tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2523422647962473205..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #139Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73738033732214287092009-07-27T09:55:23.128-04:002009-07-27T09:55:23.128-04:00The gaunlet is thrown. She is in trouble.The gaunlet is thrown. She is in trouble.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40202334602268414332009-07-23T00:58:54.005-04:002009-07-23T00:58:54.005-04:00so much said in such few words - i like how this f...so much said in such few words - i like how this flows.Memoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145566433335885701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16550691223466081112009-07-20T16:44:22.697-04:002009-07-20T16:44:22.697-04:00LOL @Aniket. It people will do anything for an up...LOL @Aniket. It people will do anything for an upgrade!<br /><br />I loved the meter and the flow of it. I would've liked a littel more clarification of the dilemma. If it's what I think it is I do hope she gets courage from her glass to turn him down.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57231100966824069232009-07-19T09:54:36.238-04:002009-07-19T09:54:36.238-04:00The devil always wins...
I sold my soul to him a ...The devil always wins...<br /><br />I sold my soul to him a long time back. Needed some extra cash to buy myself a new laptop. :DAniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85830037268681360142009-07-18T00:29:51.670-04:002009-07-18T00:29:51.670-04:00Alas, she'll imbibe too much wine and say '...Alas, she'll imbibe too much wine and say 'yes' to the devil in disguise.Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18929457806817167052009-07-17T23:05:45.464-04:002009-07-17T23:05:45.464-04:00I like this, but I am confused. I see two possibl...I like this, but I am confused. I see two possible readings (there may be more, but these are the ones I've settled on): First possibility: That he is a devilish rogue and she knows it, and the wine is going to have her spilling the truth about him and telling him to shove off. Second possibility: That he is a devilish rogue and she knows it, but the wine is going to fog her into saying yes when she knows she should say no.<br /><br />I'm leaning toward the first interpretation.<br /><br />If I completely missed the boat, I'm sorry. I do like the way it's written. The meter is pristine.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73614998029644038592009-07-17T14:40:12.110-04:002009-07-17T14:40:12.110-04:00You made me look up valse. :)You made me look up valse. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35472363882810223732009-07-16T09:11:41.640-04:002009-07-16T09:11:41.640-04:00Great flow of words - lovely piece of poetry!Great flow of words - lovely piece of poetry!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81043389564560069432009-07-15T17:43:11.635-04:002009-07-15T17:43:11.635-04:00I hope her next drink is coffee!
Nice poem.I hope her next drink is coffee!<br /><br />Nice poem.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8327278388155635842009-07-15T16:56:53.061-04:002009-07-15T16:56:53.061-04:00With a few more drinks she'll be singing from ...With a few more drinks she'll be singing from the treetops, especially if she glugs'em like that first glass.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74957020238157015392009-07-15T14:38:12.238-04:002009-07-15T14:38:12.238-04:00i like the flow of words and how it ends up ... lo...i like the flow of words and how it ends up ... loved reading it!<br /><br />NPallavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09597178864833810868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69679017623551712812009-07-15T10:30:38.258-04:002009-07-15T10:30:38.258-04:00so much said in so few words :)so much said in so few words :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17063512216708731192009-07-15T10:28:50.326-04:002009-07-15T10:28:50.326-04:00Ah, the truth...it hurts. Excellent take on the p...Ah, the truth...it hurts. Excellent take on the prompt.Tessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233122532137654099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85799094858316899942009-07-15T10:12:28.799-04:002009-07-15T10:12:28.799-04:00CrispCrispRohanhttp://cachememory.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25253346409390726392009-07-15T09:09:14.653-04:002009-07-15T09:09:14.653-04:00Nice poem. I hope she says no.Nice poem. I hope she says no.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.com