tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post9097851161332112953..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Under the Willows, Part 8, Final (narrative poem)Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74814566224695752942008-05-07T08:54:00.000-04:002008-05-07T08:54:00.000-04:00Well done!An exceptional piece of writing and wond...Well done!<BR/><BR/>An exceptional piece of writing and wonderful to read.Miladysahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08065128196666157541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48276847735249122132008-05-06T04:02:00.000-04:002008-05-06T04:02:00.000-04:00I love the burgundy primrose - nice touch :-)I loo...I love the burgundy primrose - nice touch :-)<BR/>I look forward to taking some time to read all the parts in sequence now. You have outdone yourself with this one, well done.Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18262582955545267852008-05-05T00:27:00.000-04:002008-05-05T00:27:00.000-04:00Paisley, glad you enjoyed it! I realize this poem...Paisley, glad you enjoyed it! I realize this poem was a bit of an indulgence on my part. I'm happy that it came together.<BR/><BR/>Janey, thank you! I liked the folk tale-ish ending. The whole thing was organically written.<BR/><BR/>Aine, someday I'll figure out how to bring these different things into line. :)<BR/><BR/>Sarah, those words speak volumes. :)<BR/><BR/>Billy, I've always wanted to do one of these narrative poems. It was more of a fun process than I expected.<BR/><BR/>Geraldine, this style did pose certain challenges. If I'd written it whole, I think I may have experimented with some kind of refrain to break up the parts.<BR/><BR/>Beth, thank you. :) If this turns out to be a memorable piece, then I'm a happy man.<BR/><BR/>Ello, yes, it's not easy to be really erotic without crossing into erotica. What a fine line! I'm glad I stayed on the polite-society side for this one. =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45153231193415973942008-05-03T12:59:00.000-04:002008-05-03T12:59:00.000-04:00Holy Moly! That was awesome and incredibly sexy wi...Holy Moly! That was awesome and incredibly sexy without being one bit sleezy. That's art! Wow! I seem to be blushing quite alot reading your blog lately. Whew! Do it again! :o)Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44724812168226865492008-05-02T15:00:00.000-04:002008-05-02T15:00:00.000-04:00I see I am not the only one speechless at the mome...I see I am not the only one speechless at the moment.ourladybethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08003089621986303208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45119909820859133722008-05-02T13:37:00.000-04:002008-05-02T13:37:00.000-04:00"A burgundy primrose grew"....so beautiful You rea..."A burgundy primrose grew"<BR/>....so beautiful <BR/><BR/>You really have a way with this type of writing Jason; not an easy genre to tackle. <BR/><BR/>This was truly a fitting ending to the entralling journey you've shared with us...Well done!<BR/><BR/>www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.comGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85728637593396549692008-05-02T11:03:00.000-04:002008-05-02T11:03:00.000-04:00The perfect ending, Jason. I can only echo what S...The perfect ending, Jason. I can only echo what Sarah said. A few words of comment can't do justice to this entire work.WHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65505952090195675222008-05-02T09:48:00.000-04:002008-05-02T09:48:00.000-04:00Any words I choose suddenly seem like limp, incapa...Any words I choose suddenly seem like limp, incapable things. The ending--wow. <BR/><BR/>Yeah...just wow.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42619299507947696222008-05-02T09:44:00.000-04:002008-05-02T09:44:00.000-04:00This series needs to go in your book...;)This series needs to go in your book...<BR/>;)Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18664322521231395412008-05-02T09:14:00.000-04:002008-05-02T09:14:00.000-04:00Oh My! (she said furiously fanning her flushed che...Oh My! (she said furiously fanning her flushed cheeks)!<BR/><BR/>Jason, thank you for this wonderful poem. It's been a great journey into the immortal and this was certainly a fitting climax.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67999001703508684422008-05-02T09:01:00.000-04:002008-05-02T09:01:00.000-04:00oh jason,, that was the most vivid of culminations...oh jason,, that was the most vivid of culminations... bravo!!!paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.com