tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4539299655109935036..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #27Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62232885883653019072008-07-28T12:45:00.000-04:002008-07-28T12:45:00.000-04:00:D You know how vampires have been capturing my h...:D You know how vampires have been capturing my heart lately...<BR/><BR/>I absolutely loved the last two lines! The Clarity of Night crickets are cheering for you, Sarah!Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84651548792935714942008-07-24T16:40:00.000-04:002008-07-24T16:40:00.000-04:00Poetry, attitude, action, playfulness...what more ...Poetry, attitude, action, playfulness...what more can you want?? Tremendous scene. Tremendous writing. Highest marks.<BR/><BR/>Congratulations on First Place!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43063741340548137002008-07-21T21:52:00.000-04:002008-07-21T21:52:00.000-04:00as a buffy the vampire slayer fan i really loved t...as a buffy the vampire slayer fan i really loved this!Steve Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05298219742968828262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58554742513310102002008-07-20T15:58:00.000-04:002008-07-20T15:58:00.000-04:00Wow, a vampire! I did not see the coming. Love the...Wow, a vampire! I did not see the coming. <BR/><BR/>Love the story and the surprise endingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5656737444454501472008-07-19T14:36:00.000-04:002008-07-19T14:36:00.000-04:00Thanks again, everyone! I think I'm most elated to...Thanks again, everyone! <BR/><BR/>I think I'm most elated to have shocked Chris. ;)<BR/><BR/>I've had so much fun with this contest. Good luck to all!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60083690971245252122008-07-19T11:55:00.000-04:002008-07-19T11:55:00.000-04:00Well done."She licked her teeth."How, oh how, did ...Well done.<BR/><BR/>"She licked her teeth."<BR/><BR/>How, oh how, did he not see what was coming? Only vampires ever lick their teeth when flirting! Duh! :)Posol'stvo the Medvedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00573435137467134333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76948296862973786662008-07-19T10:40:00.000-04:002008-07-19T10:40:00.000-04:00Such lyrical prose. "The moon winked between her k...Such lyrical prose. "The moon winked between her knees" and "He kept his boots on" say so much in so few words. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43389746576092742502008-07-18T10:49:00.000-04:002008-07-18T10:49:00.000-04:00Absolutely fabulous. And you made me just love her...Absolutely fabulous. And you made me just love her! Dinner, a Harley and $200 - one smart lady. Loved it.Jeannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14664962648810401982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89828875420636672002008-07-17T15:53:00.000-04:002008-07-17T15:53:00.000-04:00is it a cop-out to say 'ditto' to all the above? ;...is it a cop-out to say 'ditto' to all the above? ; ) .. great story, great writing .. wow!<BR/>catherineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37951579538445633032008-07-17T13:42:00.000-04:002008-07-17T13:42:00.000-04:00bucking frilliant piece! WOW WOW WOW!!!bucking frilliant piece! WOW WOW WOW!!!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40909001400378761812008-07-17T06:15:00.000-04:002008-07-17T06:15:00.000-04:00Simply brilliant!Simply brilliant!Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79388871316895746572008-07-16T20:00:00.000-04:002008-07-16T20:00:00.000-04:00Entirely unexpected!! You and Quoibler have shocke...Entirely unexpected!! You and Quoibler have shocked me.<BR/><BR/>Very well done! A vamp with a harley and an attitude to kill. Love this!! Where will she go?Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34095271137079506742008-07-16T19:26:00.000-04:002008-07-16T19:26:00.000-04:00perfectly charming little beast, she ;)perfectly charming little beast, she ;)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32252530698022844842008-07-16T14:21:00.000-04:002008-07-16T14:21:00.000-04:00Beth is right... number one pick, for me at least....Beth is right... number one pick, for me at least. Very primal. I wonder how Mustang and Hummer fell for her bewitching ways. ;)<BR/><BR/>- Karlan T.Mr. Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16881870850519509380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71443514294754076632008-07-16T12:58:00.000-04:002008-07-16T12:58:00.000-04:00Brilliant, Sarah! You and vampires? Hmmm... :-)Do ...Brilliant, Sarah! You and vampires? Hmmm... :-)<BR/>Do I need to remind you that your words are superb?...Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75916275555459445492008-07-16T12:34:00.000-04:002008-07-16T12:34:00.000-04:00vampires scare me but this drew me in. I loved the...vampires scare me but this drew me in. I loved the title - (love Robert Frost) and instantly thought I might see woods. You painted so much more.<BR/>Great job.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15739817496344036952008-07-16T01:29:00.000-04:002008-07-16T01:29:00.000-04:00Applause. ;)Applause. ;)rainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04258822737734173873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11968599625352795762008-07-15T18:14:00.000-04:002008-07-15T18:14:00.000-04:00Oh. My. God. A real roller-coaster ride of vamp-h...Oh. My. God. A real roller-coaster ride of vamp-horror. This really grabs you by the balls (in my case metaphorically ;0)) and pulls you right with it. <BR/><BR/>Amazing Sarah - truly awesome.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22975225215725400412008-07-15T17:41:00.000-04:002008-07-15T17:41:00.000-04:00Wow, great dialogue and description of the surroun...Wow, great dialogue and description of the surroundings. Great job, Sarah!<BR/>*coming from someone who dislikes vampire stories*SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67174836189675679802008-07-15T14:56:00.000-04:002008-07-15T14:56:00.000-04:00Thanks, everyone! I'm lapping up your comments. :)...Thanks, everyone! I'm lapping up your comments. :)<BR/><BR/>And Beth--I imagine Frost would be a bit horrified at my co-opting his poem in this manner. ;) But it was a favorite of mine...and now my daughter likes it, too. <BR/><BR/>Thanks again!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72963552082239671552008-07-15T13:15:00.000-04:002008-07-15T13:15:00.000-04:00Sarah, I had to come back because I had to write t...Sarah, I had to come back because I had to write that Frost poem is one of my favorites. I recited it as just a wee child once upon a time and it was one of the few pieces of poetry that ever really hit me and stayed with me ... great use of the title.<BR/><BR/>And what Paul said above is exactly the same for me. Terrific lines.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81092082236224459812008-07-15T11:28:00.000-04:002008-07-15T11:28:00.000-04:00Very great Sarah. I particularly liked "The moon ...Very great Sarah. I particularly liked "The moon winked between her knees." and "And when her spiked teeth smiled into his flesh, the tips pointed six feet under. "<BR/><BR/>Very good work.<BR/><BR/>PaulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76403883078117616622008-07-15T01:05:00.000-04:002008-07-15T01:05:00.000-04:00Reminds me of a movie I saw long long ago at a dri...Reminds me of a movie I saw long long ago at a drive-in titled, "Werewolves on Wheels."JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26386485669244350192008-07-15T00:12:00.000-04:002008-07-15T00:12:00.000-04:00It's amazing - how can someone so sweet write a ch...It's amazing - how can someone so sweet write a character so dark and SCARY! Makes me glad I am a woman - don't seem to be her type to pray on... but then again, she's a vampire - she might not be so choosy! Well done Sarah, but I am not surprised. No matter the genre your special flare can always be seen.Sheri Perl-Oshinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08025716805041579831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25181582900192491492008-07-14T21:05:00.000-04:002008-07-14T21:05:00.000-04:00Ha! I love it! We'll have you writing urban fantas...Ha! I love it! We'll have you writing urban fantasy in no time, lady.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.com