tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post1378140996468401791..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #129Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39452530322255388082010-01-18T19:54:32.340-05:002010-01-18T19:54:32.340-05:00my caveat
Something I Would Keep
I really apprecia...<br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">my caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />I <i>really</i> appreciated that you didn't end with a "happily ever after" summation. She escaped being actually, physically raped, but she was by no means "saved." If you'd ended with "and Meg was just fine" I would have been insulted - so, thank you!<br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />"Kill me if you can't save me" felt...off, somehowAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30287202437406762932010-01-18T12:09:44.902-05:002010-01-18T12:09:44.902-05:00finally! I've been waiting for the eagle/snake...finally! I've been waiting for the eagle/snake mythology. You presented this well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23782035928892479292010-01-18T11:43:13.859-05:002010-01-18T11:43:13.859-05:00Gotta love justice! Nice one!Gotta love justice! Nice one!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59013969448587842452010-01-17T16:05:43.638-05:002010-01-17T16:05:43.638-05:00I love how the snake, who had just saved her, was ...I love how the snake, who had just saved her, was about to turn on her. Great detail!Kurt Hendrickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16183333362118745153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66406257863775929622010-01-17T14:15:32.877-05:002010-01-17T14:15:32.877-05:00Hah!
Hah!
Love this kind of justice.
Well done....Hah!<br /><br />Hah!<br /><br />Love this kind of justice.<br /><br />Well done.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15456357128204346262010-01-17T00:25:45.182-05:002010-01-17T00:25:45.182-05:00Nice turn of events. And it works! I think the pac...Nice turn of events. And it works! I think the pacing of the story had something to do with it. Bravo.James R. Tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56877794734269235732010-01-14T14:24:19.688-05:002010-01-14T14:24:19.688-05:00Oooh, I liked the twist in the ending, surrounding...Oooh, I liked the twist in the ending, surrounding the snake's origin. Nice one.Rabid Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307255127156087170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39303864379506747542010-01-13T11:39:57.909-05:002010-01-13T11:39:57.909-05:00She prayed and she got the help she needed from a ...She prayed and she got the help she needed from a most unlikely source. Awesome! What a great snake! Even as he's being killed he saves the day. How cool is that? Nice job!catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59807353381054148982010-01-12T19:55:48.685-05:002010-01-12T19:55:48.685-05:00I like how justice is served at the end, and I esp...I like how justice is served at the end, and I especially liked the bit about the snake and eagle. The Cosmos worked things out. Great job!Meghanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03375626649089998707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65321307824393165942010-01-12T17:11:52.671-05:002010-01-12T17:11:52.671-05:00Snake and eagle in battle is classic and a great f...Snake and eagle in battle is classic and a great finish. I am of the opinion that the man just happened to pick a bad spot for his misdeeds and accidentally got into the middle of the other fight. Lucky for Meg.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18643335735451880742010-01-12T15:10:34.919-05:002010-01-12T15:10:34.919-05:00It's like a macabre description of the food ch...It's like a macabre description of the food chain.<br /><br />I always find it sad that men, at the top of the food chain, prey on women.<br /><br />There are only two ways to take down such men; disturbing their self definition or going straight for the jugular.<br /><br />Kind of the same thing... Nicely done.Charmainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17949679256019432906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90386707097949779192010-01-12T11:51:08.707-05:002010-01-12T11:51:08.707-05:00A snake for a snake. Just desserts, indeed.A snake for a snake. Just desserts, indeed.Deb Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39172306246797128032010-01-12T11:10:59.768-05:002010-01-12T11:10:59.768-05:00Love the snake and the eagle. Great symbolism and ...Love the snake and the eagle. Great symbolism and imagery.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28898506016306257932010-01-12T10:00:52.575-05:002010-01-12T10:00:52.575-05:00ahhhhhhhhhh...ahhhhhhhhhh...laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6347608237004539172010-01-12T09:46:37.106-05:002010-01-12T09:46:37.106-05:00@everyone
thanks a ton guys...this really meant a ...@everyone<br />thanks a ton guys...this really meant a lot to me :D<br /><br />though i admit i wanted to see something...how many of us do believe in divine miracles and how many just think of it as a mere coincidence. How many believe in chance and how many think that everything happens for a reason...that was the basic premise for the story.<br /><br />read my other stories at www.spaceffect.blogspot.com if you would like.<br /><br />Peace.Antriksh Satyarthihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00773435839422574840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86309821223600437412010-01-12T08:21:41.415-05:002010-01-12T08:21:41.415-05:00Divine justice methinks. Guess the eagle had to ta...Divine justice methinks. Guess the eagle had to take care of the snake seeing as it was going on to bite her.kashersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88195973503272765412010-01-12T05:42:52.420-05:002010-01-12T05:42:52.420-05:00I loved it! I almost turned away when I started t...I loved it! I almost turned away when I started to read but so glad I continued!Gia's Spothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09482742283418885642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35292248164403952792010-01-12T04:52:24.290-05:002010-01-12T04:52:24.290-05:00Dramatic.
Very.Dramatic.<br />Very.austerehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16839224877080864005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84895694187549866322010-01-11T19:53:58.106-05:002010-01-11T19:53:58.106-05:00Way to go bro :)
A good one!
NWay to go bro :)<br /><br />A good one!<br /><br />NNothingmanhttp://www.fubar69.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51707756287131644702010-01-11T17:53:24.500-05:002010-01-11T17:53:24.500-05:00Very interesting symbolism in both the snake and t...Very interesting symbolism in both the snake and the eagle! I like it.Leah McClellanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18183361669157109674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79499629284035443192010-01-11T17:30:32.333-05:002010-01-11T17:30:32.333-05:00Pity the snake didn't 'make it' as wel...Pity the snake didn't 'make it' as well....comeuppance of the highest order!!!!DILLIGAFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16520650650468676361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36653813749699607982010-01-11T17:24:02.670-05:002010-01-11T17:24:02.670-05:00I actually felt a bit sorry for the snake. Well wr...I actually felt a bit sorry for the snake. Well written.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79163315011625709862010-01-11T16:55:18.468-05:002010-01-11T16:55:18.468-05:00Looooved the ending.Looooved the ending.Merry Monteleonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09435956005780500310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68159818958819515132010-01-11T16:37:23.366-05:002010-01-11T16:37:23.366-05:00Divine intervention, indeed.Divine intervention, indeed.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17921656934125569662010-01-11T15:22:03.673-05:002010-01-11T15:22:03.673-05:00I like the ending, too...just blogged earlier toda...I like the ending, too...just blogged earlier today about Happy Endings being my next topic of discussion. They're even better when there's some sweet justice involved.Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.com