tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115678403609153573..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #66Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157722257856690162006-09-08T09:30:00.000-04:002006-09-08T09:30:00.000-04:00I like the exploration of boredom in immortality. ...I like the exploration of boredom in immortality. Something so simple as a double-headed coin could give him a glimmer of excitement. Good marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157060097572961232006-08-31T17:34:00.000-04:002006-08-31T17:34:00.000-04:00FM, another awesome entry! Best of luck with your ...FM, another awesome entry! Best of luck with your soon-to-be newborn!Kelly (Lynn) Parrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04827605655761900263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156817724782527132006-08-28T22:15:00.000-04:002006-08-28T22:15:00.000-04:00immortality was only usefol for the occasional che...immortality was only usefol for the occasional cheap thrill- hey that is good.<BR/>I enjoyed reading this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156809792291927512006-08-28T20:03:00.000-04:002006-08-28T20:03:00.000-04:00This was truly unique....Liked the way the coin to...This was truly unique....<BR/><BR/>Liked the way the coin toss started it off. That was a great hook. Then tied it back to beginning with at the end with the two-headed coin smiling. Very creative story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156801741817211762006-08-28T17:49:00.000-04:002006-08-28T17:49:00.000-04:00I like the flow of this story and the old world la...I like the flow of this story and the old world lanuage of it. You draw us in and take us on a great ride.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156796051622115632006-08-28T16:14:00.000-04:002006-08-28T16:14:00.000-04:00ah, very nice, forgottenmachine!!loved the masculi...ah, very nice, forgottenmachine!!<BR/>loved the masculine, self-deprecating humor. <BR/><BR/>you have a great voice!<BR/><BR/>just wait until the baby actually arrives. then it'll be all unicorns and sprites. ;)anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156795147395812962006-08-28T15:59:00.000-04:002006-08-28T15:59:00.000-04:00"It begam with a toss of a coin." is a great begin..."It begam with a toss of a coin." is a great beginning. Hooks you right in.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156789358496362692006-08-28T14:22:00.000-04:002006-08-28T14:22:00.000-04:00This is very good. Tight flow, tied together very...This is very good. Tight flow, tied together very nicely. A favorite. Kudos.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156786233066387602006-08-28T13:30:00.000-04:002006-08-28T13:30:00.000-04:00That was a satisfying read. I especially liked th...That was a satisfying read. I especially liked that last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156785539543075572006-08-28T13:18:00.000-04:002006-08-28T13:18:00.000-04:00Well written. A good read.Well written. A good read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com