tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2460392500848582175..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #34Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74181592804593473562007-04-30T21:52:00.000-04:002007-04-30T21:52:00.000-04:00For me, it felt like whirling thoughts trying to p...For me, it felt like whirling thoughts trying to pump someone up to commit suicide. It seems to leave open whether the protagonist actually does it. "...dishes and make my wishes" is oddly alluring.<BR/><BR/>High marks for pacing and entertainment value.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16856069400750570172007-04-27T01:48:00.000-04:002007-04-27T01:48:00.000-04:00Thank you, Esther and Minx!Thank you, Esther and Minx!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36679759017141581172007-04-26T21:43:00.000-04:002007-04-26T21:43:00.000-04:00interesting piece, canterbury soul. suicide. very ...interesting piece, canterbury soul. suicide. very disturbing. you got that across quite well.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48384678083915695172007-04-26T16:33:00.000-04:002007-04-26T16:33:00.000-04:00I liked this treatment CS, it has captured those f...I liked this treatment CS, it has captured those final, distracted, tortured moments of this person's suicide. <BR/>I thank the higher powers that we do not all write in exactly the same way, that we are still free to explore our varied styles and examine our individual interpretations freely. The writing world would be a very dull place without explorers!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03665385782194826703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46746197211949744722007-04-25T23:16:00.000-04:002007-04-25T23:16:00.000-04:00i too am lost. but i enjoy it for some reason. i k...i too am lost. but i enjoy it for some reason. i keep coming back to this to re-read it, even thought of it at work tonight. the thing of it is, is that i know it's there just below the surface, i just can't see it cause of the ripples. (the meaning that is)heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08706296327058741584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89043443977528805982007-04-25T12:16:00.000-04:002007-04-25T12:16:00.000-04:00I apologize as well if my comment seemed negative....I apologize as well if my comment seemed negative.<BR/><BR/>I'm intrigued by the words and was hoping someone would help me put together any obvious connections my brain wasn't making.<BR/><BR/>The writing itself is very good and definite points for originality.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90963933209248981892007-04-25T07:20:00.000-04:002007-04-25T07:20:00.000-04:00I should have phrased my comments differently. Wh...I should have phrased my comments differently. What I should have asked for was some help to understand. The writing is wonderful, and like poetry, evokes images, even if I don't understand the message. Sorry I wasn't more supportive.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21868571675964745632007-04-25T06:24:00.000-04:002007-04-25T06:24:00.000-04:00Thanks you very much, Nothingman!Thanks you very much, Nothingman!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58002025356812994652007-04-25T05:19:00.000-04:002007-04-25T05:19:00.000-04:00Sweet...interesting read. :)I get you man, i get y...Sweet...interesting read. :)<BR/><BR/><BR/>I get you man, i get you ;)<BR/><BR/><BR/>NPallavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09597178864833810868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38457141864780166472007-04-24T22:21:00.000-04:002007-04-24T22:21:00.000-04:00I apologise to have made you feel lost.I like to s...I apologise to have made you feel lost.<BR/><BR/>I like to see the world from different angles, hence, the protagonist's reversed view of his tortured last hour of his life.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the invaluable feedback!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55927475408905301092007-04-24T21:42:00.000-04:002007-04-24T21:42:00.000-04:00Just a friendly visit from your host. :) Feedbac...Just a friendly visit from your host. :) Feedback is priceless, but please keep it positive and supportive.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26818198411807909142007-04-24T21:28:00.000-04:002007-04-24T21:28:00.000-04:00I was hoping to have it explained in the comments ...I was hoping to have it explained in the comments myself. I'm a little lost too.<BR/><BR/>Nope. Read it again and still don't get it. Is this poetry. At first I thought it was someone in prison, escaping, just below a grate that takes a gargantuan effort to life. Probably too literal. Sorry, I just don't get it.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66565312750335254032007-04-24T20:50:00.000-04:002007-04-24T20:50:00.000-04:00Somebody dreaming about suicide? Shades of "Ground...Somebody dreaming about suicide? Shades of "Groundhog Day". Sorry, author, this one leaves me feeling kinda lost.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36793658313082973362007-04-24T18:32:00.000-04:002007-04-24T18:32:00.000-04:00Umm, sorry, you've lost me.Can someone explain it ...Umm, sorry, you've lost me.<BR/><BR/>Can someone explain it to me?<BR/><BR/>I'm usually pretty down with abstract, but this one really isn't connecting.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.com