tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2645897256591153178..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #84Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27407417992640721142011-07-31T13:36:23.317-04:002011-07-31T13:36:23.317-04:00The fog of the deeply troubled. You portrayed tha...The fog of the deeply troubled. You portrayed that very effectively. I especially like the pacing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6826672622273349302011-07-25T19:09:54.302-04:002011-07-25T19:09:54.302-04:00This is a well told tragic tale. Your surprise en...This is a well told tragic tale. Your surprise ending was a real shocker.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3850838072907296282011-07-25T18:15:01.086-04:002011-07-25T18:15:01.086-04:00A nightmare indeed. Nice suspense to a finish that...A nightmare indeed. Nice suspense to a finish that explains perhaps more than we would ever want to know!EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86363941043223183192011-07-23T11:33:42.885-04:002011-07-23T11:33:42.885-04:00Interesting take, excellent twist. Thank you for ...Interesting take, excellent twist. Thank you for sharing!Michele Zugnonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12394802719932859470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91000424270829353592011-07-22T19:51:22.328-04:002011-07-22T19:51:22.328-04:00Very compelling.....and creepy. Was her dream her...Very compelling.....and creepy. Was her dream her own arm and hand offering her succor? Eewwwww, but very cool.<br /><br />Michael you have a strange and lovely mind.Rachelhttp://artsdaughter.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13658173108250556092011-07-22T18:22:34.379-04:002011-07-22T18:22:34.379-04:00Poor Alicia. I want to know of her and why she did...Poor Alicia. I want to know of her and why she did what she did - and what she did came as a shock at the end! Great story, thank you! Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18324472627054020412011-07-22T15:30:57.987-04:002011-07-22T15:30:57.987-04:00Loved the surprise ending - didn't see that on...Loved the surprise ending - didn't see that one coming! :) I love your interpretation of the photo as a drug induced haze. Nicely done! ~Jana Abluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22743784884326400012011-07-22T15:07:16.869-04:002011-07-22T15:07:16.869-04:00Everybody has a story, and everyone wants to know ...Everybody has a story, and everyone wants to know Alicia's. Loved the way you unfolded this from the feigned gentleness of the nurse to the horror of the situation.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73013900878108993112011-07-21T09:49:34.354-04:002011-07-21T09:49:34.354-04:00Nicely told Michael. You captured her medicated h...Nicely told Michael. You captured her medicated haze well. At least she cannot cut off her other arm, I suppose.Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26356045948268854832011-07-20T17:09:25.437-04:002011-07-20T17:09:25.437-04:00Takes all sorts, eh, Mikey? Warped with a twist - ...Takes all sorts, eh, Mikey? Warped with a twist - just how I like 'em!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913040012695421077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75214790265975117682011-07-20T15:37:48.846-04:002011-07-20T15:37:48.846-04:00Eww. Very creepy.Eww. Very creepy.Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18142028960727045992011-07-20T14:51:56.469-04:002011-07-20T14:51:56.469-04:00oh, what a twist - i thought she was captured by s...oh, what a twist - i thought she was captured by some evil cult or something...<br />well told, right from Alicia's perspective.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46176905866442620302011-07-20T01:12:40.057-04:002011-07-20T01:12:40.057-04:00Eww...creepy. So did not see that ending coming. I...Eww...creepy. So did not see that ending coming. I was thinking horrific accident, not self mutilation. Twisted.<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44230487390442485282011-07-20T00:28:25.727-04:002011-07-20T00:28:25.727-04:00Tragic... and creepy. You have a way with twisting...Tragic... and creepy. You have a way with twisting, then twisting the twist.<br /><br />Nice to see a friend participating here.pegjethttp://pegjet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49143017788042541022011-07-19T22:01:41.692-04:002011-07-19T22:01:41.692-04:00Very well told story, Michael.
The reveal at the ...Very well told story, Michael.<br /><br />The reveal at the end brings a whole new layer of depth to the tale, and makes us feel the tragedy.Chris Alliniottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04094925215735680849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2007104351868969172011-07-19T20:55:09.811-04:002011-07-19T20:55:09.811-04:00So tragic. I just wish I knew more about what cau...So tragic. I just wish I knew more about what caused the tragedy. I'm not sure whether to be happy she's alive, under the circumstances.Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.com