tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post9039791136636335569..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #17Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75859465785862672972009-01-23T17:18:00.000-05:002009-01-23T17:18:00.000-05:00Thanks to all that make Jason's cyber community so...Thanks to all that make Jason's cyber community so successful. And thanks Jason for being a generous, kind host.Victor Bravo Monchego, Jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251479110131293284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35903636781833186592009-01-20T21:29:00.000-05:002009-01-20T21:29:00.000-05:00Congratulations on 4th Place!Great job on pacing, ...Congratulations on 4th Place!<BR/><BR/>Great job on pacing, entertainment value, technical skill, storytelling, and voice! And welcome to the Forties Club!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for being a wonderful part of the contest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35132973095930873942009-01-20T21:06:00.000-05:002009-01-20T21:06:00.000-05:00I like the pacing most in this, and the meandering...I like the pacing most in this, and the meandering stroll from precise self-awareness to fantastical insanity. Others have already said what I was going to say otherwise.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88434942623717906702009-01-20T14:07:00.000-05:002009-01-20T14:07:00.000-05:00I guess I saved the best to the last... this stand...I guess I saved the best to the last... this stands out unique creating its own genre... congratulations on your truly deserving win! I wish I had read it sooner!:-DAniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77068244735554699982009-01-20T12:16:00.000-05:002009-01-20T12:16:00.000-05:00I really enjoyed this story. Congratulations on p...I really enjoyed this story. Congratulations on placing so well in this fiercy talented arena.Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17075596786647102438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80835681640784317582009-01-19T12:33:00.000-05:002009-01-19T12:33:00.000-05:00crazy beautifulit works - I liked it.loved the end...crazy beautiful<BR/>it works - I liked it.<BR/>loved the ending - paranoia to the endEsther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76183901534258196902009-01-19T09:39:00.000-05:002009-01-19T09:39:00.000-05:00You're speaking my language here. Unpredictible =...You're speaking my language here. Unpredictible = original, thanks for straying off course.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11677994618046756362009-01-18T23:39:00.000-05:002009-01-18T23:39:00.000-05:00Victor, this is great writing. "Bramhall is too b...Victor, this is great writing. "Bramhall is too beautiful, I think, to be competent," is a line I wish that I had come up with. Your final paragraph is quietly chilling. I wonder how you sleep at night. Yikes!Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17075596786647102438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13847062993082606632009-01-18T10:44:00.000-05:002009-01-18T10:44:00.000-05:00Intense and well written.Intense and well written.ceedyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17767787593275846653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6494790233202764712009-01-17T17:27:00.000-05:002009-01-17T17:27:00.000-05:00So Dr. Bramhall was doing naughty things to hersel...So Dr. Bramhall was doing naughty things to herself and he spied her. Tsk, tsk, tsk.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71990204881849020102009-01-17T08:04:00.000-05:002009-01-17T08:04:00.000-05:00Well written description of a mental 'illness', I ...Well written description of a mental 'illness', I love the hallucinations of the psychiatrist. I enjoyed this.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56127598436638638362009-01-15T05:49:00.000-05:002009-01-15T05:49:00.000-05:00Brilliantly psychotic and well written.Brilliantly psychotic and well written.McKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58418601475376644812009-01-14T17:01:00.000-05:002009-01-14T17:01:00.000-05:00I feel at home with loonies.I like this a lot for ...I feel at home with loonies.<BR/><BR/>I like this a lot for what it's worth. Ta for the read.The Preachermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10224135811862587701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52267260432480224652009-01-13T17:34:00.000-05:002009-01-13T17:34:00.000-05:00somehow I feel sorry for Dr. Bramhall.The story ga...somehow I feel sorry for Dr. Bramhall.<BR/>The story gave me some chills and I visualized the MC with his crazed look in his eyes.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8065140243476294362009-01-12T12:42:00.000-05:002009-01-12T12:42:00.000-05:00Strong in so many ways. Great piece, Vic.Strong in so many ways. Great piece, Vic.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9258232422577781042009-01-11T18:09:00.000-05:002009-01-11T18:09:00.000-05:00I loved this! I thought it was brilliant!I loved this! I thought it was brilliant!Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58647850510302356862009-01-10T15:37:00.000-05:002009-01-10T15:37:00.000-05:00The repetition of up is fine is so beautifully obs...The repetition of <I>up is fine</I> is so beautifully obsessive compulsive. Repetitious and self-comforting. I love the image of him traveling the down escalator backwards. This was a terrific piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7821562110447443072009-01-10T11:16:00.000-05:002009-01-10T11:16:00.000-05:00Intense and horrifyingIntense and horrifyingBernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33406191204586455032009-01-09T20:32:00.000-05:002009-01-09T20:32:00.000-05:00Your character reminds me of the OCD prisoners in ...Your character reminds me of the OCD prisoners in our horticulture program. They're given the task of weeding the garden. Their determination is evident. <BR/><BR/>Bramhall, in his own way, is filled with determination; it's in his voice.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27940926233488256412009-01-08T20:29:00.000-05:002009-01-08T20:29:00.000-05:00Deliciously bizarre! You have created a great lit...Deliciously bizarre! You have created a great little story here.K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84470252091931638952009-01-08T19:13:00.000-05:002009-01-08T19:13:00.000-05:00Um. I'm going to look twice at my psychiatrist ne...Um. I'm going to look twice at my psychiatrist next time I'm there....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90898169475606764592009-01-08T15:43:00.000-05:002009-01-08T15:43:00.000-05:00here is a fine start to a horror story! Theres a ...here is a fine start to a horror story! Theres a fun bit of scarey in here...now go take your therapy LOL.. great job, going up anyone?peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04915565997583564023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67030250571968886662009-01-08T14:55:00.000-05:002009-01-08T14:55:00.000-05:00a unique take, thx victor :)a unique take, thx victor :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19407497680110100642009-01-08T14:45:00.000-05:002009-01-08T14:45:00.000-05:00Thank you, all. I appreciate the feedback. I look ...Thank you, all. I appreciate the feedback. I look forward to reading all the entries, a few at a time, between therapy sessions.Victor Bravo Monchego, Jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251479110131293284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72891522651466942892009-01-08T12:50:00.000-05:002009-01-08T12:50:00.000-05:00Loved reading this, very creative. I am a person w...Loved reading this, very creative. I am a person who cannot go down on an escalator (sometimes not up either) so this resonated with me even more, on another level. Bravo! <BR/><BR/><BR/>www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.comGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.com