tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115682039779546738..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #79Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157722996712549012006-09-08T09:43:00.000-04:002006-09-08T09:43:00.000-04:00That was powerful. The unstated guilt. Very subt...That was powerful. The unstated guilt. Very subtle and expert to show that struggle. Highest marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157005887398081512006-08-31T02:31:00.000-04:002006-08-31T02:31:00.000-04:00Excellent writing, as ever. I particularly liked t...Excellent writing, as ever. I particularly liked the pairing of contrasting characters and the great dialog.<BR/><BR/>Great job, Frank!Fran Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08177027484914337117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156997845002343102006-08-31T00:17:00.000-04:002006-08-31T00:17:00.000-04:00Jess saw the beauty in almost everything and corre...<I>Jess saw the beauty in almost everything and correspondingly, pretty much everything wracked him with guilt.</I> <BR/><BR/>What an insight there! Great story all around.Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156903476088329612006-08-29T22:04:00.000-04:002006-08-29T22:04:00.000-04:00Nice plot twist for one twisted dude.Nice plot twist for one twisted dude.Robert Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03197423779549182981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156895256710904182006-08-29T19:47:00.000-04:002006-08-29T19:47:00.000-04:00Everything comes out in the subtlety of good writi...Everything comes out in the subtlety of good writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156872707435274692006-08-29T13:31:00.000-04:002006-08-29T13:31:00.000-04:00I really like how the plot was based on Jess's dec...I really like how the plot was based on Jess's decision, not Darryl's deed. Well done. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156869624443679902006-08-29T12:40:00.000-04:002006-08-29T12:40:00.000-04:00This story is fantastic!This story is fantastic!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156868350965175042006-08-29T12:19:00.000-04:002006-08-29T12:19:00.000-04:00The dialogue is perfect. I love the scene, the tw...The dialogue is perfect. I love the scene, the twist. So much about the relationship that is unsaid yet understood. Well crafted.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156868113187515342006-08-29T12:15:00.000-04:002006-08-29T12:15:00.000-04:00I actually heard Darryl chuckle into his bottle. ...I actually heard Darryl chuckle into his bottle. Nice twist at the end!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156865978206596462006-08-29T11:39:00.000-04:002006-08-29T11:39:00.000-04:00frank, that was excellent!!!very, very nice!frank, that was excellent!!!<BR/><BR/>very, very nice!anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156865730495776672006-08-29T11:35:00.000-04:002006-08-29T11:35:00.000-04:00Wow, Frank! This one didn't go anywhere I thought...Wow, Frank! This one didn't go anywhere I thought it would. Excellent!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156864402354577062006-08-29T11:13:00.000-04:002006-08-29T11:13:00.000-04:00Good twist!Good twist!Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.com