tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115673467561674959..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #57Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157684494717960442006-09-07T23:01:00.000-04:002006-09-07T23:01:00.000-04:00That was seriously disturbing. And effective! Of...That was seriously disturbing. And effective! Of course, I thought "peeping Tom," but it's so much worse. Very nicely done. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157065877401075662006-08-31T19:11:00.000-04:002006-08-31T19:11:00.000-04:00Susan, you have some imagination there.Cold, chill...Susan, you have some imagination there.<BR/><BR/>Cold, chilling and utterly amoral, that story. A nice piece of fiction.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156826728105447622006-08-29T00:45:00.000-04:002006-08-29T00:45:00.000-04:00Disturbing and effective.Disturbing and effective.Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156810809874378582006-08-28T20:20:00.000-04:002006-08-28T20:20:00.000-04:00I have to say that this story is scarier to me tha...I have to say that this story is scarier to me than the vampire, werewolf, monster stories...<BR/><BR/>A human that sick and evil is just disturbing. And the real scary part is that it happens.<BR/><BR/>I feel disgusted - so you have done a good job at creating an evil character.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156794699391538892006-08-28T15:51:00.000-04:002006-08-28T15:51:00.000-04:00Nice writing. Nice twist on voyeurism --the watche...Nice writing. Nice twist on voyeurism --the watcher changes the outcome of the vignette. Evil.Marcailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00305200432784995636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156786575255110962006-08-28T13:36:00.000-04:002006-08-28T13:36:00.000-04:00ooh, very nicely done, susan!!and i too loved the ...ooh, very nicely done, susan!!<BR/><BR/>and i too loved the last line!<BR/><BR/>a very fun piece!anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156778293826928202006-08-28T11:18:00.000-04:002006-08-28T11:18:00.000-04:00I really love that MC sees his mission as 'art.'Gr...I really love that MC sees his mission as 'art.'<BR/><BR/>Great story.Floodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14341265651121116197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156775469303385582006-08-28T10:31:00.000-04:002006-08-28T10:31:00.000-04:00The last sentence did it for me. LOL.Cheers.The last sentence did it for me. LOL.<BR/><BR/>Cheers.Aleah Satohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16439351306951718500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156769256331194482006-08-28T08:47:00.000-04:002006-08-28T08:47:00.000-04:00Not quite what I was expecting. I liked it!Not quite what I was expecting. I liked it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156749954808604052006-08-28T03:25:00.000-04:002006-08-28T03:25:00.000-04:00very interesting. I knew he was up to no good, but...very interesting. I knew he was up to no good, but hoped I was wrong up until the end.<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156748407548085972006-08-28T03:00:00.000-04:002006-08-28T03:00:00.000-04:00Ooh dear... Not quite as harmless as I thought, th...Ooh dear... Not quite as harmless as I thought, then...<BR/>If I may just say that, your use of tenses is a little distracting. I like that you're using the present, but then the switch to preterit or past perfect makes it a little hard to adjust.annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08734374991569484126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156747621146291922006-08-28T02:47:00.000-04:002006-08-28T02:47:00.000-04:00Don't worry, Joni. It's just a vivid imagination....Don't worry, Joni. It's just a vivid imagination. I'm really a harmless old sack.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04490560370211095502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156741889201169192006-08-28T01:11:00.000-04:002006-08-28T01:11:00.000-04:00My, but aren't we getting into quite a few twisted...My, but aren't we getting into quite a few twisted minds in this contest. Thanks for the reminder to keep the curtains closed. Nice work.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156741075762967962006-08-28T00:57:00.000-04:002006-08-28T00:57:00.000-04:00I know I am going to keep my blinds closed. Intere...I know I am going to keep my blinds closed. Interesting reading.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156736715532743102006-08-27T23:45:00.000-04:002006-08-27T23:45:00.000-04:00Nice bit of irony there. Why indeed to people kee...Nice bit of irony there. Why indeed to people keep their windows shut nowadays?Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.com