tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8845607186742745945..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #105Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15960457065255634602010-01-19T15:59:15.815-05:002010-01-19T15:59:15.815-05:00Dear Entrants #1-105,
I have read your pieces so ...Dear Entrants #1-105,<br /><br />I have read your pieces so that I can fairly participate in the Readers' Choice vote. (I read all of them through last week, before I started commenting.) I <i>will</i> be coming back around to offer <a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">my keep/tweak comment</a>, but I didn't want anyone to snark. <br /><br />Cheers,<br />Aerin (#236)<br /><br />BTW, it's perfectly fine if you still want to snark, but this way you can choose a more appropriate subject, like the Golden Globes or those wretched Old Navy dummies.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12715658348371829962010-01-18T07:30:17.867-05:002010-01-18T07:30:17.867-05:00Very well written! I love the hopeful pieces, and ...Very well written! I love the hopeful pieces, and yours works, really works well!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73659861707790798542010-01-17T06:18:43.189-05:002010-01-17T06:18:43.189-05:00One thing I've learned from working in a priso...One thing I've learned from working in a prison, you've got to have patience. Your story conveys that.james r. tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80949511498845136192010-01-15T23:00:01.564-05:002010-01-15T23:00:01.564-05:00An optimistic, positive stand during a difficult s...An optimistic, positive stand during a difficult situation. Nicely rendered.D. Altabahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11937263056752928763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2690409181279173692010-01-14T11:00:35.826-05:002010-01-14T11:00:35.826-05:00REally nice one. I love this angel voice...REally nice one. I love this angel voice...catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77565151710870384602010-01-13T14:18:51.866-05:002010-01-13T14:18:51.866-05:00FINALLY a piece on angels. This was very well laye...FINALLY a piece on angels. This was very well layered.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5948527030378801992010-01-12T22:40:52.346-05:002010-01-12T22:40:52.346-05:00I want to meet that angel. What a great character...I want to meet that angel. What a great character you've created in so few words. A really enjoyable read. Nice.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12150744935921843170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82035086910048020112010-01-12T19:19:26.826-05:002010-01-12T19:19:26.826-05:00I'm with Ayodele and Lena. I enjoyed how your ...I'm with Ayodele and Lena. I enjoyed how your hardnosed angel took us from bleak nonsense to hope and action in such a short time.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-147028252159457332010-01-12T14:17:37.446-05:002010-01-12T14:17:37.446-05:00Loved the way the angel's voiced echoed a teen...Loved the way the angel's voiced echoed a teen's.Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78695069210085335562010-01-12T12:19:38.384-05:002010-01-12T12:19:38.384-05:00Hopelessness to hope in 250 words and so well craf...Hopelessness to hope in 250 words and so well crafted to get there.<br /><br />I really really enjoyed that.<br /><br />Thank you.DILLIGAFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16520650650468676361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16453369711416160302010-01-12T09:20:47.556-05:002010-01-12T09:20:47.556-05:00I love the image of the bird breaking free and the...I love the image of the bird breaking free and the requirement of responsibility for redemption.<br /><br />Working your way out, one thing at the time. It is, like the angel says, such a simple concept and so overwhelming at the same time.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76992063713946157512010-01-12T03:07:45.155-05:002010-01-12T03:07:45.155-05:00The exit is always there - just chose your door ca...The exit is always there - just chose your door carefully...<br /><br />It's nice to have an Angel who'll guide the way.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61951728440189670562010-01-11T21:15:19.161-05:002010-01-11T21:15:19.161-05:00'the thousand league journey begins with the f...'the thousand league journey begins with the first step...' well donelaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6188613830439014442010-01-11T14:15:17.184-05:002010-01-11T14:15:17.184-05:00The angel sure has got mojo. :)
Well whatever wor...The angel sure has got mojo. :)<br /><br />Well whatever works for the kid.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64428246799951474782010-01-11T12:17:52.544-05:002010-01-11T12:17:52.544-05:00It's about taking it one step at a time!It's about taking it one step at a time!Kartikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01067636999700672077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20699498869747149862010-01-11T09:12:43.563-05:002010-01-11T09:12:43.563-05:00Nice.Nice.AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72661859711307978252010-01-11T07:16:05.633-05:002010-01-11T07:16:05.633-05:00bet that dudes wearing oversized tshirt and a low ...bet that dudes wearing oversized tshirt and a low waist denim...wassup yo!! :D<br /><br />great interpretation!!<br /><br />Mithun Mukherjee.Scribblers Inchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01074085561810026537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82025885222872347272010-01-11T05:13:32.256-05:002010-01-11T05:13:32.256-05:00Nice to see a positive take on depression.
Increme...Nice to see a positive take on depression.<br />Increments very well done.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16807191242760611622010-01-11T03:58:44.204-05:002010-01-11T03:58:44.204-05:00Love the change from hopelessness to belief. Nice ...Love the change from hopelessness to belief. Nice idea. Well done :)lenahttp://www.thecolorsmagazine.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49679463998580973422010-01-11T03:15:50.456-05:002010-01-11T03:15:50.456-05:00That guardian angel's got some spunk.That guardian angel's got some spunk.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6192795919166161582010-01-11T00:46:18.243-05:002010-01-11T00:46:18.243-05:00Nice description of taking that first step.Nice description of taking that first step.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52149688856906776982010-01-10T22:45:32.515-05:002010-01-10T22:45:32.515-05:00Beautiful tale of hopelessness progressing to hope...Beautiful tale of hopelessness progressing to hope and determination. Very well written. Loved the Guardian Angel. Such a sweet character. One of the most memorable characters in this contest.<br /><br />Liked. :-)Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2806226288943762072010-01-10T21:31:14.189-05:002010-01-10T21:31:14.189-05:00Love the scepticism which slowly turns to belief. ...Love the scepticism which slowly turns to belief. Well done.AM-C https://www.blogger.com/profile/06652884591759867938noreply@blogger.com