tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4203721472721168233..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #40Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59404042650263770562009-07-24T19:50:21.116-04:002009-07-24T19:50:21.116-04:00Thank you everyone for your kind and supportive co...Thank you everyone for your kind and supportive comments. I love this place!Watters' Reflectionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11488158739599812590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52889124093152156912009-07-24T18:30:16.191-04:002009-07-24T18:30:16.191-04:00Nicie twist that he was the one doing the poisonin...Nicie twist that he was the one doing the poisoning! The sweet, sweet words seem so oily now. Well done!<br /><br />Welcome to The Forties Club!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77221346401439566632009-07-20T17:16:14.940-04:002009-07-20T17:16:14.940-04:00What I like best about this piece is the duplicity...What I like best about this piece is the duplicity - you reveal it well through both spoken and internal dialog.Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22017968351945087252009-07-19T09:57:02.784-04:002009-07-19T09:57:02.784-04:00Love it. Careful what you wish for....Love it. Careful what you wish for....rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84383624777029656242009-07-18T08:35:57.670-04:002009-07-18T08:35:57.670-04:00Donna i think this was a wonderful piece of writin...Donna i think this was a wonderful piece of writing. I loved the second voice. I actually think that you didn't need the last two lines at all. Her smirk tells the story just as effectively.<br /><br />And Aerin I love you!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88948473985189062542009-07-15T07:07:30.911-04:002009-07-15T07:07:30.911-04:00Oh good one! I love how you handled this - I wond...Oh good one! I love how you handled this - I wondered from the start if the "second voice" was his or hers - it worked really well, you knew something was up but you never knew quite what until the end. Really well handled!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70676986350728178192009-07-14T11:23:38.958-04:002009-07-14T11:23:38.958-04:00Saw this one coming a mile away, but I didn't ...Saw this one coming a mile away, but I didn't care because the contrast between his words and thoughts was so clever and amusing. I love the unapologetic derision and unfettered disgust he shows, and the words you use to illustrate it. (Hopefully this is not autobiographical!)<br /><br />LOL @Aerin. Well quoted!PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25094344865279341052009-07-14T09:12:34.864-04:002009-07-14T09:12:34.864-04:00Wow... what a pair. She had good instincts. :)Wow... what a pair. She had good instincts. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79733223067239286292009-07-13T12:46:32.520-04:002009-07-13T12:46:32.520-04:00Aha! You got me there! Excellent piece.Aha! You got me there! Excellent piece.Tessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233122532137654099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10044075206426168432009-07-12T18:37:50.945-04:002009-07-12T18:37:50.945-04:00Considering it's me who's put the pounds o...Considering it's me who's put the pounds on since getting married I'd better say nowt...;-)<br /><br /><br />A deserved fate I reckon...<br /><br /><br />Good stuff old bean<br /><br /><br /><br />Four DinnersThe Preachermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10224135811862587701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69391776125687024982009-07-11T12:43:20.212-04:002009-07-11T12:43:20.212-04:00*hee hee*
"you fell victim to one of the cla...*hee hee*<br /><br />"you fell victim to one of the classic blunders. The most famous is 'never get involved in a land war in Asia.' but only slightly less well known is this: 'never go in against a Sicilian when DEATH is on the line!'"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26371961856493157772009-07-11T12:05:02.534-04:002009-07-11T12:05:02.534-04:00love the twist...love the twist...laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43323838993294523682009-07-11T08:56:56.497-04:002009-07-11T08:56:56.497-04:00Nice job keeping up the suspense. I was hoping he...Nice job keeping up the suspense. I was hoping he would get his comeuppance.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351485314292761498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56424666156365163212009-07-11T08:10:50.828-04:002009-07-11T08:10:50.828-04:00I suspected what was coming, but nevertheless enjo...I suspected what was coming, but nevertheless enjoyed this one very much! Loved the internal dialogue!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30743970404922018202009-07-11T06:50:50.877-04:002009-07-11T06:50:50.877-04:00Looks to me they were just made for each other in ...Looks to me they were just made for each other in a weird twisted way. :)Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66393089264200528972009-07-11T06:35:57.742-04:002009-07-11T06:35:57.742-04:00Luckily she was a savvy one!Luckily she was a savvy one!Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81570925840993757892009-07-11T05:54:52.298-04:002009-07-11T05:54:52.298-04:00Cool, very well done
alexCool, very well done<br /><br />alexwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90059993711757608882009-07-11T00:47:25.102-04:002009-07-11T00:47:25.102-04:00Nice. The wife is quite efficient and level-headed...Nice. The wife is quite efficient and level-headed. If you choose to marry someone who is your intellectual superior you come out waaaaay ahead if you appreciate her mind when you get married.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30805245609772234752009-07-11T00:20:43.952-04:002009-07-11T00:20:43.952-04:00Nicely done. I hope the insurance covers accident...Nicely done. I hope the insurance covers accidental death.Merry Monteleonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09435956005780500310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51998490231062705792009-07-10T22:54:49.892-04:002009-07-10T22:54:49.892-04:00Careful what you plan for. Nice switch.Careful what you plan for. Nice switch.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.com