Monday, April 25, 2011

The Sun Entwines



What better season
when flowers unveil their lace
and green smiles so pure

5 comments:

  1. I will take days hot
    Sweating filled with falling drops
    Languid more my style


    I am of a mind that the 5-7-5 form is more difficult in English because we use so many polysyllabic words.

    Yeah I definitely prefer hot summer to col spring.

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  2. That was truly beautiful, a little touch of spring. :)

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  3. I could almost breathe it in ~.

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  4. Walking Man, I like packing in the weighty multi-syllabic words! Didn't really do it with this one. I wonder how Haiku "feels" in Japanese.

    Akasha, many thanks!!

    Lee, :) Such a pretty little flower. I took it on Easter. (And yes, I did want to respond to your question. I'm a hardcore agnostic, but I still celebrate.)

    Nevine, I could use more of those two things.

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