tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4855726746695410591..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #10Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80749320888569971292007-04-30T21:17:00.000-04:002007-04-30T21:17:00.000-04:00Great voice! Very natural pacing and believable f...Great voice! Very natural pacing and believable feel. Also, good sense of detail and motion.<BR/><BR/>Very high scorer overall!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17167620136503816002007-04-28T15:11:00.000-04:002007-04-28T15:11:00.000-04:00Oh I love this story. Great last line. I can see...Oh I love this story. Great last line. <BR/><BR/>I can see hubby and I playing those roles... sigh... loving can and does get better the longer a couple is together. It was great to see that shown in a story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52952324792333235962007-04-27T19:22:00.000-04:002007-04-27T19:22:00.000-04:00I love seeing old people holding hands, touching e...I love seeing old people holding hands, touching each others' faces, etc. Very beautiful.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10802220891460532862007-04-27T19:21:00.000-04:002007-04-27T19:21:00.000-04:00:) You know, who ever said they were old people? I...:) You know, who ever said they were old people? I'm not a grandparent yet, but my sisters all are - youngest sis is 46 and has a couple of grandkids, 9 and 7.<BR/><BR/>Cute.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38467991028075061552007-04-27T00:51:00.000-04:002007-04-27T00:51:00.000-04:00This was a nicely written, humourous story that wa...This was a nicely written, humourous story that was quite a relief amidst all the darkness. Not that I didn't enjoy some of the dark tales, but it was nice to read a bit different take.The Wandering Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05404559867270050616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-4775920090399419552007-04-26T09:07:00.000-04:002007-04-26T09:07:00.000-04:00"Play it again, Sam!" -- is this appropriate?"Play it again, Sam!" -- is this appropriate?chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80737005236498618582007-04-25T06:28:00.000-04:002007-04-25T06:28:00.000-04:00oldies getting cozy!!Ok i don't wanna think about ...oldies getting cozy!!<BR/><BR/>Ok i don't wanna think about this....forceful words there.<BR/><BR/>Sex always works ;) a hint of sex works even better....he ha ha<BR/><BR/>NPallavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09597178864833810868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57832912103459942742007-04-25T02:25:00.000-04:002007-04-25T02:25:00.000-04:00"If they don't have ghosts like ours, too bad." LO..."If they don't have ghosts like ours, too bad." LOVED that line. Nice job<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53560345694275843552007-04-24T12:04:00.000-04:002007-04-24T12:04:00.000-04:00Blowing in the ear ... the telltale sign of old sc...Blowing in the ear ... the telltale sign of old school foreplay. Very cute!Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-856160795707242962007-04-23T13:19:00.000-04:002007-04-23T13:19:00.000-04:00Gramps still has the stuff! Nice surprise, as I o...Gramps still has the stuff! Nice surprise, as I of course assumed this was about young lovers.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69385021161850331092007-04-23T09:29:00.000-04:002007-04-23T09:29:00.000-04:00Go Granny! Fun story.Go Granny! Fun story.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7253551129476724422007-04-23T07:14:00.000-04:002007-04-23T07:14:00.000-04:00Sorry, the idea of him blowing in her ear as she b...Sorry, the idea of him blowing in her ear as she bends over the oven door does not work for me.<BR/>If he'd grabbed a cheek, now...<BR/>Still, it's a charming take.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43701344732924040502007-04-23T02:44:00.000-04:002007-04-23T02:44:00.000-04:00LOL - excellent - great idea!!LOL - excellent - great idea!!Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05943062466398436785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11982249928320577442007-04-22T23:33:00.000-04:002007-04-22T23:33:00.000-04:00I LOVE this!Nothing makes me happier than the thou...I LOVE this!<BR/><BR/>Nothing makes me happier than the thought of old people still being in love.<BR/><BR/>Playful and down to earth.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.com