tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2767405311789855233..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #220Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66664557044397995312010-01-19T13:12:09.610-05:002010-01-19T13:12:09.610-05:00Romance and fantasy. Nice job!Romance and fantasy. Nice job!catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79731281422942552882010-01-18T21:53:43.062-05:002010-01-18T21:53:43.062-05:00I wasn't sure until the end whether she was a ...I wasn't sure until the end whether she was a real princess or just someone who had a pet name of princess or something similar. This has fairy tale romance painted all over it, and I can imagine it forming the opening for a novel about the retaking of the kingdom (princessdom?) with lots of flashbacks to the love story.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37121965359147207682010-01-18T13:38:28.053-05:002010-01-18T13:38:28.053-05:00very nicely toldvery nicely toldRachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5716360230637654602010-01-17T23:47:19.100-05:002010-01-17T23:47:19.100-05:00There are some really strong images in that openin...There are some really strong images in that opening paragraph. They set the scene magically.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89502565484526832682010-01-17T17:07:43.457-05:002010-01-17T17:07:43.457-05:00A lovely exploration of what true love is. This i...A lovely exploration of what true love is. This is about trust and deep abiding affection.<br /><br />Beautifully told and unashamedly romantic. :0)JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57545003008440036572010-01-16T19:27:53.081-05:002010-01-16T19:27:53.081-05:00That was incredibly romantic! Loved it! Great job!...That was incredibly romantic! Loved it! Great job! The writing was beautiful! I could feel her sadness and her strength!Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62099928860776036882010-01-16T15:03:04.685-05:002010-01-16T15:03:04.685-05:00You've shown the emotions very well.You've shown the emotions very well.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-4590173074534876482010-01-16T10:46:20.687-05:002010-01-16T10:46:20.687-05:00I think your writing here has a very lyrical tone....I think your writing here has a very lyrical tone. A perfect match for this fantasy/romance piece.Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5948268325654152402010-01-16T07:36:22.021-05:002010-01-16T07:36:22.021-05:00I'm not much of a fan of romance (I know, I kn...I'm not much of a fan of romance (I know, I know: it's my problem). Your flash does have that romantic quality to it. With the opening paragraph I was hoping for some type of clue as to where she was being led. Who is this guardian? What journey are they on? I'm reminded of the Soaps, where they rope you in for the next show.James R. Tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43121363577989626662010-01-16T02:53:38.063-05:002010-01-16T02:53:38.063-05:00wow...
there is something about the forbidden whi...wow...<br /><br />there is something about the forbidden which is so intriguing and exciting. <br />i loved this one because it flows so beautifully. it is dark. it is medieval. it reads excellently.Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27550973104810991792010-01-15T23:02:45.317-05:002010-01-15T23:02:45.317-05:00Caveat
Something I Would Keep
"fan the embers...<br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">Caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />"fan the embers of her spirit" is such a lovely line, and you get the sense of the progression from grief to determination.<br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />Anytime the pronoun "it" is possessive, it's spelled "its", without an apostrophe.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85076613082417556742010-01-14T20:14:33.358-05:002010-01-14T20:14:33.358-05:00well done, sally-jane!well done, sally-jane!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43492226259603557062010-01-14T10:02:43.967-05:002010-01-14T10:02:43.967-05:00A nice piece. I agree with reader, Laurel, that it...A nice piece. I agree with reader, Laurel, that it is vaguely erotic.<br /><br />Betty GordonBetty Gordonhttp://www.bettygordon.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-41568000438160436332010-01-14T06:36:11.840-05:002010-01-14T06:36:11.840-05:00Very well written to have captured such complex em...Very well written to have captured such complex emotions and put them across effortlessly! Liked it a lot.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44187601817169871192010-01-14T00:49:45.083-05:002010-01-14T00:49:45.083-05:00Brava, Ms Cameron.
You fit a lifetime of boundless...Brava, Ms Cameron.<br />You fit a lifetime of boundless love and absolute devotion, and all the power that brings, into 250 perfect words.<br />Brava.Andréhttp://andreinafrica.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91027193204667910142010-01-13T23:20:47.365-05:002010-01-13T23:20:47.365-05:00I could feel the emotions come alive. Well done!I could feel the emotions come alive. Well done!Squidsquirtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15521427577588027119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33004619370045942222010-01-13T21:43:34.891-05:002010-01-13T21:43:34.891-05:00Nice one. Well done.Nice one. Well done.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58747927198664775702010-01-13T21:32:59.062-05:002010-01-13T21:32:59.062-05:00I suppose even princesses need to be reminded of t...I suppose even princesses need to be reminded of their duty.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-317990289729107812010-01-13T19:06:29.366-05:002010-01-13T19:06:29.366-05:00Romantic and vaguely erotic for some reason. Who d...Romantic and vaguely erotic for some reason. Who doesn't adore a forbidden love??Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.com