tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3440309738770031875..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Forties Club Finalist #51Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66311936761272346352010-08-01T00:36:48.106-04:002010-08-01T00:36:48.106-04:00This felt a bit predictable, but I really like it ...This felt a bit predictable, but I really like it anyway. It's beautifully done!Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79972561110633659402010-07-31T21:31:15.610-04:002010-07-31T21:31:15.610-04:00Echoing the statements above, it had a very satisf...Echoing the statements above, it had a very satisfying, very classical ring to it. Though SkyGod's a bit of a creeper.<br />“Dance!” A voice commanded. (sorry, made me laugh!)<br /><br />Looks like Sophia's gonna need to find some other bride's maids.<br /><br />Verification: proode<br />Too funnyVincent Kalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04625863843215035035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40036765118618646452010-07-29T09:51:37.946-04:002010-07-29T09:51:37.946-04:00This read like a classic fable.
Now, call the ca...This read like a classic fable. <br /><br />Now, call the caterers and adjust the headcount;)Deb Smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10990130480508998598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65982579976371214512010-07-29T09:04:00.276-04:002010-07-29T09:04:00.276-04:00A very satisfying fable of the value of kindness o...A very satisfying fable of the value of kindness over vanity. <br /><br />But I have to say I wouldn't marry him unless I could have my sisters back. Arrogant @)^%!!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85888423688361428832010-07-29T03:50:55.239-04:002010-07-29T03:50:55.239-04:00This should be included in the school books! A lov...This should be included in the school books! A lovely tale to tell the kids.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27565142771627964662010-07-28T23:34:55.917-04:002010-07-28T23:34:55.917-04:00This does feel like a classic fairy tale. I like t...This does feel like a classic fairy tale. I like the tie in to the prompt and anti-feminist or not, I like that the Skygod tested for character over beauty. Even if he was a bit harsh.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73563225369300915972010-07-28T18:20:53.272-04:002010-07-28T18:20:53.272-04:00This pleases me.
I like the mythical feeling. A ...This pleases me.<br /><br />I like the mythical feeling. A really great tale.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18222388634651666482010-07-28T10:31:30.903-04:002010-07-28T10:31:30.903-04:00there is justice in old myths as well :)
the three...there is justice in old myths as well :)<br />the three sisters may be perfect ornaments, but the fourth is the one with a heart. :)SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65374305758725223112010-07-28T06:14:27.955-04:002010-07-28T06:14:27.955-04:00I love it when goodness is rewarded. It seems a bi...I love it when goodness is rewarded. It seems a bit hard on the other sisters, though.fairyhedgehoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2884940030782771352010-07-28T02:01:02.891-04:002010-07-28T02:01:02.891-04:00Hi C.
See, good girls always win. Lesson learned...Hi C.<br /><br />See, good girls always win. Lesson learned: don't think you know more than the SkyGod...<br /><br />Nice!!<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6619752730763319392010-07-27T23:37:29.846-04:002010-07-27T23:37:29.846-04:00Ohh! I have never read such a short fairy tale.I r...Ohh! I have never read such a short fairy tale.I really really liked it!<br />Those 3 sisters turning into jewels can have so many meanings!<br />I personally love happy endings n this was a hit:)Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1911681611346874552010-07-27T22:15:53.443-04:002010-07-27T22:15:53.443-04:00Nice fairy tale - I especially like how the jewels...Nice fairy tale - I especially like how the jewels are to be used.Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91696889299612376042010-07-27T21:44:05.359-04:002010-07-27T21:44:05.359-04:00My mom always said it was best not to be selfish. ...My mom always said it was best not to be selfish. :)Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54141860405273557172010-07-27T15:49:38.284-04:002010-07-27T15:49:38.284-04:00Aerin---while we're at it, her sisters' de...Aerin---while we're at it, her sisters' deaths might put a little downer on the wedding. <br /><br />It's has all the elements of a classic fairy tale.Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33030418838039438042010-07-27T14:46:37.392-04:002010-07-27T14:46:37.392-04:00Smart! I loved how this seemed like a Greek myth o...Smart! I loved how this seemed like a Greek myth or something..very enjoyable to read!Oddyoddyo13https://www.blogger.com/profile/05557994037779209704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28359161645089799182010-07-27T13:58:08.273-04:002010-07-27T13:58:08.273-04:00The feminist in me wants to whine "why does h...The feminist in me wants to whine "why does he get to choose?" but the romantic in me loves the bird nestled against her dress. *sigh*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60343729464078487832010-07-27T10:48:34.444-04:002010-07-27T10:48:34.444-04:00Pretty straightforward allegorical myth, competent...Pretty straightforward allegorical myth, competently written. It would have been somewhat less predictable, I think, if you had given Sky God a name.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.com