tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3304073482274104391..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #58Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65094925491564534192008-03-06T10:05:00.000-05:002008-03-06T10:05:00.000-05:00I'm glad that she was able to pay attention to the...I'm glad that she was able to pay attention to the tree, despite her state of mind. I hope that she learned to see everything from a different perspective, and found a way to live in peace.<BR/><BR/>Very unique use of the tree. Good job!Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78027323293763507352008-03-04T16:43:00.000-05:002008-03-04T16:43:00.000-05:00A nice take on the suicide theme. I like the inde...A nice take on the suicide theme. I like the indecision. The changing of her mind.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74736331998410193142008-03-01T23:03:00.000-05:002008-03-01T23:03:00.000-05:00Loneliness and pain...a powerful pull. I, too, lov...Loneliness and pain...a powerful pull. I, too, love how the tree reminds her that there are many seasons to weather. At the end, I like how you've made her uncertainty paradoxically hopeful. Nicely crafted piece!bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27825029340889384922008-02-28T13:32:00.000-05:002008-02-28T13:32:00.000-05:00A sad and touchy subject for people yet you graspe...A sad and touchy subject for people yet you grasped the meaning of finding hope in a least expected way.. For one never knows what will inspire them and change the course of their path.Gnewveganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520769311192292611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-14484803367914962572008-02-28T09:18:00.000-05:002008-02-28T09:18:00.000-05:00A painful first part with the hopeful end, where t...A painful first part with the hopeful end, where the change to the character feels realistic.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54648035380904750732008-02-28T08:54:00.000-05:002008-02-28T08:54:00.000-05:00every time i read it i like it even more. I like t...every time i read it i like it even more. I like this rain of hope in the end :)<BR/>Beautiful as always :)Lenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787400183444796423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44005389890681566572008-02-28T08:27:00.000-05:002008-02-28T08:27:00.000-05:00Beautiful, poignant and ultimately hopeful writing...Beautiful, poignant and ultimately hopeful writing. Very well handled, Sameera, it's a very uplifting piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22975787097685156112008-02-28T03:00:00.000-05:002008-02-28T03:00:00.000-05:00A difficult subject, skillfully handled.Very good....A difficult subject, skillfully handled.<BR/>Very good.rainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04258822737734173873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82946651795332570502008-02-27T18:59:00.000-05:002008-02-27T18:59:00.000-05:00Wow. A living thing (besides a human) saves a huma...Wow. A living thing (besides a human) saves a human life! Very well done.wrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45352376082691573582008-02-27T16:39:00.000-05:002008-02-27T16:39:00.000-05:00When I learned she was a counselor (as my hubby is...When I learned she was a counselor (as my hubby is) I wondered at her own state of heart at considering suicide, so I really, really like the end in which she hesitates. Even if she proceeds, there's that little bit of who she is that pulls her the other way. Love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30399239955298400572008-02-27T15:33:00.000-05:002008-02-27T15:33:00.000-05:00The tree as savior. I really liked that. You did a...The tree as savior. I really liked that. You did a nice job of describing her torment here.<BR/><BR/>Very well written, too!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.com