tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4740568579058613976..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #163Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71738439070375378682010-01-23T00:44:04.830-05:002010-01-23T00:44:04.830-05:00I loved the Poe quotes, brings a whole new meaning...I loved the Poe quotes, brings a whole new meaning to the piece, loved it!<br /><br />Congrats on the H/M!<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56440737280721964012010-01-18T19:14:10.246-05:002010-01-18T19:14:10.246-05:00A strange mix, but highly effective! Love the nod ...A strange mix, but highly effective! Love the nod to Poe!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44709882049228760832010-01-17T19:09:43.812-05:002010-01-17T19:09:43.812-05:00my caveat
Something I Would Keep
Oooh, sensuous an...<br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">my caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />Oooh, sensuous and lightly erotic - without seeming trashy! Nice!<br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />I'm with JR - take out the quotes. I mean that in a good way - the piece is definitely strong without them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48373923217889010182010-01-17T14:31:34.836-05:002010-01-17T14:31:34.836-05:00Eeery! Well done!Eeery! Well done!Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26450554971617783882010-01-17T05:00:30.206-05:002010-01-17T05:00:30.206-05:00Phew...
my eyes widened and widened and in the en...Phew...<br /><br />my eyes widened and widened and in the end i was left gaping at the screen...right now im keying this comment in an absolutely dazed state...<br /><br />What was that???<br /><br />The entire para about her sitting..the postures, the reactions, the visuals, the quotes, OH MY GOD...<br /><br />BRILLIANT....Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63732047391931002832010-01-16T19:35:44.911-05:002010-01-16T19:35:44.911-05:00Wow. Nicely done. Very nicely done.
Still ponderi...Wow. Nicely done. Very nicely done.<br /><br />Still pondering it all...Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29848192508520597322010-01-16T09:51:32.168-05:002010-01-16T09:51:32.168-05:00And I keep asking myself - "why'd he go i...And I keep asking myself - "why'd he go in?"<br /><br />Lovely descriptive language here. I could picture her reclining in her boudoir tempting him in with such clarity.<br /><br />Very nicely written.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39329420934564839592010-01-15T12:38:29.794-05:002010-01-15T12:38:29.794-05:00lol @pete!
But yes, one can't help but drawn ...lol @pete!<br /><br />But yes, one can't help but drawn to such characters! Good job!Kartikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01067636999700672077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19473660106368282232010-01-14T17:21:37.895-05:002010-01-14T17:21:37.895-05:00Hard not to like an opening like that. Eerie and ...Hard not to like an opening like that. Eerie and creepy finish, though...PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11293306727094173252010-01-14T13:14:08.884-05:002010-01-14T13:14:08.884-05:00Yes, ditto all the above. You're going to have...Yes, ditto all the above. You're going to have a lot of hot and bothered readers:)Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72403884072370950002010-01-13T23:20:35.053-05:002010-01-13T23:20:35.053-05:00Good job.Good job.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5039380605351885702010-01-13T15:41:35.337-05:002010-01-13T15:41:35.337-05:00Very visual and sensual too. Very well written. Li...Very visual and sensual too. Very well written. Liked this one.lenahttp://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6208114050579965472010-01-13T10:57:09.364-05:002010-01-13T10:57:09.364-05:00Thom, this was very sensuous. I love sensuous hor...Thom, this was very sensuous. I love sensuous horror. I too, like the way you wove Poe into the action.peggyhttp://pegjet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-14258082460969166702010-01-13T08:40:26.502-05:002010-01-13T08:40:26.502-05:00We could not possibly have this contest without ha...We could not possibly have this contest without having a reference to this 'Poe'm Nice job. What is really creepy about this is that she is insane and he's going to sleep with that otherworldly thing that is inhabiting her. :-)catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70419679371293714192010-01-13T08:20:08.630-05:002010-01-13T08:20:08.630-05:00Hey Thom,
I enjoyed the integration of Poe’s word...Hey Thom, <br />I enjoyed the integration of Poe’s words with your own. This is nicely woven together, horror and sensual encounter. <br /> <br />-Tim <br />http://clarityofnight.blogspot.com/2010/01/entry-138.htmlTimothy P. Remphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04422296532550497806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67704085288233520052010-01-13T04:26:45.256-05:002010-01-13T04:26:45.256-05:00I like this one too. Very nice writing.I like this one too. Very nice writing.McKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18155568793279940132010-01-13T02:14:39.342-05:002010-01-13T02:14:39.342-05:00Me likes it! ;)
And I still fancy her. Not many ...Me likes it! ;)<br /><br /><br />And I still fancy her. Not many better ways to die out there than that. :D<br /><br />I loved the voice of the piece.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16318146373659269682010-01-12T22:51:51.155-05:002010-01-12T22:51:51.155-05:00Eeeeek... and there I was fancying her.Eeeeek... and there I was fancying her.kashersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62059639441850599332010-01-12T22:38:46.353-05:002010-01-12T22:38:46.353-05:00nicely done, thom!nicely done, thom!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-47047686948130054652010-01-12T20:26:16.930-05:002010-01-12T20:26:16.930-05:00Some strong descriptive elements.Some strong descriptive elements.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79683816851859732842010-01-12T19:27:25.740-05:002010-01-12T19:27:25.740-05:00oops, sorry, the above is from JR.oops, sorry, the above is from JR.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79604266938288522602010-01-12T19:26:39.570-05:002010-01-12T19:26:39.570-05:00Poe certainly was ahead of his time. Your opening...Poe certainly was ahead of his time. Your opening is very strong. I'm not so sure I'd've used the quotes. I think the story would be even more powerful without them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44896915661206648232010-01-12T18:44:35.047-05:002010-01-12T18:44:35.047-05:00YAY! I did Poe the last contest...glad to see he i...YAY! I did Poe the last contest...glad to see he is not forsaken.<br /><br />This was so well done. Sensual at first and then horrifying. Good work!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.com