tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8966144543298998088..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #53Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33450780112393664172007-08-07T21:59:00.000-04:002007-08-07T21:59:00.000-04:00Tough ending. Murder victims trapped in their rem...Tough ending. Murder victims trapped in their remains is a hellish thought!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54186119795621879572007-08-05T16:58:00.000-04:002007-08-05T16:58:00.000-04:00"x-ed off in a black permanant marker" Great sense..."x-ed off in a black permanant marker" Great sense of hopelessness here. Good job on the story. As others have said, it would be very interesting to see it expanded.<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25968769919533604772007-08-02T19:33:00.000-04:002007-08-02T19:33:00.000-04:00An excellent story, creepy enough to make me rethi...An excellent story, creepy enough to make me rethink just how much time I spend deep in the woods...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1701751136137879852007-08-02T15:59:00.000-04:002007-08-02T15:59:00.000-04:00nice and creepy.nice and creepy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19912791836935584192007-08-02T14:24:00.000-04:002007-08-02T14:24:00.000-04:00I liked this one, too. Got me right from the start...I liked this one, too. Got me right from the start - should be worked out to a longer version...?SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87258890813256448782007-08-02T12:00:00.000-04:002007-08-02T12:00:00.000-04:00The final words work perfectly!The final words work perfectly!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89886790735243283262007-08-01T20:03:00.000-04:002007-08-01T20:03:00.000-04:00Good writing evokes a lot of emotions. You did tha...Good writing evokes a lot of emotions. You did that, Josh, in 250 words or less. <BR/>Bravo.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36115514628918305902007-08-01T13:16:00.000-04:002007-08-01T13:16:00.000-04:00wow, spooky and sad... i like it a lot!wow, spooky and sad... i like it a lot!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64056348253340473852007-08-01T10:58:00.000-04:002007-08-01T10:58:00.000-04:00like this take a lot!like this take a lot!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80680091461964312382007-08-01T10:35:00.000-04:002007-08-01T10:35:00.000-04:00This is great, nothing quite like the ghostly voic...This is great, nothing quite like the ghostly voice. Really liked this, Josh.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3715904870348698522007-08-01T10:26:00.000-04:002007-08-01T10:26:00.000-04:00Definitely gave me the shivers. Last line is delic...Definitely gave me the shivers. Last line is deliciously macabre.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2570080506119215512007-08-01T10:24:00.000-04:002007-08-01T10:24:00.000-04:00I'm a true fan of the unhorrific ghost story.This ...I'm a true fan of the unhorrific ghost story.<BR/>This is great.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2524262181133450542007-08-01T10:18:00.000-04:002007-08-01T10:18:00.000-04:00Reminds me to read Alice Sebold. It's on my long, ...Reminds me to read Alice Sebold. It's on my long, long reading list.<BR/>I liked this one.Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22458906610009760432007-08-01T09:54:00.000-04:002007-08-01T09:54:00.000-04:00Interesting take.Deserves to be longer.Interesting take.<BR/>Deserves to be longer.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52844033265827047112007-08-01T09:36:00.000-04:002007-08-01T09:36:00.000-04:00Cool idea. Very nicely done. Dead narators always ...Cool idea. Very nicely done. Dead narators always facinate me.wrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30994813873687386102007-08-01T09:28:00.000-04:002007-08-01T09:28:00.000-04:00Creepy. Makes you wonder if spirits move on or wa...Creepy. Makes you wonder if spirits move on or wait until they're found.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com