tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post1692609997638531685..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #49Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12262195053761935062007-11-21T16:41:00.000-05:002007-11-21T16:41:00.000-05:00I like how the sky and weather seemed to foreshado...I like how the sky and weather seemed to foreshadow what was to come.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29255798743588813452007-11-16T09:04:00.000-05:002007-11-16T09:04:00.000-05:00Amazing... Like it for its refined sense of traged...Amazing... Like it for its refined sense of tragedy. Also noticed the Indian characters. Would love to read your blog sometime...Abhinavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15760314837510920601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11514679712514360542007-11-15T12:04:00.000-05:002007-11-15T12:04:00.000-05:00A newborn dawn. Restless. Like an eager child kick...<I>A newborn dawn. Restless. Like an eager child kicking out of a mother’s womb.</I><BR/><BR/>Just some beautiful lines there. Well done.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91595623323112737312007-11-15T07:47:00.000-05:002007-11-15T07:47:00.000-05:00there's so much emotion, a whole spectrum of one's...there's so much emotion, a whole spectrum of one's world, all condensed into 250 words here.<BR/>I also like the somehow positive ending.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79556484071999375732007-11-14T21:11:00.000-05:002007-11-14T21:11:00.000-05:00This is so gently mournful, without being despairi...This is so gently mournful, without being despairing. Really like how you transitioned from the "newborn dawn" to her loss. <BR/><BR/>Very poignant story, and well written.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.com