tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2876557163709599415..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: The Passions of Bryn: DreamsJason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10026030211236681742007-04-16T13:57:00.000-04:002007-04-16T13:57:00.000-04:00Yes, very good.Yes, very good.Wilfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255247027469318384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70858608277536759472007-04-15T23:38:00.000-04:002007-04-15T23:38:00.000-04:00Kaye, much appreciated. Bryn and Christopher are ...Kaye, much appreciated. Bryn and Christopher are very powerful characters for me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-47231796578456064732007-04-15T18:51:00.000-04:002007-04-15T18:51:00.000-04:00Jason, Once again, a powerful piece. Strong image...Jason, <BR/><BR/>Once again, a powerful piece. Strong images. Can't wait to see where it goes next, or what Bryn will do!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46688937712429010882007-04-12T23:09:00.000-04:002007-04-12T23:09:00.000-04:00Mermaid, once again, I'm really quite astounded by...Mermaid, once again, I'm really quite astounded by the powers of your perception. You are gifted with an actute sensitivity.<BR/><BR/>Eating Poetry, you gave me quite a smile this morning. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!<BR/><BR/>Bernita, thank you!! What high praise. I'm very humbled. :)<BR/><BR/>Terri, I've missed you as well. You know, you once told me to visit Bryn as much as I want. Those words from you are what encouraged me to continue.<BR/><BR/>Wilf, I think that's good...right?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62882208165504566802007-04-12T14:26:00.000-04:002007-04-12T14:26:00.000-04:00ooo er.ooo er.Wilfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255247027469318384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18487353172381664712007-04-12T11:10:00.000-04:002007-04-12T11:10:00.000-04:00I love reading about your Bryn's moments just exac...I love reading about your Bryn's moments just exactly as they are and for the pure enjoyment of each one ... because really, isn't that all she has..?<BR/>I've been a little absent so what a pleasant catch-up: thinking bloggers, pretty waterfalls, sexy vamp moments and a contest to look forward to!<BR/>I've missed this place :)Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37423341418279008682007-04-12T06:34:00.000-04:002007-04-12T06:34:00.000-04:00One of the best seccubus and sex pieces I've seen,...One of the best seccubus and sex pieces I've seen, Jason.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55328059712849525752007-04-12T06:31:00.000-04:002007-04-12T06:31:00.000-04:00B is quite a girl!There goes the 'hood!This has a ...B is quite a girl!<BR/><BR/>There goes the 'hood!<BR/><BR/>This has a screenplay quality to it.apprenticehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13784785172285984036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64794598445295189722007-04-12T02:33:00.000-04:002007-04-12T02:33:00.000-04:00Wow! Wow! That's all I can say, "Wow!" I was ri...Wow! Wow! That's all I can say, "Wow!" I was rivited to the screen reading this and I normally have a hard time reading long pieces online. I must go back and read, or should I say watch, the previous installments.EATING POETRYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00043291161041330923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86119568486426314162007-04-11T16:03:00.000-04:002007-04-11T16:03:00.000-04:00This just gets better. She can't kill him or hers...This just gets better. She can't kill him or herself, and the images of light are so powerful in this. There are souls we meet that shine so bright, even in their sleep, to dispel all darkness around them.<BR/><BR/>I wonder what Byrn will find in his light, in her own light.mermaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15895749686844178804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56844124962674889992007-04-11T15:02:00.000-04:002007-04-11T15:02:00.000-04:00Jaye, LOL!! :D I will certainly do my best.Billi...Jaye, LOL!! :D I will certainly do my best.<BR/><BR/>Billie, that's an excellent point. The link to the Bryn video (Requiem 2) is not very strong, and even in that context, the motivations are not clear. My job for the next installment will be more character development.<BR/><BR/>Scott, thanks for the feeback and the kind words! I will try to remedy the anchoring issue in the next piece. Also, I sure hope to see you in the contest! I will be firing up to open it next Wednesday, the 18th.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11194509666645861772007-04-11T14:16:00.000-04:002007-04-11T14:16:00.000-04:00I agree with Billie. The language is beautiful, t...I agree with Billie. The language is beautiful, the scene well drawn, but it does need a little something from which to anchor. I've been just as vague, but <I>I</I> know what I mean!<BR/><BR/>Hey, I'm stoked that you're having another contest. I'm just catching up, and doing a poor job of it, but count me in (and, I predict, maybe sixty others).Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84859218668535002412007-04-11T13:44:00.000-04:002007-04-11T13:44:00.000-04:00I don't have much context for vampire stories but ...I don't have much context for vampire stories but I like the Bryn pieces you're doing here. <BR/><BR/>Mysterious and erotic, for sure. <BR/><BR/>I know these are vignettes and not pieces of a bigger work, but I find myself wanting you, as the writer, to give me a bit more placement within the scene - not sure exactly how, but perhaps more from inside Bryn's head, or Christopher's, or both.<BR/><BR/>What's here is wonderful. It's just that I want to know more about how to weigh it, if that makes sense.<BR/><BR/>:)billiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18187141867284800597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51352482370704968452007-04-11T00:36:00.000-04:002007-04-11T00:36:00.000-04:00Ooh. Spooky and sexy. I like this, Jason. Keep 'em...Ooh. Spooky and sexy. I like this, Jason. Keep 'em coming, so to speak.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.com