tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115638383844151878..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #12Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157593024150545602006-09-06T21:37:00.000-04:002006-09-06T21:37:00.000-04:00The increasing cadence of the incantation was grea...The increasing cadence of the incantation was great. I felt the power surging. Strong marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156706501570383572006-08-27T15:21:00.000-04:002006-08-27T15:21:00.000-04:00"walk the path between light and dark" this is a v..."walk the path between light and dark" this is a very strong statement. Good writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156670377380974892006-08-27T05:19:00.000-04:002006-08-27T05:19:00.000-04:00Hexenbanner, a witch who calls the power of three ...Hexenbanner, a witch who calls the power of three aspects - nice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03665385782194826703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156608557190675822006-08-26T12:09:00.000-04:002006-08-26T12:09:00.000-04:00The prose is rich with lyrical charm. Wonderful fl...The prose is rich with lyrical charm. Wonderful flow from start to finish. Good one :)Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156601812714521522006-08-26T10:16:00.000-04:002006-08-26T10:16:00.000-04:00I want to thank each of you who took the time to r...I want to thank each of you who took the time to read and comment on my story. I am not used to writing in this type of genre, so it is gratifying that people understood what I was trying to say. <BR/><BR/>This story is based on the picture yes, of course, but it is also based on other things that I have come across in life that "fit into the picture".<BR/><BR/>At this time, it is not part of a larger piece, but I may have to rethink that!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156564800591186942006-08-26T00:00:00.000-04:002006-08-26T00:00:00.000-04:00Vivid descriptions allowed me to picture this as I...Vivid descriptions allowed me to picture this as I read it. Good job.Lisa Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16334253815212707025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156504771580982602006-08-25T07:19:00.000-04:002006-08-25T07:19:00.000-04:00This is my favourite kind of writing. A bit of su...This is my favourite kind of writing. A bit of supernatural<BR/>a bit of magic. Good stuff<BR/>I enjoyed immensely.annahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07274795863426882004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156457520597457592006-08-24T18:12:00.000-04:002006-08-24T18:12:00.000-04:00I can tell this was inspired by the contest pictur...I can tell this was inspired by the contest picture. You wrote what came to mind as you studied the photograph and transcribed a daydream. Am I close?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156453226822320852006-08-24T17:00:00.000-04:002006-08-24T17:00:00.000-04:00I love the ghostly feel of this. Makes me want to...I love the ghostly feel of this. Makes me want to be out there in the moonlight.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156435037266987082006-08-24T11:57:00.000-04:002006-08-24T11:57:00.000-04:00I enjoyed the building tension. It leaves questio...I enjoyed the building tension. It leaves questions in my mind. I would really like to know more. Is this the beginning of a larger piece?Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156427870381937512006-08-24T09:57:00.000-04:002006-08-24T09:57:00.000-04:00Nice flow.Nice flow.Aleah Satohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16439351306951718500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156418277896182732006-08-24T07:17:00.000-04:002006-08-24T07:17:00.000-04:00Another interesting result on "raising the power."...Another interesting result on "raising the power."Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156417622112306012006-08-24T07:07:00.000-04:002006-08-24T07:07:00.000-04:00A nice little vignette to a much larger story.A nice little vignette to a much larger story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156397383089777232006-08-24T01:29:00.000-04:002006-08-24T01:29:00.000-04:00Very good.Very good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156390922303486922006-08-23T23:42:00.000-04:002006-08-23T23:42:00.000-04:00loved the repetition and the beat of this piece. ...loved the repetition and the beat of this piece. very nice. :)anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156390123844550032006-08-23T23:28:00.000-04:002006-08-23T23:28:00.000-04:00Powerful images. Great strong verbs. I like it m...Powerful images. Great strong verbs. I like it much.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156386039555996692006-08-23T22:20:00.000-04:002006-08-23T22:20:00.000-04:00A bit of sorcery? A good twist.A bit of sorcery? A good twist.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com