tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115682032599380014..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #77Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157722893708866972006-09-08T09:41:00.000-04:002006-09-08T09:41:00.000-04:00Soft stepping clouds...I loved that! Intriguing s...<I>Soft stepping clouds...</I>I loved that! Intriguing scene in the midst of a larger story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156997283647911272006-08-31T00:08:00.000-04:002006-08-31T00:08:00.000-04:00It does feel like part of a much bigger story. Tel...It does feel like part of a much bigger story. Tell us more!Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156895416650342332006-08-29T19:50:00.000-04:002006-08-29T19:50:00.000-04:00Very fresh writing...I'd love to hear more.Very fresh writing...I'd love to hear more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156892390441197622006-08-29T18:59:00.000-04:002006-08-29T18:59:00.000-04:00Great job Diana. I love the feel of your story. ...Great job Diana. I love the feel of your story. It captured me from the first sentence and kept me wondering. I could feel the weight of the character's worries on my own shoulders! Awesome story!Tami Klockauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07652939575098493098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156868796485606952006-08-29T12:26:00.000-04:002006-08-29T12:26:00.000-04:00Leaves me wanting more. Who needs to be saved?! ...Leaves me wanting more. Who needs to be saved?! Has an epic feel about it. Awesome job.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156867855668777362006-08-29T12:10:00.000-04:002006-08-29T12:10:00.000-04:00There is so much more story here to be told. I th...There is so much more story here to be told. I think these are my favorites.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156866547065978192006-08-29T11:49:00.000-04:002006-08-29T11:49:00.000-04:00very nice!this was totally unexpected:Sabine silen...very nice!<BR/><BR/>this was totally unexpected:<BR/><BR/>Sabine silenced him with a kiss as she placed the sacred relic in his hand. "Quickly! You must go. If you are to rescue him, this is the only way."<BR/><BR/>She only hoped the nuns would not miss the gold chain cross he hid inside his coat as he leaned down to return her kiss with a fired intensity before melting into the night shadows cast by the traveling moon.<BR/><BR/>very nice!!anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.com