Tuesday, January 09, 2007

Entry #34

The Wall
by Chochippie


Every day
Gray
Walls closing in
Suffocating
Strangling
Choking
Wires
Banging my head
Walls
No light
No light
No light
I want
To die

6 comments:

  1. This piece has a strong emotional quality.

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  2. Blogger was having issues yesterday and as such it was difficult to leave comments.

    So I had to come back today and mention how much I enjoyed this entry.

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  3. This is really strong - rather gut-wrenching, actually. Well written.

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  4. I can definitely see someone in jail thinking along these lines. Well done.

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  5. A powerful piece with really good emotional tension.

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  6. The extra emphasis on "no light" was perfect.

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