tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post5387176318367311020..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #76Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32621563050330550322007-08-07T22:27:00.000-04:002007-08-07T22:27:00.000-04:00The naivete stings, because we know what her fate ...The naivete stings, because we know what her fate is. Of course, she must learn it herself. Well written.<BR/><BR/>High marks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42727004172241005412007-08-03T13:30:00.000-04:002007-08-03T13:30:00.000-04:00From the end of the first paragraph I kept worryin...From the end of the first paragraph I kept worrying for the protagonist. She's misguided and so vulnerable. Well written - it does come trhough.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34850904516008725902007-08-02T17:00:00.000-04:002007-08-02T17:00:00.000-04:00Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, I ...Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, I am glad you're enjoying it.<BR/><BR/>I'm still trying to read all the others. This is fun!tea and cakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05772019840779001852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89840555177041760652007-08-02T15:49:00.000-04:002007-08-02T15:49:00.000-04:00great characterization - a neat storygreat characterization - a neat storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62192848560503988122007-08-02T14:39:00.000-04:002007-08-02T14:39:00.000-04:00I'm #37 and wrote about virginity as well. Mine h...I'm #37 and wrote about virginity as well. Mine has the girl actually losing her virginity.<BR/><BR/>Spike made me think of Buffy the Vampire Slayer and since I love both, I really enjoyed this too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31450106566279486342007-08-02T10:38:00.000-04:002007-08-02T10:38:00.000-04:00Nice job. Makes me wonder how long she will end up...Nice job. Makes me wonder how long she will end up playing the 'if I (fill in the blank here) he will leave her and love me forever' game. A long time I am afraid.<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39023283958084192632007-08-02T09:35:00.000-04:002007-08-02T09:35:00.000-04:00Ditto what Katherine said :D Well done!!JLBDitto what Katherine said :D Well done!!<BR/><BR/>JLBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39575338177831222132007-08-02T03:19:00.000-04:002007-08-02T03:19:00.000-04:00wonderful! i love the emotional mixture!wonderful! i love the emotional mixture!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2886004202463851922007-08-02T02:53:00.000-04:002007-08-02T02:53:00.000-04:00What an emotionally strong story - I love the way ...What an emotionally strong story - I love the way you've captured innnocence through misguided rebellion. Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10333013020311673022007-08-02T01:26:00.000-04:002007-08-02T01:26:00.000-04:00I'm such a sucker for good pacing, and this has it...I'm such a sucker for good pacing, and this has it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48667078205079939982007-08-02T00:23:00.000-04:002007-08-02T00:23:00.000-04:00I like the mixture of innocence and rebellion. A ...I like the mixture of innocence and rebellion. A convoluted story that flows very well. Very nice job. Emotionally powerful.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.com