels come to tale them to damnation. <br /><br />Very satisfying piece.<br /><br /><br />Word verification: buffecy - anyone call a Slayer?JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48642588298410576252010-01-16T06:19:49.029-05:002010-01-16T06:19:49.029-05:00oh shit! read the title after the story. good one!...oh shit! read the title after the story. good one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23977091640153868632010-01-15T12:28:24.244-05:002010-01-15T12:28:24.244-05:00Interesting how Phil was waiting for "them&qu...Interesting how Phil was waiting for "them" all his life :)Kartikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01067636999700672077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6406555886854132422010-01-14T15:51:08.540-05:002010-01-14T15:51:08.540-05:00I really like this piece, its different but was de...I really like this piece, its different but was delicious.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36131177771334872522010-01-14T13:51:15.524-05:002010-01-14T13:51:15.524-05:00Good twist.Good twist.Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39460958286833839082010-01-13T18:56:50.346-05:002010-01-13T18:56:50.346-05:00Nicely Worked.Nicely Worked.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16885820245682452832010-01-13T09:29:08.509-05:002010-01-13T09:29:08.509-05:00Hells Angels. Funny. Nice job.Hells Angels. Funny. Nice job.catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70673663187242994832010-01-13T01:18:07.832-05:002010-01-13T01:18:07.832-05:00Great last line. I was wondering where you were g...Great last line. I was wondering where you were going with it.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61994325494164704842010-01-12T21:10:02.861-05:002010-01-12T21:10:02.861-05:00fine! :O lolfine! :O lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31733656721454832222010-01-12T16:27:35.131-05:002010-01-12T16:27:35.131-05:00I'm reminded of "Waiting for Godot,"...I'm reminded of "Waiting for Godot," only this time there's a misinterpretation between two characters. <br /><br />Telling a story, especially a flash-fiction piece through dialogue alone isn't always easy, especially if you're trying to include a little backstory; We're all sinners, maybe a specific sin would give the story added power. Still, I enjoyed it. --JRAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49785865087738692852010-01-12T14:43:21.162-05:002010-01-12T14:43:21.162-05:00Great story with all dialogue. Hard to do, but you...Great story with all dialogue. Hard to do, but you did itwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1163144853630318342010-01-12T14:10:26.701-05:002010-01-12T14:10:26.701-05:00Neat, black humour!Neat, black humour!Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20807327624016157902010-01-12T13:50:16.137-05:002010-01-12T13:50:16.137-05:00Wow. This reminds me of the Wendell Berry poem...e...Wow. This reminds me of the Wendell Berry poem...especially the last lines.<br /><br /><i>To know the dark, go dark...<br />And find that the dark too, blooms and sings/ and is travelled by dark feet and dark wings.</i>Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75343909548841994072010-01-12T13:44:05.364-05:002010-01-12T13:44:05.364-05:00I enjoyed reading dialogue. Yet I would prefer to ...I enjoyed reading dialogue. Yet I would prefer to have something more than just a dialogue in a piece.<br />Nice twist too.lenahttp://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35373370572167808782010-01-12T13:23:21.640-05:002010-01-12T13:23:21.640-05:00I like the twist at the end of this...I like the twist at the end of this...Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.com