tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post5173985462641960489..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #60Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10932937017503607032008-07-24T17:12:00.000-04:002008-07-24T17:12:00.000-04:00So something a little unusual about that family, p...So something a little unusual about that family, perhaps? I like how she takes the mortal danger in stride. Like she's used to it. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52708159676912871002008-07-20T15:40:00.000-04:002008-07-20T15:40:00.000-04:00I hope they got home unharmed.Well done!I hope they got home unharmed.<BR/><BR/>Well done!Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46273925667210563972008-07-19T23:53:00.000-04:002008-07-19T23:53:00.000-04:00please expand this terrific tale...please expand this terrific tale...laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23752033635436844252008-07-18T03:20:00.000-04:002008-07-18T03:20:00.000-04:00AWESOME fantasy twist! fabulous!AWESOME fantasy twist! fabulous!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68182079281574698212008-07-17T22:37:00.000-04:002008-07-17T22:37:00.000-04:00I agree with the others. A terrific beginning. A n...I agree with the others. A terrific beginning. A nive vignette. I want to see what happens next!Posol'stvo the Medvedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00573435137467134333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46313199963361063572008-07-17T14:07:00.000-04:002008-07-17T14:07:00.000-04:00Charli, As always, wonderful writing. Are you sure...Charli, As always, wonderful writing. Are you sure you can't find time to work on this story? *g*Jordan Summershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00437563784716604402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82926833806069282222008-07-17T12:12:00.000-04:002008-07-17T12:12:00.000-04:00All right, I'm a dork, but I love that you're unsu...All right, I'm a dork, but I love that you're unsure whether Lee is a guy or girl.<BR/><BR/>Oh, yeah, and the writing's good and the twist is fantastic.<BR/><BR/>:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52362820710970817262008-07-17T09:05:00.000-04:002008-07-17T09:05:00.000-04:00Cool. I liked how that ended, with a beginning.Cool. I liked how that ended, with a beginning.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65892196431106660712008-07-17T07:43:00.000-04:002008-07-17T07:43:00.000-04:00Really great Charlene. Didn't see the monster ele...Really great Charlene. Didn't see the monster element coming at all. I also think that having the school bad boy ending up being the beacon of goodness was a nice touch.<BR/><BR/>Enjoyed it very much!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10028815835499799382008-07-17T03:32:00.000-04:002008-07-17T03:32:00.000-04:00Oh, verra, verra nice, Charlene!(gleefully rubbing...Oh, verra, verra nice, Charlene!(gleefully rubbing hands together)... ;)<BR/><BR/>Loved it, lol.<BR/>A ride with this guy sounds very interesting!rainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04258822737734173873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77046331904723234322008-07-17T02:44:00.000-04:002008-07-17T02:44:00.000-04:00mystery hill, bad boy, gargoyles...I want more too...mystery hill, bad boy, gargoyles...I want more too. <BR/><BR/>Nice work.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68198046741616200202008-07-17T00:49:00.000-04:002008-07-17T00:49:00.000-04:00I agree with Beth. Your dialogue's so good that I...I agree with Beth. Your dialogue's so good that I want to hear more.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19527032643365433042008-07-16T23:36:00.000-04:002008-07-16T23:36:00.000-04:00Gargoyles are supposed to be guardians against evi...Gargoyles are supposed to be guardians against evil, so is the main character evil? Yep, this one ended too soon.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73769052731743951722008-07-16T22:51:00.000-04:002008-07-16T22:51:00.000-04:00Oh. Now I want more. This is bad. This is very ba...Oh. Now I want more. This is bad. This is very bad. I can't have more and I want more. Why do I do this to myself?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20930288007972197092008-07-16T22:32:00.000-04:002008-07-16T22:32:00.000-04:00Cool! I never expected gargoyles.This story unfold...Cool! I never expected gargoyles.<BR/><BR/>This story unfolded nicely, and I really liked that you included a "bad boy" who was really the safest thing about the story. I hope he moves...<BR/><BR/>Strong storytelling with believable dialogue. Great work!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84448363665507425572008-07-16T22:22:00.000-04:002008-07-16T22:22:00.000-04:00Tightly plotted monster tale. Nicely done.Tightly plotted monster tale. Nicely done.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.com