tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115660548161118779..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #40Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157682758312985212006-09-07T22:32:00.000-04:002006-09-07T22:32:00.000-04:00This is very, very impressive. What wonderful obs...This is very, very impressive. What wonderful observations and metaphors. Truly outstanding! I also appreciated the complexity of the character. High marks overall.<BR/><BR/>Congratulations on the Honorable Mention!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157151682662971692006-09-01T19:01:00.000-04:002006-09-01T19:01:00.000-04:00Congratulations on your well-deserved win!Congratulations on your well-deserved win!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156968865921248482006-08-30T16:14:00.000-04:002006-08-30T16:14:00.000-04:00fluid, lyrical, lovelyfluid, lyrical, lovelySaalehahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12607453476839291138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156963304639915492006-08-30T14:41:00.000-04:002006-08-30T14:41:00.000-04:00It's rich.You captured the paradox.It's rich.<BR/>You captured the paradox.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156950307625943522006-08-30T11:05:00.000-04:002006-08-30T11:05:00.000-04:00incredible imagery!incredible imagery!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156815708802814582006-08-28T21:41:00.000-04:002006-08-28T21:41:00.000-04:00Sober Moons by Alcoholic Poet. That alone should ...Sober Moons by Alcoholic Poet. That alone should win a prize.<BR/>"the sky scarred with clouds"- the opening line doesn't get any better than this. great writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156797600959341632006-08-28T16:40:00.000-04:002006-08-28T16:40:00.000-04:00She tapped in each number one at a time rather tha...<I>She tapped in each number one at a time rather than using the memory function. Imagining she was karmicly whispering in his ear.</I> <BR/><BR/>Wonderful and true. I've done this very thing and you've captured that moment perfectly.Floodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14341265651121116197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156780345423631172006-08-28T11:52:00.000-04:002006-08-28T11:52:00.000-04:00The protagonist's pain is bursting out with each w...The protagonist's pain is bursting out with each word in this piece. It's powerful, vivid, sad. Excellently written, poet. :)Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156700260687216272006-08-27T13:37:00.000-04:002006-08-27T13:37:00.000-04:00I loved the poetry of this.I loved the poetry of this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156699003351897062006-08-27T13:16:00.000-04:002006-08-27T13:16:00.000-04:00Alcoholic Poet, you are a poet, and I think you kn...Alcoholic Poet, you are a poet, and I think you know it. Drunk on words, smashed on sights, sounds, and feelings. Wonderful story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156650889174447462006-08-26T23:54:00.000-04:002006-08-26T23:54:00.000-04:00There is now and there is then. I really liked th...There is now and there is then. I really liked this.<BR/>I have to agree that this is a "wonderful little community."<BR/>Everyone seems to enjoy the comments as much as the stories.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156645869599925302006-08-26T22:31:00.000-04:002006-08-26T22:31:00.000-04:00thanx everyone. thanx very much. i know i'm not a ...thanx everyone. thanx very much. <BR/><BR/>i know i'm not a story teller really. but i enjoyed reading the entires from previous contests so much that i wanted to be spend a little time in this wonderful little community of yours.alcholic poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11933546638775487633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156638024099704222006-08-26T20:20:00.000-04:002006-08-26T20:20:00.000-04:00Very poignant and your sentences are music.Very poignant and your sentences are music.Ms. Dorkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18142940962223526141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156637507088932292006-08-26T20:11:00.000-04:002006-08-26T20:11:00.000-04:00I can tell you're a poet, poet.This is wonderfully...I can tell you're a poet, poet.<BR/>This is wonderfully lyrical.<BR/>melancholy.<BR/>Enjoyed lots!!annahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07274795863426882004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156624082245423822006-08-26T16:28:00.000-04:002006-08-26T16:28:00.000-04:00Nice flow and expression. If especially like:"Onl...Nice flow and expression. If especially like:<BR/><BR/>"Only footsteps could negotiate the path she had in her head. Of leaving without being gone."Robert Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03197423779549182981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156622643172883492006-08-26T16:04:00.000-04:002006-08-26T16:04:00.000-04:00yep, this is going to be tough!loved this, poet. ...yep, this is going to be tough!<BR/><BR/>loved this, poet. fantastic.<BR/><BR/>so many wonderful lines. <BR/><BR/>" Her yellow bike breathed quietly against the saline wind. People passed. So many people. And she noticed how they didn't notice her. Imagining herself sinking into the wall she sat upon; becoming as red as it."<BR/><BR/>i also really liked the line nicholas pointed out. <BR/>good stuff!<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>wow.anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156618085288000292006-08-26T14:48:00.000-04:002006-08-26T14:48:00.000-04:00"Something soft left alone long enough to become h..."Something soft left alone long enough to become hard."<BR/><BR/>Good image of pain and abandonment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156609239582501822006-08-26T12:20:00.000-04:002006-08-26T12:20:00.000-04:00Interesting character study. I like the beginning...Interesting character study. I like the beginning..leaving home in an effort to find it. Deep thoughts throughout. Enjoyed it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156607722239310972006-08-26T11:55:00.000-04:002006-08-26T11:55:00.000-04:00Wow, this speaks with so much energy. The flow is...Wow, this speaks with so much energy. The flow is beautiful. Great job, Poet.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.com