tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post9054620123452308364..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #69Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54751690099921777082009-01-20T22:13:00.000-05:002009-01-20T22:13:00.000-05:00Great job with entertainment value, technical skil...Great job with entertainment value, technical skill, and voice!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for being a wonderful part of the contest!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74167959914542694442009-01-19T02:48:00.000-05:002009-01-19T02:48:00.000-05:00ahhh...the world of make believe. This was good.Gr...ahhh...the world of make believe. This was good.<BR/>Great descriptions. I felt like I could see into his very soul. And I liked what I saw.<BR/>Nice work.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61468706939229353142009-01-18T12:55:00.000-05:002009-01-18T12:55:00.000-05:00What a lovely piece. So wonderfully written with s...What a lovely piece. So wonderfully written with such detail. Your story just flowed....<BR/><BR/>Loved it....Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17286909482780350161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45101045592814071812009-01-16T17:14:00.000-05:002009-01-16T17:14:00.000-05:00Man, I am reading this at the end of an entire day...Man, I am reading this at the end of an entire day of reading just to catch up! I still have halfway to go, so after my eyes stopped glazing over and I could finally focus, I found this piece to be entirely a delight! Really wonderful bringing him back to that childlike place of wonder in his solitude.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63251384179393166732009-01-14T19:19:00.000-05:002009-01-14T19:19:00.000-05:00You go, girl. Such joy in this piece. Definitely o...You go, girl. Such joy in this piece. Definitely one of my favourites!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43386682314343044482009-01-14T04:06:00.000-05:002009-01-14T04:06:00.000-05:00What a loveable sweet character Jomo is! There was...What a loveable sweet character Jomo is! There was definitely an air of elevated happiness around him.<BR/>Great job, Lauri!<BR/><BR/>Blessed are those who can enjoy the little pieces of the mundane as much as children do.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59652305508528377062009-01-13T23:27:00.000-05:002009-01-13T23:27:00.000-05:00Nice. I can see Jomo's child-like wonder.Nice. I can see Jomo's child-like wonder.B. Nagelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07620736939701035617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85649591981085010722009-01-13T18:15:00.000-05:002009-01-13T18:15:00.000-05:00Aw I love your security guard. I can picture him ...Aw I love your security guard. I can picture him riding high on the escalator like Caesar riding on his chariot into Rome. A great feel-good piece.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49537763623143071432009-01-13T14:06:00.000-05:002009-01-13T14:06:00.000-05:00Lauri, I really loved his pride in simple things, ...Lauri, I really loved his pride in simple things, and his joy in receiving the smallest pleasures. Perspective matters. Carried like a king, indeed. :)<BR/><BR/>Very nice writing, and a delightful theme. This one gave me a warm glow. :) <BR/><BR/>(Btw, you don't have to read everyone's, or comment. Just putting that out there, because a lot of people don't. Didn't want you to feel stressed about that! :))Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60626834648818945622009-01-13T12:30:00.000-05:002009-01-13T12:30:00.000-05:00Cool. The little things in life we overlook. Great...Cool. The little things in life we overlook. Great visuals.wrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82021322940890109662009-01-13T11:01:00.000-05:002009-01-13T11:01:00.000-05:00Small things in life really matter.Well described ...Small things in life really matter.Well described :)Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19178189628792748862009-01-13T09:16:00.000-05:002009-01-13T09:16:00.000-05:00A first class illustration of counting your blessi...A first class illustration of counting your blessings.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59652651888037212742009-01-13T05:48:00.000-05:002009-01-13T05:48:00.000-05:00Very clever; I liked this.Very clever; I liked this.McKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12784668741983293562009-01-13T03:41:00.000-05:002009-01-13T03:41:00.000-05:00Sorry I'm new to these contests and was not sure h...Sorry I'm new to these contests and was not sure how it worked. Only now I've realized we're meant to read everyone's. I will try my best before the deadline but my slow dial-up is a serious drag. <BR/><BR/>Thanks for your lovely comments.Laurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112458658109887868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64985064389367918832009-01-13T02:29:00.000-05:002009-01-13T02:29:00.000-05:00Good use of descriptions, liked how you made detai...Good use of descriptions, liked how you made details work. Nicely done :)Lenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787400183444796423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72801812181594609632009-01-12T23:39:00.000-05:002009-01-12T23:39:00.000-05:00He's got to fight off boredom some how. Riding th...He's got to fight off boredom some how. Riding the escalator is a logical choice. Good descriptions.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21899825336700920642009-01-12T23:07:00.000-05:002009-01-12T23:07:00.000-05:00nicely done :)nicely done :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58104462855024149222009-01-12T22:48:00.000-05:002009-01-12T22:48:00.000-05:00Your use of details and the ability to make the mu...Your use of details and the ability to make the mundane magical are fabulous. I really enjoyed this one.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.com