tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post116846900080275456..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #43Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17335487320084140162007-08-01T13:29:00.000-04:002007-08-01T13:29:00.000-04:00anonymous: thanx!jason: damn, i keep doing that! t...<B>anonymous:</B> thanx!<BR/><BR/><B>jason:</B> damn, i keep doing that! there's a real art to this short short story thing isn't there...AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168918364518896212007-01-15T22:32:00.000-05:002007-01-15T22:32:00.000-05:00A complex world here. I see much more beyond the ...A complex world here. I see much more beyond the confines of the piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168581136838064982007-01-12T00:52:00.000-05:002007-01-12T00:52:00.000-05:00joni: thank you!caveblogem: cool, thanx.susan: "po...<B>joni:</B> thank you!<BR/><BR/><B>caveblogem:</B> cool, thanx.<BR/><BR/><B>susan:</B> "powerful" wow- thanx- thats a first for me!<BR/><BR/><B>fran:</B> thank you, but again i lost the (self contained short story) plot...<BR/><BR/><B>atyllah:</B> "gripping" yay- another forst for me! thank you!<BR/><BR/><B>cailleach:</B> "1984ish feeling", i like that- thanx!<BR/><BR/><B>terri:</B> thanx... but once again i feel like i fell flat on the point of a self contained short story.<BR/><BR/><B>katy katy katy:</B> now why on earth would you figure that?<BR/><BR/><B>jim:</B> i just love how we all see things differently, thanx.<BR/><BR/><B>s.w.:</B> thank you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168568675926906602007-01-11T21:24:00.000-05:002007-01-11T21:24:00.000-05:00Wicked! Connecting with dragons!This would make a ...Wicked! Connecting with dragons!<BR/><BR/>This would make a great expanded story. :-)s.w. vaughnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09102544611773720262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168567821925804082007-01-11T21:10:00.000-05:002007-01-11T21:10:00.000-05:00Now that's an approach to the picture I never woul...Now that's an approach to the picture I never would have thought of. Quite nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168532272516555442007-01-11T11:17:00.000-05:002007-01-11T11:17:00.000-05:00i like it. I kinda figured it woul dhave dragons :...i like it. I kinda figured it woul dhave dragons :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168524080973576172007-01-11T09:01:00.000-05:002007-01-11T09:01:00.000-05:00You've conveyed a lot in such a short piece... def...You've conveyed a lot in such a short piece... definitely a novel in there somewhere!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168515405786043762007-01-11T06:36:00.000-05:002007-01-11T06:36:00.000-05:00Really interesting take - I do like fantasy and t...Really interesting take - I do like fantasy and this seems to fuse it with that 1984ish feeling too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168497862475657792007-01-11T01:44:00.000-05:002007-01-11T01:44:00.000-05:00Good, strong piece of writing, gripping and as Fra...Good, strong piece of writing, gripping and as Fran said, sounds the start of a very interesting novel.<BR/><A HREF="http://www.atyllahthehen.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">Atyllah</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168496939583086222007-01-11T01:28:00.000-05:002007-01-11T01:28:00.000-05:00Sounds like the beginning of a very interesting no...Sounds like the beginning of a very interesting novel...Fran Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08177027484914337117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168488437891347832007-01-10T23:07:00.000-05:002007-01-10T23:07:00.000-05:00A powerful read.A powerful read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168474060271009182007-01-10T19:07:00.000-05:002007-01-10T19:07:00.000-05:00Definitely makes you think about the rest of that ...Definitely makes you think about the rest of that world, what it's like.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168472842480406372007-01-10T18:47:00.000-05:002007-01-10T18:47:00.000-05:00I like the fantasy element. Stick it to the man. ...I like the fantasy element. Stick it to the man. Very creative. Good job.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.com