The Man In The Moon
by David A. Tyler
I'm standing in the middle of a car on the N-train. The guy sitting in front of me is clipping his fingernails and they are flying haphazardly in various directions. Lovely.
I get off at my usual stop; grab a bagel (a schmear), some coffee, and head towards the office. I fumble with the snap-back-sip-n-save lid and the cup slips out of my hands, hits the pavement, and splashes scalding liquid up my side.
I bend over to clean the mess and I'm speckled with street-sludge residue compliments of a passing delivery van.
I'm now very dirty, coffee-less, and have no desire to go to work.
So I don't.
I walk up the street to Central Park, grab a bench, and lay down to take a nap. Trees and sun slide to the outskirts of my vision, and my entire world seems to collapse. I do the same thing every day, and I do it so I can afford to live for the next.
Today is different.
I nap. I get up. I eat. I get the paper. I go back to my bench. I read the paper. I nap. I get up. I'm hungry again. It's getting late.
Life has defining moments. My defining moment was over a hot-sausage and mustard in Central Park. The moon is full tonight, sends light over the entire horizon. Seems there is a whole other world out there, and the man in the moon is laughing at me... calling my name.
wow. very nice, david.
ReplyDeletethis line spoke directly to me:
I do the same thing every day, and I do it so I can afford to live for the next.
i loved the tone of the whole piece.
wonderful.
I like the simplicity of this. I agree with Anne, a nice way of describing our "day to day".
ReplyDeleteThis piece is going to speak to a lot of people. I also love the self-depricating humor. Great job!
ReplyDeleteA breath of fresh air for the contest. Such familiar feelings. It's liberating to have them revealed in someone elses work. Awesome use of voice. Super job.
ReplyDeleteI liked the same line Anne did -- great switch in the meaning of the word "afford".
ReplyDeleteI like this - so mundane, yet so extraordinary.
ReplyDeleteI bend over to clean the mess and I'm speckled with street-sludge residue compliments of a passing delivery van.
ReplyDeleteThat made me laugh out loud.
The honesty the voice carries definitely makes it familiar for a lot of readers. Very well done.
Don't we all know what you mean. We all do what we have to, and to what end? I guess you've answered that.
ReplyDeleteThank you all for such kind words... what a great way to start my day! Time to go get some coffee ;-)
ReplyDeleteHow many times have I got to the Interstate onramp on my way to work, and considered for just a moment going South instead of North, and just driving driving driving?
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful and truthful. I also love the sense of promise, that this day of breaking away from the grind has liberated the character, and everything will be different from now on.
Maybe I should go South one morning...
I was mesmerized by this man walking out of life. I could see the momentum for such a thing. High marks overall.
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