tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3022798172466072651..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #26Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22630279899583744592007-11-21T11:00:00.000-05:002007-11-21T11:00:00.000-05:00Very interesting character study. I liked the con...Very interesting character study. I liked the concept too. Clearly, a strong piece and a strong last line. Great mix of a unique idea with high technical skill.<BR/><BR/>Congratulations on winning 4th Place!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39939986897463320162007-11-19T14:31:00.000-05:002007-11-19T14:31:00.000-05:00Congrats on 4th place, Dottie! Yours was my favori...Congrats on 4th place, Dottie! <BR/><BR/>Yours was my favorite. :)Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42059468093288244662007-11-17T02:52:00.000-05:002007-11-17T02:52:00.000-05:00This was great, lol. No pretenses between these t...This was great, lol. No pretenses between these two.<BR/>An enjoyable read.rainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04258822737734173873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28524448430456431142007-11-15T11:36:00.000-05:002007-11-15T11:36:00.000-05:00I checked with my union rep., in the off chance I ...I checked with my union rep., in the off chance I two-peat on Clarity there is an exemption for compensation in the form of Amazon dollars. A little known loophole.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18947386715925666762007-11-15T00:28:00.000-05:002007-11-15T00:28:00.000-05:00Great writing but I bet a can benchpress more than...Great writing but I bet a can benchpress more than you. Ps - I thought you were striking this week. Does this qualify as crossing the picket line?Victor Bravo Monchego, Jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251479110131293284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46826334825980779452007-11-14T11:06:00.000-05:002007-11-14T11:06:00.000-05:00Brilliant! Love this! Aside from the genius use ...Brilliant! Love this! Aside from the genius use of allusion to great films, this portrays the complexity of intimate relationships. Sometimes having a conversation can be more intimidating than having sex. I've dated women as intimacy-challenged as Megan. Like the narrator, I was seduced by the mystery too.mendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18441022036761587358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83635834464011236762007-11-14T11:03:00.000-05:002007-11-14T11:03:00.000-05:00Wow. Maybe YOU sould be in movies. Or writing th...Wow. Maybe YOU sould be in movies. Or writing them, at least.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20545628966028639072007-11-13T19:11:00.000-05:002007-11-13T19:11:00.000-05:00Quirky and fun!Quirky and fun!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12229713161802232752007-11-13T09:40:00.000-05:002007-11-13T09:40:00.000-05:00Loved this one! The last line wrapped it up perfe...Loved this one! The last line wrapped it up perfectly!Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16390498012256520372007-11-12T21:19:00.000-05:002007-11-12T21:19:00.000-05:00Hi, dottie. Am new to Jason's blog. Didn't know yo...Hi, dottie. Am new to Jason's blog. Didn't know you already had a blog. Am off to check it out...<BR/>And even I liked the last line very much...pretty bold of you to write this story!Abhinavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15760314837510920601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26988752239267668412007-11-12T20:34:00.000-05:002007-11-12T20:34:00.000-05:00i also like the line about her shoulders in the em...i also like the line about her shoulders in the emergent sun. my favorite though is the last line. so telling of both characters at once.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86849753282342390312007-11-12T16:57:00.000-05:002007-11-12T16:57:00.000-05:00Try as I might whenever I attempt to write somethi...Try as I might whenever I attempt to write something bawdy or pornographic someone gets killed. It was nice to have both my characters be alive post coitus. Thank you for the feedback. I'm enjoying your works, too.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26603316918096569502007-11-12T14:10:00.000-05:002007-11-12T14:10:00.000-05:00The fact that I am not alone in finding The Talent...The fact that I am not alone in finding The Talented Mr. Ripley a wonderful thing makes me like this one even more.<BR/><BR/>I like that it's sexual without being bawdy or pornographic.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80876589417896398762007-11-12T13:55:00.000-05:002007-11-12T13:55:00.000-05:00Very playful, imaginative interpretation. I love h...Very playful, imaginative interpretation. I love how self-aware your characters are, and how you plucked film dialogue that really fit their banter. <BR/><BR/>This one feels really authentic to me. I loved it.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75619845641520487622007-11-12T12:42:00.000-05:002007-11-12T12:42:00.000-05:00I think you are the first to explore sensuality an...I think you are the first to explore sensuality and love alongwith the autumn leitmotif... Love it!!!<BR/>Her shoulders become one more form to hold the warmth of the emergent sun. Scintillating metaphor... Keep it up... And if you can, start a blog... I wanna read more of such arthouse stuff!!!Abhinavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15760314837510920601noreply@blogger.com