tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4873490225708444907..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #87Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37783824774732685502009-07-27T07:56:16.262-04:002009-07-27T07:56:16.262-04:00Whimsical, paired with grotesque images. Certainl...Whimsical, paired with grotesque images. Certainly inventive. A style with a power of its own.<br /><br />High marks for pacing and technical elements.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56466136092326499132009-07-19T23:14:59.422-04:002009-07-19T23:14:59.422-04:00Laughing like crazy, as always. Great story Michel...Laughing like crazy, as always. Great story Michelle! Although, it does bring to mind some scary images...SkyeBluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05632644733590013321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80795212966195628952009-07-18T08:59:54.183-04:002009-07-18T08:59:54.183-04:00Loved it, Michelle! This is one I had to read a fe...Loved it, Michelle! This is one I had to read a few times just because I enjoyed it so.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10131239526298629332009-07-18T04:38:42.242-04:002009-07-18T04:38:42.242-04:00Michelle I'm tickled to death by your take. t...Michelle I'm tickled to death by your take. that last line was hysterical. I hope they have a good extractor fan in the loo - or a very big matchJaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8303670073653178552009-07-17T17:49:53.094-04:002009-07-17T17:49:53.094-04:00What incredibly clever and funny and ... did I alr...What incredibly clever and funny and ... did I already say clever?... writing! Love it!Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81770653433943135172009-07-17T09:38:22.265-04:002009-07-17T09:38:22.265-04:00Thanks, everyone, for your wonderful comments!Thanks, everyone, for your wonderful comments!Michelle H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10117937124348728578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59684288089507431602009-07-16T01:45:26.677-04:002009-07-16T01:45:26.677-04:00Gorgeous descriptions, using all the senses to ach...Gorgeous descriptions, using all the senses to achieve true Roald Dahl grotesqueness. Very amusing. I'm not sure I'd call the characters "engaging" so much as "morbidly fascinating."PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39667315297530184482009-07-15T21:48:19.858-04:002009-07-15T21:48:19.858-04:00THis is truly masterful writing!! I also didn'...THis is truly masterful writing!! I also didn't notice the rhymes at first, I was so caught up in the story. And OMG what a last line!!!<br />Very, very well written! Like a pro, for sure!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79951658474451841132009-07-15T21:40:45.010-04:002009-07-15T21:40:45.010-04:00MICHELLE! You're here!!! Good for you! Bad ...MICHELLE! You're here!!! Good for you! Bad for me, competition-wise, *sigh* You rock, woman.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74844820367228937002009-07-15T20:41:13.533-04:002009-07-15T20:41:13.533-04:00LOl! Tonnage of tax! I like the expression! :DLOl! Tonnage of tax! I like the expression! :DMonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08615034229525061880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9194525224846529032009-07-15T09:39:19.518-04:002009-07-15T09:39:19.518-04:00Thank you again, everyone!Thank you again, everyone!Michelle H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10117937124348728578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17355557110280573152009-07-15T09:32:59.702-04:002009-07-15T09:32:59.702-04:00Nice Rhyme too. :)Nice Rhyme too. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40268163362281378802009-07-14T19:30:17.210-04:002009-07-14T19:30:17.210-04:00Great! loved it!Great! loved it!Chris Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02843546323461336020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78165309511517873262009-07-14T11:54:15.090-04:002009-07-14T11:54:15.090-04:00The rhyming added a new dimension of humor. Cleve...The rhyming added a new dimension of humor. Clever.<br /><br />Am I the only person reminded of Muffy the Mouse from Today's Special?<br />Um, yeah, probably. Carry on.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62622981126117021492009-07-13T14:59:14.962-04:002009-07-13T14:59:14.962-04:00Great work, Michelle. Loved the rhythm and very w...Great work, Michelle. Loved the rhythm and very well-drawn characters... and like ello, I'm afraid to see what comes next :-)Merry Monteleonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09435956005780500310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57882008398573760512009-07-13T14:03:38.112-04:002009-07-13T14:03:38.112-04:00Wow. Love the rhymes! Clever, funny, horror-filled...Wow. Love the rhymes! Clever, funny, horror-filled, absurd, and altogether entrancing. Great stuff!Suldoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07778845367184916684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61706590339063446152009-07-13T10:47:20.579-04:002009-07-13T10:47:20.579-04:00Very clever writing and very enjoyable reading.
H...Very clever writing and very enjoyable reading.<br /><br />Having put on a pound or two over the last 20 years I will not let the wife read this...;-)<br /><br /><br /><br />Four DinnersThe Preachermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10224135811862587701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66761378816923908702009-07-13T10:27:48.094-04:002009-07-13T10:27:48.094-04:00*clap clap* Loved this, Michelle!*clap clap* Loved this, Michelle!Angie Ledbetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16407006980893727627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88297352293674858322009-07-13T10:19:07.235-04:002009-07-13T10:19:07.235-04:00Wonderful read. I also liked the rhymes and I coul...Wonderful read. I also liked the rhymes and I could picture the characters in my mind so clearly with your descriptions. Kudos Michelle.<br /><br />Stay well.Theresahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12667769917288382023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70997962166433621102009-07-13T09:55:54.195-04:002009-07-13T09:55:54.195-04:00Clever... clever piece of writing. The rhymes were...Clever... clever piece of writing. The rhymes were so masterfully placed that they never took the center-stage and yet played the most important part in maintaining a sweet flow of this not-so-sweet tale.<br /><br />Its a masterpiece.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55025824945080938772009-07-13T08:40:57.084-04:002009-07-13T08:40:57.084-04:00An unexpected twist. An highly enjoyable read.
al...An unexpected twist. An highly enjoyable read.<br /><br />alexwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9274288838474741552009-07-13T08:27:28.708-04:002009-07-13T08:27:28.708-04:00Thank you everyone! I wasn't out to have any l...Thank you everyone! I wasn't out to have any likable characters in this piece - just engaging ones.Michelle H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10117937124348728578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83500046886723673402009-07-13T07:43:44.561-04:002009-07-13T07:43:44.561-04:00very clever, michelle ;) lolvery clever, michelle ;) lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27475479954281707722009-07-13T07:24:19.429-04:002009-07-13T07:24:19.429-04:00Very clever...the word rhyme is amasterful touch!Very clever...the word rhyme is amasterful touch!Tessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233122532137654099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71013865089543331392009-07-13T07:20:00.139-04:002009-07-13T07:20:00.139-04:00What disgusting people if you'll forgive my ju...What disgusting people if you'll forgive my judgmental position. Great read tho, and like the others, love the last line.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.com