tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3821869523075758337..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #207Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42141884952454588432010-01-21T01:45:10.030-05:002010-01-21T01:45:10.030-05:00Great contest! Had a lot of fun taking part and re...Great contest! Had a lot of fun taking part and reading other writer's entries.<br /><br />Heartfelt thanks for your comments and suggestions!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21359320372646451722010-01-19T16:13:49.749-05:002010-01-19T16:13:49.749-05:00*laughs*
Excellent twist.*laughs*<br />Excellent twist.Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49072127087252733142010-01-19T14:49:20.612-05:002010-01-19T14:49:20.612-05:00Great visuals in the office there. Love the name ...Great visuals in the office there. Love the name of your Scot, he walks like a Scot and not like a Chinese man so the name must be a nick name? Funny take.catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-41501499097851556272010-01-19T12:04:11.203-05:002010-01-19T12:04:11.203-05:00Loved it :) made me smile :) You are so right it i...Loved it :) made me smile :) You are so right it is his moustache !Ragnanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46639010461787667162010-01-18T02:16:25.737-05:002010-01-18T02:16:25.737-05:00Very funny. Well done. And I love the Scotsman n...Very funny. Well done. And I love the Scotsman named Hong Po.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27122848058800095312010-01-17T16:13:36.619-05:002010-01-17T16:13:36.619-05:00That took skills. Enough said.That took skills. Enough said.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6847083790683781942010-01-17T13:53:25.704-05:002010-01-17T13:53:25.704-05:00Anton that bird really does look like Tom Sellek&#...Anton that bird really does look like Tom Sellek's tash. this is clever, hysterically funny and very well written. Well done.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25104905153693698572010-01-16T08:23:35.957-05:002010-01-16T08:23:35.957-05:00HAHAHAHA...
I cant stop laughing. This is incredi...HAHAHAHA...<br /><br />I cant stop laughing. This is incredibly clever. Oh my God. What have you gone and done with the prompt, man...??<br /><br />Hong Po...Scotsman... it was like being hit by a truck...??? i went.. "WHAAAAT???""" :-)))<br /><br />and the end... Oh Dear... !!!<br /><br />How i love this! :-)<br />Brilliant!!!Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-47884137223860608962010-01-15T23:37:44.990-05:002010-01-15T23:37:44.990-05:00Aniket is too young to remember Magnum PI....*sigh...Aniket is too young to remember Magnum PI....*sigh*...<br /><br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">Caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />The writing - it's light, playful, just really skillfully wrought<br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />Um. In the last paragraph, I'd probably put a comma after the Oh.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18456142260756696962010-01-15T16:15:35.725-05:002010-01-15T16:15:35.725-05:00Excellent Anton. Certainly a totally different ta...Excellent Anton. Certainly a totally different take on the picture. Top job, mate.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88628432283097813142010-01-15T16:07:01.203-05:002010-01-15T16:07:01.203-05:00Sooper dooper awesome! This is in my fab five for ...Sooper dooper awesome! This is in my fab five for sure!!Kartikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01067636999700672077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56179807169232910872010-01-15T13:15:00.936-05:002010-01-15T13:15:00.936-05:00Loved it! The Asian Scotsman cracked me up. Great ...Loved it! The Asian Scotsman cracked me up. Great interpretation of the pic.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00823616282284779390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36497497253175894022010-01-15T05:03:53.686-05:002010-01-15T05:03:53.686-05:00Well, now I at least know whose getting the reader...Well, now I at least know whose getting the readers choice award. Congratulations!<br /><br />Cracked me up good! I never much liked the guy, being a Chandler fan. ;)Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91596687482273314242010-01-14T15:27:49.681-05:002010-01-14T15:27:49.681-05:00lol... VERY well done, anton!
and the scotland-b...lol... VERY well done, anton! <br /><br />and the scotland-born chinese guy, priceless ;)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37869695764340725602010-01-14T15:02:50.385-05:002010-01-14T15:02:50.385-05:00Ha! We needed a good mustache story:)Ha! We needed a good mustache story:)Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38393871083605257432010-01-14T14:57:01.464-05:002010-01-14T14:57:01.464-05:00Man that was awesome...
yeah top 5 for sure.Man that was awesome...<br />yeah top 5 for sure.anuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02132426273901751481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80999240572332920992010-01-14T11:33:39.927-05:002010-01-14T11:33:39.927-05:00Absolutely the best interpretation of the image I ...Absolutely the best interpretation of the image I have read. I am still chuckling. But like the others, Hung Po being a Scotsman seems too much of a stretch even when used in the same story as Tom Selleck's mustache. Damn. I am still laughing.MRMacrumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46070452230426336362010-01-13T22:23:51.494-05:002010-01-13T22:23:51.494-05:00Very funny! Off to recheck the picture...Very funny! Off to recheck the picture...Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13297994724757736742010-01-13T22:22:32.717-05:002010-01-13T22:22:32.717-05:00What they said, but I can't identify the big S...What they said, but I can't identify the big Scotsman.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29250235309108793122010-01-13T20:28:55.152-05:002010-01-13T20:28:55.152-05:00HOLY SMOKES! This is fantastic. First of all. Is H...HOLY SMOKES! This is fantastic. First of all. Is Hong Po the BIG SCOTSMAN?<br /><br />I am weeping, <i>weeping</i>, I tell you, with laughter already. Then I get to the finale.<br /><br />Mr. Selleck's mustache?<br /><br />I am slain.<br /><br />Top five. No doubt. Uber-clever, evokes a genre and turns it on its ear. Down to the oriental Charlie Chan era step-and-fetch-it.<br /><br />Still a-snickering.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75922367539808000452010-01-13T19:48:18.172-05:002010-01-13T19:48:18.172-05:00So....I'm a huge Tom Selleck fan and this is v...So....I'm a huge Tom Selleck fan and this is very funny.<br /><br />AND<br /><br />I'm afraid people will overlook how /well/ this was written because of the humorous ending. The pacing, use of dialogue - skillful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17431439525553149782010-01-13T19:33:03.563-05:002010-01-13T19:33:03.563-05:00Sandra, I could hug you.. oh, come here!Sandra, I could hug you.. oh, come here!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59481581249184830202010-01-13T19:29:44.347-05:002010-01-13T19:29:44.347-05:00I had to go back and look at the picture. You'...I had to go back and look at the picture. You're right - its Tom Selleck's mustache! I'm still giggling.sandra seamanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09786095189231150008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51073489519510029052010-01-13T18:52:54.679-05:002010-01-13T18:52:54.679-05:00Very strong opening. You hooked me in the first pa...Very strong opening. You hooked me in the first paragraph; however, I was hoping for something other than a piece of Tom Selleck in the end (and I'm from Michigan). --JRAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com