tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115682029448339840..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #76Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157722766909190322006-09-08T09:39:00.000-04:002006-09-08T09:39:00.000-04:00Such an amazing character study. I was transfixed...Such an amazing character study. I was transfixed. If I were you, I'd build this out into a novel character. Really! Good marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156997129885011572006-08-31T00:05:00.000-04:002006-08-31T00:05:00.000-04:00Lovely. I have to chime in on the "well-meaning dr...Lovely. I have to chime in on the "well-meaning drunk with hairy arms." Nicely done.Chemical Billyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02252177787003276682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156996398053589022006-08-30T23:53:00.000-04:002006-08-30T23:53:00.000-04:00The voice has such dignity and charm to it, you ca...The voice has such dignity and charm to it, you cannot help but listen to what it says. Very well written, Natalia. :)Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156978845983062482006-08-30T19:00:00.000-04:002006-08-30T19:00:00.000-04:00Beautifully written! Loved it.Beautifully written! Loved it.Tami Klockauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07652939575098493098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156971887196579642006-08-30T17:04:00.000-04:002006-08-30T17:04:00.000-04:00So very lovely. Such a beautiful tribute.So very lovely. Such a beautiful tribute.annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08734374991569484126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156953159400933352006-08-30T11:52:00.000-04:002006-08-30T11:52:00.000-04:00oh i LOVED that!oh i LOVED that!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156904012277726402006-08-29T22:13:00.000-04:002006-08-29T22:13:00.000-04:00Very lyrical. I especially like: " She made a goo...Very lyrical. I especially like: " She made a good widow, despite her fondness for the color white."Robert Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03197423779549182981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156894045191040072006-08-29T19:27:00.000-04:002006-08-29T19:27:00.000-04:00Natalie, this was such a good literary piece of wr...Natalie, this was such a good literary piece of writing. Intelligently thought out and written. I could read this again and again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156873139674837002006-08-29T13:38:00.000-04:002006-08-29T13:38:00.000-04:00Thanks, guys! And thanks to Jason for a wonderful ...Thanks, guys! And thanks to Jason for a wonderful contest. I'm glad I stumbled on it via a friend of a friend of a friend. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156869951207062202006-08-29T12:45:00.000-04:002006-08-29T12:45:00.000-04:00That was beautiful.That was beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156869030143907572006-08-29T12:30:00.000-04:002006-08-29T12:30:00.000-04:00The only part I didn't believe was the part about ...The only part I didn't believe was the part about not being a poet. :) <BR/><BR/>So much said in so few words. Beautiful. A favorite.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156867680751535132006-08-29T12:08:00.000-04:002006-08-29T12:08:00.000-04:00I liked the fairy wings part, as well. The whole ...I liked the fairy wings part, as well. The whole piece had a kind of music to it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156866863842046422006-08-29T11:54:00.000-04:002006-08-29T11:54:00.000-04:00To choose a favorite line, I would have to copy al...To choose a favorite line, I would have to copy almost the whole story. Very nice. Great visuals.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156866723763858262006-08-29T11:52:00.000-04:002006-08-29T11:52:00.000-04:00wow. wonderful, natalie.i LOVED this: but Opal si...wow. wonderful, natalie.<BR/>i LOVED this:<BR/><BR/> but Opal simply couldn’t stand the idea of another well-meaning drunk with hairy arms. She was through with men. Her father used to beat her. Her mother grew fairy wings and fluttered away into the night, and did not leave a forwarding address. <BR/><BR/>fantastic ending. <BR/><BR/>thanks!anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156865021314011972006-08-29T11:23:00.000-04:002006-08-29T11:23:00.000-04:00Nice voice!Particularly liked "she made a good wid...Nice voice!<BR/>Particularly liked "she made a good widow," and "a well in the bottom of the night..."Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.com