tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3270880112812766814..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #85Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74936721126321408082011-07-31T13:37:53.082-04:002011-07-31T13:37:53.082-04:00I want to think that the son somehow wants to sabo...I want to think that the son somehow wants to sabotage his dad, but maybe he just needed to dispose of the evidence. This was finely written. A high scorer!<br /><br />Congrats on Forties Club!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75913029052168122462011-07-25T19:15:33.096-04:002011-07-25T19:15:33.096-04:00Prashant- I love the humour of this piece. Your u...Prashant- I love the humour of this piece. Your use of language as the slow reveal of the situation through the man's internal dialogue was very nicely executed. Well done.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67919122734803521702011-07-24T11:26:55.592-04:002011-07-24T11:26:55.592-04:00Interesting scenario. I wish I knew more about Cyn...Interesting scenario. I wish I knew more about Cynthia; it may have shed more light onto the son's motives. Still, damn good flash.jrthumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14552633595464969740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34452348246091874712011-07-23T11:53:38.927-04:002011-07-23T11:53:38.927-04:00What a hoot! Thanks for the laugh. :-)What a hoot! Thanks for the laugh. :-)Richard Levangiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16596356126446766607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22741456536710817642011-07-23T11:36:05.263-04:002011-07-23T11:36:05.263-04:00Very funny. Thank you for sharing!Very funny. Thank you for sharing!Michele Zugnonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12394802719932859470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3430477445338637542011-07-22T19:45:09.541-04:002011-07-22T19:45:09.541-04:00Still laughing, and wondering if maybe Harry put t...Still laughing, and wondering if maybe Harry put the bra in the bag to get back at his father??<br /><br />It's all toooooo funny and I can see a very short movie in my head.<br /><br />Thank you!Rachelhttp://artsdaughter.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42491543664605773662011-07-22T18:25:15.820-04:002011-07-22T18:25:15.820-04:00I really enjoyed this - great ending! Who'd ha...I really enjoyed this - great ending! Who'd have thought a bra could be so fab! Thank you, take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35681168032709431112011-07-22T17:10:17.919-04:002011-07-22T17:10:17.919-04:00Neat :-)Neat :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13825570560268465992011-07-22T15:34:05.900-04:002011-07-22T15:34:05.900-04:00Funny twist in the plot! I wonder if Harry will be...Funny twist in the plot! I wonder if Harry will be the scapegoat... :) Well played! ~Jana A.bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32178975463571019022011-07-22T07:21:55.704-04:002011-07-22T07:21:55.704-04:00Ha! Clever!Ha! Clever!Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42153449212531395592011-07-21T19:22:11.106-04:002011-07-21T19:22:11.106-04:00I like how Harry plays into this and I didn't ...I like how Harry plays into this and I didn't expect that at the ending. A very clever way to tie this together to a nice closure.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52846371477154112982011-07-21T12:35:30.745-04:002011-07-21T12:35:30.745-04:00Funny, my boy ;)Funny, my boy ;)Tulipnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66605395244784067602011-07-21T06:29:33.005-04:002011-07-21T06:29:33.005-04:00I like that ending and the way it ties up all the ...I like that ending and the way it ties up all the ends.fairyhedgehoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25171072985049955352011-07-20T15:39:01.451-04:002011-07-20T15:39:01.451-04:00Haaaaaahahaha! Priceless. Now that was great! :)Haaaaaahahaha! Priceless. Now that was great! :)Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-92179570320841015212011-07-20T13:22:45.021-04:002011-07-20T13:22:45.021-04:00Good close. I don't understand the title. Why ...Good close. I don't understand the title. Why is it called "Demon"?Phil Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08261840720705703731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73998798293228470292011-07-20T08:06:36.915-04:002011-07-20T08:06:36.915-04:00LOL !
There are so many hidden funny possibilities...LOL !<br />There are so many hidden funny possibilities. What if the husband would have called Cynthia :D<br />How will he face her now having slept with her thing :DTonynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18957601865951046462011-07-20T07:17:07.267-04:002011-07-20T07:17:07.267-04:00*sees crowning moment of funny*
Mmmm...heehee*sees crowning moment of funny*<br />Mmmm...heeheeMysticonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29035659026003567192011-07-20T01:16:49.780-04:002011-07-20T01:16:49.780-04:00LOL, too cute and funny! But who's Cynthia and...LOL, too cute and funny! But who's Cynthia and why is she staying with them, lol? And how did Harry get the bra in the bags?<br /><br />Inquiring minds....<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90077729549011039152011-07-20T00:06:21.623-04:002011-07-20T00:06:21.623-04:00OH MY GOSH I laughed out loud. This is DARLING, I...OH MY GOSH I laughed out loud. This is DARLING, I love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85804510772538698742011-07-19T23:02:28.605-04:002011-07-19T23:02:28.605-04:00Thanks a lot Damyanti !
You never know these days ...Thanks a lot Damyanti !<br />You never know these days :). Please forgive it as an act of blatant creative liberty :).BrownPhantomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17727840657080964378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42892535781664997692011-07-19T21:28:18.688-04:002011-07-19T21:28:18.688-04:00This one made me laugh. So very well characterized...This one made me laugh. So very well characterized.<br /><br />I was just wondering tho if the receipt reaching a company accountant before the man checks out is normal. Usually, a hotel will work out the bill at check out, and only then can it be sent to the company accountant..won't he have the opportunity of getting the receipt corrected by the hotel before check out?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.com